Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Definitely I do and my favorite thing in this life is gossiping in our school. Me and my girls nodding like gossip girls. We are gossip girls in real life. It is so gorgeous thing.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well generally I chat about my boyfriend, how he treats me and what's going in my school and I always wondering what happens in their school too. Umm I always ask my friends good things.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I only prefer to chat with a group only if we are a knowledge people each other. If we are not, I don't prefer to chat with a group of people. I only prefer one friend because I don't have to.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because it's better, it's more relaxed and I usually if I communicate on social media, I can't get what people want to say. But face to face, their experi expressions, it's so mean what they want to say.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
I argue with my friends only if they treated me bad. And I am a kind person and I always care about people, but if they don't care about me, my opinions etcetera. And I usually agree with my friends. Argue with my friends.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Cevabınız doğal ve samimi ancak bazı ifadeler anlam açısından net değil ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha açık ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, gereksiz tekrarlar ve anlamsal belirsizliklerden kaçının.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We often share stories and talk about our daily lives, which helps us stay connected and have fun together.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda konuyu doğrudan yanıtlamışsınız ancak cümle yapılarınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve belirsizlikler var. Daha spesifik ve akıcı ifadeler kullanarak cümlenizi geliştirebilirsiniz.
Ví dụ: Usually, I talk about my boyfriend and how he treats me. I also discuss school events and ask my friends about their experiences to stay updated.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Cümleniz anlam açısından karışık ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha açık ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak tercihlerinizi net bir şekilde ifade etmelisiniz.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group only if we know each other well. Otherwise, I like talking to just one friend because it's more comfortable.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda fikirlerinizi belirtiyorsunuz ancak bazı cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları var. Daha akıcı ve doğru ifadelerle düşüncelerinizi netleştirebilirsiniz.
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it's more relaxed and I can understand people's expressions better than through social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Duygularınızı ve durumları daha açık ve doğru cümlelerle ifade etmeye çalışın.
Ví dụ: I only argue with my friends if they treat me badly. Usually, I am kind and agree with them, but I stand up for myself when necessary.
× Me and my girls nodding like gossip girls.
✓ My girls and I are nodding like gossip girls.
The subject pronoun 'I' should be used instead of 'me' when it is the subject of the sentence. Also, the verb 'nodding' needs an auxiliary verb to form the present continuous tense.
× Me and my girls nodding like gossip girls.
✓ My girls and I are nodding like gossip girls.
The verb 'nodding' requires the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense correctly.
× It is so gorgeous thing.
✓ It is such a gorgeous thing.
The adjective 'gorgeous' needs to be preceded by 'such a' when modifying a singular countable noun.
× what's going in my school
✓ what's going on in my school
The correct preposition is 'on' after 'going' to indicate ongoing events.
× I always wondering what happens in their school too.
✓ I am always wondering what happens in their school too.
The verb 'wondering' requires the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense.
× I only prefer to chat with a group only if we are a knowledge people each other.
✓ I only prefer to chat with a group if we know each other well.
The phrase 'a knowledge people each other' is incorrect; 'know each other well' is the correct expression.
× If we are not, I don't prefer to chat with a group of people.
✓ If we don't, I don't prefer to chat with a group of people.
The pronoun 'we are not' is vague; 'we don't' refers back to 'know each other' and is clearer.
× I only prefer one friend because I don't have to.
✓ I only prefer one friend because I don't have to share.
The sentence is incomplete; adding 'share' clarifies the meaning.
× I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because it's better, it's more relaxed and I usually if I communicate on social media, I can't get what people want to say.
✓ I definitely prefer to communicate face to face because it's better, it's more relaxed, and usually, if I communicate on social media, I can't understand what people want to say.
The sentence needed commas for clarity and 'get' should be replaced with 'understand' for correctness.
× But face to face, their experi expressions, it's so mean what they want to say.
✓ But face to face, their expressions are so expressive and show what they want to say.
The phrase 'experi expressions' is incorrect; 'expressions are so expressive' conveys the intended meaning.
× I argue with my friends only if they treated me bad.
✓ I argue with my friends only if they treat me badly.
The verb tense should be present simple 'treat' to match 'I argue' and 'bad' should be the adverb 'badly'.
× I argue with my friends only if they treated me bad.
✓ I argue with my friends only if they treat me badly.
The adjective 'bad' should be the adverb 'badly' to modify the verb 'treat'.
× And I am a kind person and I always care about people, but if they don't care about me, my opinions etcetera.
✓ I am a kind person and always care about people, but if they don't care about me or my opinions, etc.,
The sentence was fragmented and needed restructuring for clarity and completeness.
× And I usually agree with my friends. Argue with my friends.
✓ I usually agree with my friends and rarely argue with them.
The sentence 'Argue with my friends.' is incomplete and needs to be connected properly.