Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Of course, I do enjoy chatting with my friend because it's a good way to know about each other's favorite scene and it's a good way to strengthen our friendship.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I chat with my friends about everything, including delicious food, a beautiful sights and so on. It's a it's a good way to share our daily life and it can help us strengthen our friendship.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think it's a good way to have deeper conversations. Be for example. If I have one to one I will know about more.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Actually I prefer to communicate face to face because it can talk more efficiency and can have a it can have a deeper talk. But sometimes if I have limited time I will choose social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Actually, I always don't argue with my friends because I think everyone has their own ideas. It's very common sense. We when we have different opinions we would change our minds to have deeper relationships.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和用词错误,如“favorite scene”应为“favorite things”或“interests”,且句子结构重复,建议简化表达并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us share our interests and strengthen our friendship.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“a beautiful sights”应为“beautiful sights”,且表达重复,建议使用连贯的连接词并避免重复。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about various topics, such as delicious food and beautiful sights, which helps us share our daily lives and maintain close relationships.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“Be for example”不合适,且句子不完整,建议使用完整句子并清晰表达观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a friend because it allows for deeper and more meaningful conversations.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,如“talk more efficiency”应为“communicate more effectively”,建议使用更自然的表达并注意句子流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more effective and allows for deeper conversations, but I use social media when I am short on time.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,如“It's very common sense”不合适,建议简化句子并明确表达观点。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because I respect their opinions, and I believe understanding different views helps strengthen our relationships.
× I do enjoy chatting with my friend because it's a good way to know about each other's favorite scene and it's a good way to strengthen our friendship.
✓ I do enjoy chatting with my friends because it's a good way to know about each other's favorite scenes and it's a good way to strengthen our friendship.
这里“friend”应为复数形式“friends”,因为通常我们会和多个朋友聊天;“favorite scene”也应为复数“favorite scenes”,表示每个人喜欢的不同场景。
× I chat with my friends about everything, including delicious food, a beautiful sights and so on.
✓ I chat with my friends about everything, including delicious food, beautiful sights and so on.
“a beautiful sights”中“sights”是复数,前面的冠词“a”应去掉,保持复数形式。
× It's a it's a good way to share our daily life and it can help us strengthen our friendship.
✓ It's a good way to share our daily life and it can help us strengthen our friendship.
句子中重复了“It's a”,应删除多余部分,使句子结构正确。
× Be for example.
✓ For example.
“Be for example”结构错误,应为“For example”表示举例。
× If I have one to one I will know about more.
✓ If I have one-to-one, I will know more.
“one to one”应写作“one-to-one”表示一对一;“know about more”表达不准确,改为“know more”更自然。
× Actually I prefer to communicate face to face because it can talk more efficiency and can have a it can have a deeper talk.
✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because it can be more efficient and can have a deeper talk.
“talk more efficiency”表达错误,应为“be more efficient”;句中多余“can have a”重复,应删除。
× Actually, I always don't argue with my friends because I think everyone has their own ideas.
✓ Actually, I don't always argue with my friends because I think everyone has their own ideas.
“always don't argue”语序错误,应为“don't always argue”,表示否定频率副词的位置。
× It's very common sense.
✓ It's common sense.
“common sense”是不可数名词,前面不加“very”。
× We when we have different opinions we would change our minds to have deeper relationships.
✓ When we have different opinions, we change our minds to have deeper relationships.
句子中“we when we”顺序错误,应去掉多余的“we”;“would change”时态不合适,改为一般现在时“change”;句中缺少逗号,需加以分隔。