Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Старайтесь избегать пауз и слов-паразитов, таких как "umm" и "uh". Формулируйте свои мысли более чётко и логично, используя связующие слова для плавного перехода между идеями.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends in my free time because it energizes me and helps maintain a positive attitude in our relationship.

Gợi ý: Используйте более точные и разнообразные слова, избегайте повторений. Также старайтесь строить предложения более грамотно и логично, используя связующие слова.

Ví dụ: We usually discuss the latest news and share our daily experiences. For instance, during my maternity leave, we often talk about baby care, which has strengthened our friendship.

Gợi ý: Избегайте повторяющихся слов-паразитов и старайтесь строить предложения более связно. Чётко выражайте свои мысли и используйте подходящие предлоги и формы слов.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on my mood and the situation. If I need support from many people, I prefer chatting in a group, but usually I chat with one friend.

Gợi ý: Работайте над грамматикой и лексикой, чтобы выражать мысли ясно и правильно. Используйте связующие слова для логичности и избегайте непонятных фраз.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me feel emotions better. However, social media also gives us the opportunity to stay connected with friends and relatives.

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные предлоги и избегайте тавтологии. Формулируйте предложения более грамотно и логично, чтобы ясно выражать свои мысли.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I disagree with someone's opinion, I try to discuss it with them, but I always try to express my opinion clearly.

× Yes, in my leisure time I text my friends, umm because it uh, gives me uh, full of energy and the opportunity to keep umm, our attitude, umm, with my friends umm also it enhance.

✓ Yes, in my leisure time I text my friends because it gives me full energy and the opportunity to keep a positive attitude with my friends; it also enhances it.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'full of energy' after 'gives me' which should be 'full energy' or 'gives me energy'. Also, 'it enhance' lacks the third person singular 's' ending. The phrase 'keep our attitude' is unclear and should be 'keep a positive attitude'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× Especially, we chat about latest news and share daily experiences. For example, according to my maternity leave, usually we talk about our babies caring, caring babies. I think it helped to increase our friendship.

✓ Especially, we chat about the latest news and share daily experiences. For example, during my maternity leave, we usually talk about caring for our babies. I think it helps to increase our friendship.

The phrase 'according to my maternity leave' is incorrect; 'during my maternity leave' is appropriate. 'Babies caring' is incorrect; it should be 'caring for our babies'. Also, 'latest news' requires the definite article 'the'. The tense 'helped' is changed to 'helps' to match the present habitual action.

× Uh, I think it depends on my mood and the situation. Uh, if I need umm, uh, supports of a lot of people, I try to chat on one group. Umm, uh, usually I chat my friend.

✓ Uh, I think it depends on my mood and the situation. Uh, if I need support from a lot of people, I try to chat in a group. Umm, uh, usually I chat with my friend.

The phrase 'supports of a lot of people' is incorrect; it should be 'support from a lot of people'. 'Chat on one group' should be 'chat in a group'. Also, 'chat my friend' requires the preposition 'with' to be correct.

× I found a face to face communication because it assist to feel our emotions and feelings. Bad social may but social media give to us opportunity has attitude with our relations or relatives.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us feel our emotions and feelings. Social media may be bad, but it gives us the opportunity to maintain relationships with our friends or relatives.

'I found a face to face communication' is incorrect; 'I prefer face-to-face communication' is better. 'It assist to feel' should be 'it helps us feel'. 'Bad social may but social media give to us opportunity has attitude with our relations or relatives' is unclear and grammatically incorrect; corrected to 'Social media may be bad, but it gives us the opportunity to maintain relationships with our friends or relatives.'

× It depends on situation. If I disagree with this opinion, I try to argue with that people person. Especially I try to keep my opinion on my way.

✓ It depends on the situation. If I disagree with someone's opinion, I try to argue with that person. Especially, I try to keep my opinion my way.

'Depends on situation' requires the definite article 'the situation'. 'Argue with that people person' is incorrect; it should be 'argue with that person'. 'Keep my opinion on my way' is better as 'keep my opinion my way' or 'stick to my opinion'.