Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'They are make me feel' nên là 'They make me feel'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần lặp lại, bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend. They make me feel happy and relaxed, and I often learn new things from them.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn, ví dụ 'full subject music' không rõ nghĩa. Câu trả lời cũng cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Ví dụ: I usually chat about our favorite topics like music and sports because these subjects make me happy and help us understand each other better.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng, ví dụ 'they know me, clearly they can We can share' gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên luyện tập cách nối câu và sử dụng đại từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just my best friend because they know me well, and we can share many things without any problems that might happen in a group chat.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'there is very convenient' nên là 'it is very convenient'. Câu trả lời cũng nên ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn, sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because it is very convenient; we can talk anytime and anywhere, and it allows us to multitask.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, ví dụ 'every relationship have' nên là 'every relationship has', 'are after the after this' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng và sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but after that, I understand them better and our relationship becomes closer and happier.

× They are make me feel very happy, relax and I can learn many things from them.

✓ They make me feel very happy, relaxed and I can learn many things from them.

The phrase 'They are make' is incorrect because 'make' should not be preceded by 'are' here. Also, 'relax' should be 'relaxed' to correctly describe the feeling. The correct form is 'They make me feel very happy, relaxed...'. This fixes the singular/plural and adjective form issues.

× They are my whole life and I can I can be happy without chatting with them.

✓ They are my whole life and I cannot be happy without chatting with them.

The phrase 'I can I can be happy without chatting with them' is repetitive and incorrect. It should be 'I cannot be happy without chatting with them' to express inability. This corrects the modal verb usage and sentence clarity.

× Well, I usually chat about our favorite things such as full subject music or sports.

✓ Well, I usually chat about our favorite things such as music or sports.

The phrase 'full subject music' is incorrect and unclear. Removing 'full subject' clarifies the sentence. This corrects the incorrect use of prepositions and unnecessary words.

× They make me feel happy and we can know each other well.

✓ They make me feel happy and we can get to know each other well.

The phrase 'we can know each other well' is unnatural. The correct expression is 'we can get to know each other well' to indicate developing familiarity. This fixes the verb usage.

× While I prefer to chat with only my best friend because they know me, clearly they can We can share many things without any problem which can be caused if we chat in a group.

✓ I prefer to chat only with my best friend because he knows me clearly. We can share many things without any problems that might be caused if we chat in a group.

The pronoun 'they' is used for singular 'my best friend', which is incorrect. It should be 'he' or 'she' depending on gender. Also, sentence structure is improved for clarity. This corrects pronoun usage and sentence structure.

× While I prefer to communicate via social media because we can talk together anywhere, anytime in the day, there is very convenient and we also spend time on other things.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because we can talk together anywhere, anytime during the day. It is very convenient and we can also spend time on other things.

The use of 'While' at the beginning is unnecessary and confusing. Also, 'there is very convenient' is incorrect; it should be 'It is very convenient'. This corrects conjunction use and sentence structure.

× Oh yes, every relationship have their own argument but are after the after this I feel I can understand more about my friends and we are becoming more closer, become closer and green be happier together.

✓ Oh yes, every relationship has its own arguments but after this, I feel I can understand more about my friends and we are becoming closer and happier together.

'Every relationship have' should be 'every relationship has' to agree in number. 'Their own argument' should be 'its own arguments' to match singular 'relationship'. Also, sentence structure is corrected for clarity and grammar. This fixes subject-verb agreement and sentence structure.