Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢与朋友深入交谈的观点，但语法和表达不够自然，句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和单复数形式，并避免重复和口语填充词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we have deep conversations. It helps me relieve stress and solve many problems.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，词汇使用不准确。建议明确主题句，使用正确的词汇表达常聊的话题，并且避免拼写错误。

Ví dụ: We often talk about what dishes we can try next time. I usually have meals with my close friends, which helps strengthen our relationship.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了偏好，但语法和用词错误较多，句子不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，注意主谓一致和正确的词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one close friend because in a group, I often can't express my opinions clearly and it may lead to disputes. My close friend listens to me and gives good advice.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和口语填充词，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see others' facial expressions and understand their true feelings better.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，避免重复和错误的词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think no two people can get along perfectly. So, having disputes with close friends is normal, but it can sometimes hurt the relationship.

× Yes, I like chatting with friend, especially I like often chat some deeply, provide question with my friends that make me uh, reduce my pressure and can resolve a lot of problem for me.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends, especially I often like to chat deeply, provide questions with my friends that make me, uh, reduce my pressure and can resolve a lot of problems for me.

friend 应为复数 friends，因为这里指的是多个朋友；problem 应为复数 problems，因为指多个问题。

× Yes, I like chatting with friend, especially I like often chat some deeply, provide question with my friends that make me uh, reduce my pressure and can resolve a lot of problem for me.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends, especially I often like to chat deeply, provide questions with my friends that make me, uh, reduce my pressure and can resolve a lot of problems for me.

like 后面接动词时，通常用动词不定式 to do 或动名词 doing，这里应使用 to chat 或 chatting，且 often 应放在 like 之前。

× The frequency topic with my friend and I is that what dish that we can have next time.

✓ The frequent topic with my friend and me is what dish we can have next time.

friend 和 I 应改为 friend 和 me，因为作介词宾语；topic 应为单数，且频率形容词应为 frequent。

× The frequency topic with my friend and I is that what dish that we can have next time.

✓ The frequent topic with my friend and me is what dish we can have next time.

介词 with 后应使用宾格 me，而非主格 I。

× The frequency topic with my friend and I is that what dish that we can have next time.

✓ The frequent topic with my friend and me is what dish we can have next time.

frequency 是名词，需用形容词 frequent 来修饰 topic。

× I usually have a abandoned meal with my close friends that can strengthen our relationship.

✓ I usually have an abandoned meal with my close friends that can strengthen our relationship.

a 后面接以元音音素开头的单词 abandoned，应使用 an。

× I usually have a abandoned meal with my close friends that can strengthen our relationship.

✓ I usually have an abandoned meal with my close friends that can strengthen our relationship.

冠词 a 应改为 an，因为 abandoned 以元音音素开头。

× I prefer chat with my only one close friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with my only close friend.

prefer 后面应接动词不定式 to do，而非直接动词原形；only one close friend 应简化为 only close friend。

× I prefer chat with my only one close friend.

✓ I prefer to chat with my only close friend.

only one close friend 表达不自然，通常说 my only close friend。

× I don't like discussing with a group of people because in a group of people I can't give my own opinions and always someone will my opinions and we can have a dispute.

✓ I don't like discussing with a group of people because in a group I can't give my own opinions and someone will always oppose my opinions and we can have a dispute.

in a group of people 可简化为 in a group；always 应放在助动词后；will 后缺少动词 oppose。

× always someone will my opinions and we can have a dispute.

✓ someone will always oppose my opinions and we can have a dispute.

缺少动词 oppose，且语序错误，应为 someone will always oppose my opinions。

× But my friend, my closely friend can listen my wish point and give me some advice.

✓ But my friend, my close friend, can listen to my wishes and give me some advice.

closely 是副词，形容词应为 close；listen 后应接介词 to；wish point 表达不自然，改为 wishes。

× But my friend, my closely friend can listen my wish point and give me some advice.

✓ But my friend, my close friend, can listen to my wishes and give me some advice.

listen 后面应加介词 to。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because in a face to face, uh conversation, I can see the emotion expressed in uh, others face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because in a face-to-face conversation, I can see the emotions expressed in others' faces.

face to face 作形容词时应连字符 face-to-face；emotion 应为复数 emotions；others face 应为 others' faces，表示所有格。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because in a face to face, uh conversation, I can see the emotion expressed in uh, others face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because in a face-to-face conversation, I can see the emotions expressed in others' faces.

face-to-face conversation 前应加冠词 a。

× I can know uh what he's re really think about his insight.

✓ I can know what he really thinks about his insight.

he's re 是错误的缩写，应为 he；think 应为第三人称单数 thinks。

× I can know uh what he's re really think about his insight.

✓ I can know what he really thinks about his insight.

第三人称单数主语 he，谓语动词 think 应加 s 变为 thinks。

× Yes, I think I think no two people can totally capable in their get along with.

✓ Yes, I think no two people can totally get along well with each other.

capable 用法错误，应使用 get along with；their get along with 结构错误，应改为 get along well with each other。

× Yes, I think I think no two people can totally capable in their get along with.

✓ Yes, I think no two people can totally get along well with each other.

capable 后接介词是 of，不是 in；这里应使用短语 get along with。

× Yes, I think I think no two people can totally capable in their get along with.

✓ Yes, I think no two people can totally get along well with each other.

their 用法不当，应使用 each other 表示相互关系。

× So if you get some close relationship with someone, you mostly have some dispute but that can hurt your relationship.

✓ So if you have a close relationship with someone, you will mostly have some disputes but that can hurt your relationship.

get some close relationship 用法不自然，应为 have a close relationship；dispute 应为复数 disputes。

× So if you get some close relationship with someone, you mostly have some dispute but that can hurt your relationship.

✓ So if you have a close relationship with someone, you will mostly have some disputes but that can hurt your relationship.

表达将来可能性时，应使用情态动词 will。