Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Definitely yes. For me chatting with my friends is the best part of a day because we can chat everything including problems, surprises or joy. It can help reduce my stress in workplace.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Actually, we often chat about everything, especially the problems we meet in our daily life and we will offer our suggestions to each other in order to help solve the problem or the difficulties.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I prefer to chat with only one friend, especially a close friend because I'm a kind of introverted person so it's hard for me to talk in front of a group of people about my secrets or something like that. But in front of a close friend it's much easier and I will feel comfort.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Actually, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face with a friend because face to face communication can help me grasp my friends changes in his or her emotion immediately. But the words on social media don't have the function, so I think I prefer the.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I seldom argue with my friends because I really don't like the tension which, uh, brings by the argument. I choose to solve the problem in a more tender way in order to make each of us comfortable and relaxed.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容相关,但句子结构稍显简单,且部分表达不够地道,如“chat everything”应改为“talk about everything”。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并注意句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: Definitely yes. For me, chatting with my friends is the best part of the day because we can talk about everything, including problems, surprises, or joys. It really helps me reduce stress from work.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,但句子较长且结构重复,缺少连接词使表达不够流畅。建议使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”来增强逻辑性,并简化句子结构。
Ví dụ: Actually, we often chat about everything, especially the problems we encounter in daily life. Therefore, we offer suggestions to each other to help solve these difficulties.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了个人偏好,但部分表达不够地道,如“I'm a kind of introverted person”应改为“I am quite introverted”。此外,句子较长,建议拆分并使用连接词提高流畅度。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer chatting with only one friend, especially a close one. Since I am quite introverted, it's hard for me to talk about my secrets in front of a group. However, with a close friend, I feel much more comfortable.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和表达不完整,如“my friends changes”应为“my friend's changes”,且最后一句不完整。建议注意语法准确性并完整表达观点。
Ví dụ: Actually, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face with a friend because it allows me to immediately grasp my friend's emotional changes. On the other hand, words on social media lack this function, so I prefer face-to-face communication.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容清晰,但存在语法错误,如“which, uh, brings by the argument”应为“which is brought by arguments”。建议注意语法准确性,避免口语填充词,提升表达流畅度。
Ví dụ: To be honest, I seldom argue with my friends because I don't like the tension that is brought by arguments. Instead, I prefer to solve problems in a gentle way to keep everyone comfortable and relaxed.
× For me chatting with my friends is the best part of a day because we can chat everything including problems, surprises or joy.
✓ For me, chatting with my friends is the best part of the day because we can chat about everything including problems, surprises, or joy.
这里缺少介词“about”,表示“聊天关于什么”,同时“a day”应改为“the day”,表示特指一天中的时间。
× we can chat everything including problems, surprises or joy.
✓ we can chat about everything including problems, surprises, or joy.
动词“chat”后面需要介词“about”来引出聊天的内容。
× It can help reduce my stress in workplace.
✓ It can help reduce my stress in the workplace.
“workplace”前需要加定冠词“the”,表示特定的工作场所。
× we often chat about everything, especially the problems we meet in our daily life and we will offer our suggestions to each other in order to help solve the problem or the difficulties.
✓ we often chat about everything, especially the problems we meet in our daily lives and we offer our suggestions to each other in order to help solve the problems or difficulties.
“daily life”应为复数形式“daily lives”,因为指的是每个人的日常生活;“problem”与“difficulties”应保持一致,均用复数形式。
× we will offer our suggestions to each other in order to help solve the problem or the difficulties.
✓ we will offer our suggestions to each other in order to help solve the problems or difficulties.
“the problem or the difficulties”中“the”使用不一致,应统一去掉或都加,且“problem”应为复数形式以匹配“difficulties”。
× I'm a kind of introverted person so it's hard for me to talk in front of a group of people about my secrets or something like that.
✓ I'm the kind of introverted person, so it's hard for me to talk in front of a group of people about my secrets or something like that.
“a kind of”后面通常接复数名词或用“the kind of”表示特定类型,这里应改为“the kind of”。
× But in front of a close friend it's much easier and I will feel comfort.
✓ But in front of a close friend it's much easier and I will feel comfortable.
“comfort”是名词,句中应使用形容词“comfortable”来修饰主语的感受。
× Actually, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face with a friend because face to face communication can help me grasp my friends changes in his or her emotion immediately.
✓ Actually, I definitely prefer to communicate face to face with a friend because face-to-face communication can help me grasp my friend's changes in his or her emotions immediately.
“face to face”作为形容词时应用连字符“face-to-face”;“friends changes”应为所有格“friend's changes”;“emotion”应为复数“emotions”,表示多种情绪变化。
× But the words on social media don't have the function, so I think I prefer the.
✓ But the words on social media don't have that function, so I think I prefer face-to-face communication.
句子不完整,“prefer the”后缺少宾语,应补充完整表达。
× I really don't like the tension which, uh, brings by the argument.
✓ I really don't like the tension which, uh, is brought by the argument.
“brings by”用法错误,正确被动语态应为“is brought by”。
× I choose to solve the problem in a more tender way in order to make each of us comfortable and relaxed.
✓ I choose to solve the problem in a gentler way in order to make each of us comfortable and relaxed.
“tender”通常形容人或情感,形容方式时应用“gentler”表示“更温和的”。