Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo
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Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
I absolutely love chatting with my friends, Umm, talking to my friends represent uh, substantial amount of time in our regular day for me, as usually when I'm free, when I have some free time, I, I'm usually always talking with my friends on Discord or messenger or any other mode of, you know, communication.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, umm, when I call them, we usually talk about random stuff. It it's we don't, we don't really have any meaningful conversation. Moreover, I we can also share our any like out of the out any abnormal experiences we had or any funny experiences we had. That's about it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well I would say it depends on the type of conversation or it depends on what I'm I'm about to say. For example, if we're talking about random things, I would prefer it to be with a group of people as it always makes the experience more fun. I would suggest in my opinion. But if it's about something important or something secretive, I would rather talk to one person. A really gross a really close.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I think the answer to this question too also depends on the also depends on who I'm communicating with. If it's a close friend or a friend for example, I would rather talk to them face to face because I would love to meet them. But however, if for example I don't really like the person that I'm gonna communicate with or let's say I don't really know that person that well.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Oh, definitely. We argue all the time. I mean, I think that's a really important part of our friendships. We always have arguments, but we always make sure to make up later and.
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Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Apni answer e onek filler words use korchen ja natural flow ke komiye dey. Apnar uttor ke aro shoja o prabhabi korte, filler words komaben ebong sentence gulo ke shoja rakhben. Apni chesta korben proshner uttor direct dite ebong proyojone supporting details deben.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. Whenever I have free time, I usually talk to them through apps like Discord or Messenger. It helps me stay connected and share my daily experiences.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e kichu redundancy ache ebong filler words beshi. Apni chesta korben proshner uttor e specific details dite, ebong linking words babohar kore kotha gulo ke logically joraben. Ete uttor ta aro prabhabi hobe.
Ví dụ: Usually, we talk about random topics, but sometimes we share unusual or funny experiences we've had. For example, last week, I told them about a funny incident at school, which made everyone laugh.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e kichu language errors ache ebong kichu sentence incomplete mone hoy. Apni chesta korben proshner uttor e clear topic sentence dite, supporting details shongjog korte linking words babohar korben, ebong vocabulary ke shothik bhabe babohar korben.
Ví dụ: It depends on the topic. If it's casual talk, I prefer chatting with a group because it's more fun. However, for serious or private matters, I like to talk to one close friend.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 67.0Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e repetition ache ebong kichu sentence incomplete. Apni chesta korben uttor ke shoja, spostho ebong shangjogito korte linking words babohar korben. Vocabulary ke relevant rakhben ebong proshner uttor e shothik structure maintain korben.
Ví dụ: It depends on the person. For close friends, I prefer face-to-face communication because I enjoy meeting them. But if I don't know someone well, I might prefer social media to communicate.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Apnar uttor e sentence incomplete ache ebong kichu redundancy o filler words ache. Apni chesta korben uttor ke shoja, spostho ebong shangjogito korte linking words babohar korben. Sentence gulo ke complete rakhben ebong proshner uttor e specific details deben.
Ví dụ: Yes, we do argue sometimes, but I believe it's a normal part of friendship. We always resolve our differences quickly to maintain a good relationship.
Ngữ pháp
× talking to my friends represent uh, substantial amount of time in our regular day for me
✓ talking to my friends represents a substantial amount of time in our regular day for me
The verb 'represent' should be in third person singular form 'represents' to agree with the singular subject 'talking to my friends'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.
× represent uh, substantial amount of time in our regular day for me
✓ represents a substantial amount of time in our regular day for me
The phrase 'substantial amount of time' requires the indefinite article 'a' before 'substantial' to be grammatically correct.
× It it's we don't, we don't really have any meaningful conversation
✓ We don't really have any meaningful conversation
The phrase 'It it's' is redundant and incorrect. Removing it clarifies the sentence and maintains correct subject-verb agreement.
× Moreover, I we can also share our any like out of the out any abnormal experiences we had or any funny experiences we had
✓ Moreover, we can also share any abnormal experiences we had or any funny experiences we had
The pronoun 'I we' is incorrect and redundant. Using 'we' alone is appropriate here. Also, 'our any like out of the out any' is confusing and unnecessary; simplifying improves clarity.
× A really gross a really close
✓ A really close one
The phrase 'A really gross a really close' is incorrect and unclear. Likely intended to say 'a really close one' to describe a close friend.
× But however, if for example I don't really like the person that I'm gonna communicate with or let's say I don't really know that person that well
✓ However, if, for example, I don't really like the person that I'm going to communicate with or, let's say, I don't really know that person that well
Using both 'But' and 'however' together is redundant. Also, commas are needed around 'for example' and 'let's say' as parenthetical expressions. 'Gonna' should be replaced with 'going to' for formal speech.
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