Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“allowed me”应为“allows me”，“complicate throwing”表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达原因，避免复杂或错误的词汇。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a long and difficult day.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱，句子不连贯，且表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子，明确表达聊天内容，并用连接词使句子流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually chat about many things, such as school life, movies, or books I have recently enjoyed. These topics help us feel closer and strengthen our friendship.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达偏好，并说明原因，避免重复和口语填充词。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because I can share private things without feeling embarrassed. However, group chats are also enjoyable because there is always something to talk about.

Gợi ý: 回答中有口语填充词较多，表达稍显混乱。建议减少“uh”“umm”等词，使用更准确的表达，句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because we can observe nonverbal cues like facial expressions and body language, which help me feel more relaxed and connected with my friends.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议用简单句表达观点，注意主谓一致，避免重复和口语填充词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my best friends when we disagree on choices or actions. However, after these arguments, our relationship becomes stronger.

× Yes, of course, I like chatting with my friends because it's allowed me to feel relaxed and complicate throwing a long tough day.

✓ Yes, of course, I like chatting with my friends because it allows me to feel relaxed and forget about a long tough day.

这里的错误是情态动词用法不当，原句中使用了"it's allowed me"，应改为"it allows me"，因为主语是第三人称单数，动词应使用一般现在时的第三人称单数形式。并且"complicate throwing"表达不正确，应改为"forget about"来表达忘记困难的一天。

× Will a plenty of things I want to share with my friends.

✓ I have plenty of things I want to share with my friends.

这里的错误是单复数问题，"a plenty of"是不正确的表达，应去掉冠词"a"，并且句子缺少谓语动词，需补充"I have"。

× For example, we usually talk about the the school life of some movies or books I have recently been interested in that will make us more connected and good relationship.

✓ For example, we usually talk about the school life, some movies, or books I have recently been interested in, which make us more connected and build a good relationship.

这里的错误是冠词使用错误，重复使用了"the the"，应去掉一个"the"。另外，句子结构不清晰，需调整以表达更准确的意思。

× I prefer to chat with only one friend because it's allow me to talk a talk a lot of private things that I wouldn't be embarrassed.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because it allows me to talk a lot about private things without feeling embarrassed.

这里的错误是情态动词用法不当，"it's allow me"应改为"it allows me"，主语是第三人称单数，动词应使用一般现在时的第三人称单数形式。并且"talk a talk a lot of private things"表达重复且不正确，应改为"talk a lot about private things"。

× But, uh, a group of people, they always have something we can to talk, right?

✓ But, uh, a group of people always has something we can talk about, right?

这里的错误是情态动词用法和介词使用错误，"can to talk"应改为"can talk"，动词后不加"to"。另外，"have"应改为"has"，因为主语是单数"a group of people"。

× I prefer to communicate face to face, absolutely.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face, absolutely.

这里的错误是介词使用错误，"face to face"作为副词短语应连字符连接，改为"face-to-face"。

× While when we, umm, catch the people's face to talk, uh, we can mention the some nonverbal reaction such as the facial impression and the body language, and that will make me feel more relaxed and, uh, connected with my friends.

✓ When we, umm, see people's faces to talk, uh, we can notice some nonverbal reactions such as facial expressions and body language, and that makes me feel more relaxed and connected with my friends.

这里的错误是量词使用错误，"the some nonverbal reaction"应改为"some nonverbal reactions"，去掉多余的定冠词"the"，并且"facial impression"应改为"facial expressions"更符合表达。

× Yes, I usually argue with my best friends when we find something indifferent like we make a choice or do something I don't like or he don't like.

✓ Yes, I usually argue with my best friends when we find something different, like when we make a choice or do something I don't like or he doesn't like.

这里的错误是现在时态和主谓一致问题，"indifferent"用词不当，应改为"different"。"he don't like"应改为"he doesn't like"，主语是第三人称单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式。

× We already have argument but after the arguments, uh we still build a stronger relationship.

✓ We have already had arguments, but after the arguments, uh, we still build a stronger relationship.

这里的错误是过去时态问题，"already have argument"应改为"have already had arguments"，使用现在完成时表示过去发生的动作对现在的影响。