Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends. We often share our daily lives and the some new thing we met today and the food we drink and the the food we eat.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We really talk about our daily lives, our daily routines and some new things that happen around us. And sometimes we might talk about the clothes or some cosmetics that we want to share.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because sometimes one night I chat with a lot of people in a group which me which we which will makes me feel stressful, so I can't express my idea correctly and positively.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face face to face but now umm not other friends. We can't see every day or every month. So it's a better way to choose social social media to communicate.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, but not very often we really argue about some opinion about the about the society, like some news about this person, like we will discuss is this right or incorrect or what his opinion was she?
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our daily lives, new experiences, and the food we try.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为丰富,但连接词使用不足,句子衔接不够流畅。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about our daily lives and routines, as well as new things happening around us. Sometimes, we also discuss clothes or cosmetics that we want to share.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议简化句子,明确表达原因,并注意语法正确。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because group chats can be stressful, making it hard for me to express my ideas clearly.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词和语气词,表达不够流畅。建议去除多余词汇,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication, but since I can't see some friends often, social media is a better way to stay in touch.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱,表达不清晰,缺乏连贯性。建议简化句子,明确表达观点,并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, we sometimes argue about social issues, such as news about certain people. We discuss whether the information is right or wrong and share our opinions.
× We often share our daily lives and the some new thing we met today and the food we drink and the the food we eat.
✓ We often share our daily lives and some new things we met today, and the food we drink and the food we eat.
这里的'some new thing'应为复数形式'some new things',因为表示多个新事物。英语中单复数要对应,避免单复数错误。
× I prefer to chat with only one friend because sometimes one night I chat with a lot of people in a group which me which we which will makes me feel stressful, so I can't express my idea correctly and positively.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because sometimes at night I chat with a lot of people in a group, which makes me feel stressed, so I can't express my ideas correctly and positively.
原句中'which me which we which will makes me feel stressful'结构混乱,且'stressful'用错,应为'feel stressed'表示感到压力。'idea'应为复数形式'ideas',因为表达多个想法。
× sometimes one night I chat with a lot of people in a group which me which we which will makes me feel stressful
✓ sometimes at night I chat with a lot of people in a group, which makes me feel stressed
'one night'应改为'at night'表示在晚上,介词使用错误。
× which me which we which will makes me feel stressful
✓ which makes me feel stressed
原句中'which me which we which will'是错误的代词使用,应简化为'which'指代前面的内容。
× which will makes me feel stressful
✓ which makes me feel stressed
'makes'后面应接形容词'stressed'表示感受,而不是形容词'stressful',后者表示使人感到压力的。
× like we will discuss is this right or incorrect or what his opinion was she?
✓ like we will discuss whether this is right or wrong, or what his opinion was.
原句中'was she'用法错误,且句子结构混乱,应调整为'what his opinion was'。
× like some news about this person, like we will discuss is this right or incorrect or what his opinion was she?
✓ like some news about this person, we will discuss whether this is right or wrong, or what his opinion was.
'incorrect'用法不当,通常用'wrong'更自然;'is this right or incorrect'应改为'is this right or wrong'。
× I prefer to communicate face face to face but now umm not other friends.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face, but now, umm, not with other friends.
'not other friends'缺少介词'with',正确表达应为'not with other friends'。
× the food we drink and the the food we eat.
✓ the food we drink and the food we eat.
句中'the the'重复,应删除多余的'the'。