Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Definitely. I think I'm an active people and I have a lot of friends. Chatting with them make me feel connected with them.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We chat a lot, for example, which had our academic homeworks and our plans to eat after school and our shared inches.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, in my own opinion, I like to chat with only my friend. I think these types of chatting is more carefully and can really strong the test between us.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
It's really depends on my mood and the type of friends they belongs to. For my friends, they are more close to me. I like to communicate face to face, but if the things are not too much important, I like to talk to them via social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Well I think everyone will argue with their friends when they have different opinions. So do I, I will argue with my friends but it's not usually UMM. Our emotions and relationships are strong.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“I'm an active people”应为“I'm an active person”,以及“Chatting with them make me”应为“Chatting with them makes me”。建议注意主谓一致和单复数形式,同时回答可以更自然简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel connected and supported.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰,表达混乱,存在语法和词汇错误,如“which had our academic homeworks”和“shared inches”不明确。建议使用更具体和准确的词汇,表达清楚聊天内容。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about our homework, plans for after school, and common interests like movies or sports.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“these types of chatting is”应为“this type of chatting is”,“can really strong the test”表达不准确。建议注意主谓一致和词汇搭配,表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for more meaningful and focused conversations, which strengthens our relationship.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“It’s really depends”应为“It really depends”,“friends they belongs to”表达不准确。建议注意语法和表达的准确性,同时使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: It really depends on my mood and the friend. For close friends, I prefer face-to-face communication, but for less important matters, I use social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够流畅,存在语法和用词错误,如“it's not usually UMM”不明确。建议使用更清晰的表达,避免口头语,增强回答的连贯性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions, but our strong relationship helps us resolve conflicts quickly.
× I think I'm an active people and I have a lot of friends.
✓ I think I'm an active person and I have a lot of friends.
people是复数形式,前面用的是单数不定冠词an,应该用单数形式person。
× Chatting with them make me feel connected with them.
✓ Chatting with them makes me feel connected with them.
主语是单数的动名词短语Chatting,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式makes。
× We chat a lot, for example, which had our academic homeworks and our plans to eat after school and our shared inches.
✓ We chat a lot, for example, about our academic homework, our plans to eat after school, and our shared interests.
句子结构混乱,which had用法错误,homeworks应为不可数名词homework,inches应为interests。需要调整句子结构和词汇。
× I like to chat with only my friend.
✓ I like to chat with only my friends.
表达喜欢和朋友聊天,friends应为复数形式。
× I think these types of chatting is more carefully and can really strong the test between us.
✓ I think these types of chatting are more careful and can really strengthen the trust between us.
types为复数,谓语动词应使用复数are;carefully是副词,应改为形容词careful;strong是形容词,应改为动词strengthen;test应为trust。
× It's really depends on my mood and the type of friends they belongs to.
✓ It really depends on my mood and the type of friends they belong to.
It后不需要助动词is;belongs应为复数形式belong,因为主语是they。
× For my friends, they are more close to me.
✓ For my friends, they are closer to me.
close是形容词,比较级应为closer。
× I like to communicate face to face, but if the things are not too much important, I like to talk to them via social media.
✓ I like to communicate face to face, but if the things are not too important, I like to talk to them via social media.
too much important用法错误,important是形容词,前面不需要much,直接用too important。
× Well I think everyone will argue with their friends when they have different opinions.
✓ Well, I think everyone will argue with their friends when they have different opinions.
句首Well后应加逗号,改善句子结构。
× So do I, I will argue with my friends but it's not usually UMM.
✓ So do I. I will argue with my friends, but it's not usually often.
句子中So do I后应为句号分隔两个句子;UMM为口语填充词,应去除或替换;usually和often重复,保留usually即可。
× Our emotions and relationships are strong.
✓ Our emotions and relationships are strong.
该句无语法错误,无需修改。