Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, yes I do. I like chatting with friends because I don't like communicate with friends by callings because it is very nothing to speak in the case of calling.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Usually I talked about the games, so we play skins in, I did the Chinese games and we talked about characters and the gacha What what is very exciting.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I like talk with only one friends because I want to talk about deep communication with my friends so for example life and. Communication skills and so on so.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because. I think face to face is more against the main information about the first impressions and the.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
I don't argue with friends basically because I mean, I don't argue my opinions with other people. So I I often I often.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的な誤りが多いです。より自然な英語表現を使い、理由を明確に簡潔に述べる練習をしましょう。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I find it more comfortable than talking on the phone, where conversations can feel awkward.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 内容が不明瞭で文法も不正確です。話題を明確にし、具体的な詳細を整理して述べる練習をしましょう。
Ví dụ: Usually, I talk with my friends about video games, especially about characters and exciting features like the gacha system.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、内容が途切れています。文を完結させ、理由を具体的に述べる練習をしましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper conversations about life and communication skills.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 文が途中で終わっており、意味が伝わりにくいです。理由を明確にし、文を完結させる練習をしましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me understand first impressions and non-verbal cues better.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で繰り返しが多いです。簡潔に自分の意見を述べる練習をしましょう。
Ví dụ: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I prefer to respect their opinions and keep our relationship peaceful.
× I like chatting with friends because I don't like communicate with friends by callings because it is very nothing to speak in the case of calling.
✓ I like chatting with friends because I don't like communicating with friends by calling because there is nothing to say when calling.
動詞の後に動名詞を使う必要があります。'like'の後は動名詞(communicating)が正しいです。また、'callings'は不可算名詞の'calling'に修正し、'there is nothing to say'の表現に直しました。
× Usually I talked about the games, so we play skins in, I did the Chinese games and we talked about characters and the gacha What what is very exciting.
✓ Usually I talk about games, so we play skins in Chinese games and we talk about characters and the gacha, which is very exciting.
質問は現在の習慣についてなので、過去形の'talked'は現在形の'talk'に修正しました。また、文の構造を整理し、意味が通るようにしました。
× I like talk with only one friends because I want to talk about deep communication with my friends so for example life and. Communication skills and so on so.
✓ I like talking with only one friend because I want to have deep communication with my friend, for example about life and communication skills, and so on.
'like'の後は動名詞'talking'を使います。また、'friends'は単数の'friend'に修正し、文の意味を明確にしました。
× I prefer to communicate face to face because. I think face to face is more against the main information about the first impressions and the.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think face to face conveys the main information about first impressions better.
'against'は不適切な前置詞で、'conveys'などの動詞を使い意味を明確にしました。文の構造も整理しました。
× I don't argue with friends basically because I mean, I don't argue my opinions with other people. So I I often I often.
✓ I don't usually argue with friends because I mean, I don't argue my opinions with other people.
'basically'は'usually'に置き換え、'I I often I often'の重複を削除しました。現在形の使用は適切です。