Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、少し冗長で、文法的な誤りもあります。例えば、「it is good enough to speak English」は不自然で、「my English is good enough」などの表現が適切です。また、話の流れをスムーズにするために接続詞を使うと良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. However, since I am currently studying abroad in France, I have to communicate with them in English, which is a bit challenging for me. Therefore, I need to practice more to improve my English skills.

Gợi ý: 内容が少し不明瞭で、語彙の選択や文法に誤りがあります。例えば、「stress book」や「It seems condition」は意味が通じません。具体的で正確な語彙を使い、文を整理しましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually chat about various topics with my friends. For example, yesterday we discussed football, including the strategies, team performances, and we even predicted the outcome of the next match.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。例えば、「We enjoyed a typical topics」は不自然で、「We enjoy casual topics」などが適切です。文を簡潔にし、正しい文法を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I like both situations. When I chat with a group, we usually enjoy casual topics. However, when I talk with one friend, we discuss more serious subjects like family and the future.

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、言い回しが不自然で、繰り返しや曖昧な表現が多いです。例えば、「I prefer different area to communicate face to face」は不明瞭です。より明確で自然な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to see my friends' emotions clearly. However, sometimes I use social media, although it's harder to understand their feelings that way.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが目立ち、意味が少し分かりにくいです。例えば、「avoid to argue」ではなく「avoid arguing」が正しいです。また、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: No, I don't argue with my friends. I always try to avoid conflicts because if we have a disagreement, it might damage our relationship, and I want to keep our friendship strong.

× I usually talk about a lot of topics with my friends.

✓ I usually talk about many topics with my friends.

The phrase 'a lot of' is acceptable but 'many' is more appropriate for countable nouns like 'topics'. However, since 'a lot of' is not a grammar mistake per se, this is a stylistic suggestion rather than a strict correction.

× We talked about the stress book, the strategy and the teams.

✓ We talked about the stress, the book, the strategy, and the teams.

The original sentence lacks clarity and proper article usage. 'Stress book' is unclear; separating 'stress' and 'book' with commas clarifies the topics discussed. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× It seems condition.

✓ It seems conditional.

The phrase 'It seems condition' is grammatically incorrect. The adjective form 'conditional' should be used to describe the state or condition.

× Also we predict predict the next match.

✓ Also, we predict the next match.

The word 'predict' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the duplicate corrects the sentence.

× I like both situation when I chat with the with the group.

✓ I like both situations when I chat with the group.

The word 'situation' should be plural 'situations' because 'both' refers to two or more items. Also, 'with the with the group' contains a repeated phrase; removing the duplicate improves clarity.

× We enjoyed a typical topics but we chat one only one friend.

✓ We enjoy typical topics, but we chat with only one friend.

'Enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoy' to match the habitual action. 'A typical topics' is incorrect; 'typical topics' is correct without 'a'. Also, 'chat one only one friend' is incorrect; it should be 'chat with only one friend'.

× We talk about more serious topics like families and the future.

✓ We talk about more serious topics like family and the future.

'Families' is plural but in this context, 'family' as a general concept is more appropriate. 'Like' is correctly used here.

× I prefer different area to communicate face to face, some via social media because uh, if I talked by social media, I can't check, umm, my friends, uh, emotions and happiness.

✓ I prefer different ways to communicate face to face, sometimes via social media because, if I talk by social media, I can't check my friends' emotions and happiness.

'Different area' is incorrect; 'different ways' fits better. 'Some' should be 'sometimes'. 'If I talked' should be present tense 'if I talk' to match the habitual action. 'By social media' should be 'via social media'. Also, possessive form 'my friends' emotions' is needed.

× So it is a little bit difficult to feel.

✓ So it is a little bit difficult to feel them.

The verb 'feel' requires an object here to clarify what is difficult to feel, which is the emotions and happiness of friends.

× No I don't. I always try to avoid to argue with my friends because if the conflict between my friends happened, I can't bear the relationship again, so I have to avoid argued.

✓ No, I don't. I always try to avoid arguing with my friends because if a conflict happens between my friends, I can't bear the relationship again, so I have to avoid arguments.

'Avoid to argue' is incorrect; 'avoid' is followed by gerund 'arguing'. 'If the conflict between my friends happened' should be 'if a conflict happens between my friends' for correct tense and article usage. 'Avoid argued' is incorrect; it should be 'avoid arguments' or 'avoid arguing'.