Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I find myself chatting with my friends instead of just calling them with my phone, and I'm the type of person who prefers chatting.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We like to share with each other our daily life updates or just what tea had just happened and I like to send them some light hearted memes that I find very like funny.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
So chatting with group of friends it requires a lot more attention and thought than just chatting with your 1 friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Obviously, I prefer to communicate face by face, which allows me to understand the person I'm communicating more deep and well, and it can lead us to better decisions together.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
That happens very rare, but when that happens it means we under misunderstand each other at some point so we need to discuss it instead of argue it. And I'm type of person who prefer not to argue with friends or even strangers.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Та илүү тодорхой, шууд хариулт өгч, илүү байгалийн хэллэг ашиглах хэрэгтэй. Жишээ нь, "Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it feels more casual and convenient than calling."
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it feels more casual and convenient than calling.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Хариултаа илүү логик холбоотой, тодорхой болгох хэрэгтэй. "Tea" гэдэг үгийг илүү ойлгомжтойгоор тайлбарлах, үгсийн сонголтоо сайжруулах шаардлагатай.
Ví dụ: We usually chat about our daily life updates and share funny memes to lighten the mood.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Хариултаа илүү бүтээлч, дэлгэрэнгүй болгох хэрэгтэй. Холбоос үг ашиглан хоёр сонголтын ялгааг тайлбарлах нь зүйтэй.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for deeper conversations, whereas group chats require more attention to multiple people.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Хэллэгээ илүү байгалийн, товч тодорхой болгох хэрэгтэй. "More deep and well" гэх мэт үгсийг илүү зөв хэлбэрээр ашиглах шаардлагатай.
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me understand the other person better and make decisions together more effectively.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Хариултаа илүү грамматик зөв, товч тодорхой болгох хэрэгтэй. "Under misunderstand" гэдэг үгийг зөв хэлбэрээр солих шаардлагатай.
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with friends, but when misunderstandings happen, we prefer to discuss the issue calmly rather than argue.
× Yes, I find myself chatting with my friends instead of just calling them with my phone, and I'm the type of person who prefers chatting.
✓ Yes, I find myself chatting with my friends instead of just calling them on my phone, and I'm the type of person who prefers chatting.
The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used with 'phone'; the correct preposition is 'on' when referring to using a phone to call someone.
× We like to share with each other our daily life updates or just what tea had just happened and I like to send them some light hearted memes that I find very like funny.
✓ We like to share with each other our daily life updates or just what tea has just happened, and I like to send them some light-hearted memes that I find very funny.
The phrase 'tea had just happened' should be in present perfect tense 'tea has just happened' to indicate recent events. Also, 'light hearted' should be hyphenated as 'light-hearted'. The phrase 'very like funny' is incorrect; 'very funny' is correct.
× So chatting with group of friends it requires a lot more attention and thought than just chatting with your 1 friend.
✓ So chatting with a group of friends requires a lot more attention and thought than just chatting with your one friend.
The phrase 'group of friends' needs the article 'a' before it. Also, '1 friend' should be written as 'one friend' in formal speech.
× Obviously, I prefer to communicate face by face, which allows me to understand the person I'm communicating more deep and well, and it can lead us to better decisions together.
✓ Obviously, I prefer to communicate face to face, which allows me to understand the person I'm communicating with more deeply and well, and it can lead us to better decisions together.
The correct phrase is 'face to face' not 'face by face'. Also, 'communicating more deep and well' is incorrect; it should be 'communicating with more deeply and well' to use the adverb form and include the preposition 'with'.
× That happens very rare, but when that happens it means we under misunderstand each other at some point so we need to discuss it instead of argue it.
✓ That happens very rarely, but when that happens it means we misunderstand each other at some point, so we need to discuss it instead of argue about it.
'Very rare' should be the adverb 'very rarely' to modify 'happens'. 'Under misunderstand' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'misunderstand'. Also, 'argue it' should be 'argue about it' to use the correct preposition.
× And I'm type of person who prefer not to argue with friends or even strangers.
✓ And I'm the type of person who prefers not to argue with friends or even strangers.
The phrase 'I'm type of person' needs the article 'the'. Also, 'who prefer' should be 'who prefers' to agree with the singular subject 'type of person'.