Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do love chatting with my friends, especially when I feel tired or exhausted. For example, when I feel not happy. I would like to talk with my friends to like my hair down after a long school day.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat with my friends about my daily life and routine because sharing these details help us stay connected and for example, we often share funny stories from school or work together that makes us laugh together.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Actually, I enjoy chatting with both a group of people and just one friend because it depends on the situation. For example, when I talk with a group I feel I like hearing different opinions, but with one friend the conversations feels more personal.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I enjoy to communicate face to face because it's more practical and we don't have to stop the conversation due to the Internet connection. But in far or emergency situation I would like to talk in via social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I used to really argue with my friends, but certainly especially at my university, I have had some disagreements with them because of misunderstandings and different opinions. However, I hope to improve our relationships in the future.
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Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi thiếu tự nhiên và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng. Bạn nên tránh các câu ngắt quãng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn ý định của mình.
Ví dụ: Yes, I love chatting with my friends, especially when I feel tired or unhappy. Talking to them helps me relax and feel better after a long day at school.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ như 'together' nhiều lần. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng cung cấp các chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời sinh động và hấp dẫn.
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about my daily life and routines because sharing these details helps us stay connected. For instance, we often exchange funny stories from school or work, which always makes us laugh.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp như số ít và số nhiều ("conversations feels" nên là "conversation feels"). Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.
Ví dụ: Actually, I enjoy chatting with both groups and individual friends because it depends on the situation. For example, group chats allow me to hear different opinions, whereas one-on-one conversations feel more personal.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý cách dùng động từ ("enjoy to communicate" nên là "enjoy communicating") và cấu trúc câu cho tự nhiên hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.
Ví dụ: I enjoy communicating face-to-face because it's more practical and we don't have to worry about internet issues. However, in distant or emergency situations, I prefer to use social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có thể cải thiện bằng cách sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến cách dùng từ như "certainly" không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này.
Ví dụ: Yes, I have argued with my friends, especially at university, due to misunderstandings and different opinions. However, I hope to improve our relationships in the future.
Ngữ pháp
× For example, when I feel not happy.
✓ For example, when I do not feel happy.
The sentence lacks the auxiliary verb 'do' for negation in the present simple tense. In English, to make a negative statement in the present simple, we use 'do not' or 'does not' before the base verb. Here, 'feel' is the base verb, so 'do not feel' is correct.
× I would like to talk with my friends to like my hair down after a long school day.
✓ I would like to talk with my friends to let my hair down after a long school day.
The phrase 'to like my hair down' is incorrect. The correct idiom is 'to let my hair down,' which means to relax and enjoy oneself. The preposition 'like' is misused here; it should be 'let' as a verb.
× sharing these details help us stay connected
✓ sharing these details helps us stay connected
The subject 'sharing these details' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be singular 'helps' instead of 'help' to agree in number.
× we often share funny stories from school or work together that makes us laugh together.
✓ we often share funny stories from school or work together that make us laugh together.
The relative pronoun 'that' refers to 'funny stories' which is plural, so the verb should be plural 'make' instead of 'makes' to agree in number.
× the conversations feels more personal.
✓ the conversations feel more personal.
The subject 'conversations' is plural, so the verb should be plural 'feel' instead of 'feels' to agree in number.
× I enjoy to communicate face to face because it's more practical
✓ I enjoy communicating face to face because it's more practical
The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'to communicate' should be changed to 'communicating'.
× But in far or emergency situation I would like to talk in via social media.
✓ But in far or emergency situations I would like to talk via social media.
The phrase 'in far or emergency situation' is incorrect. It should be 'in far or emergency situations' (plural) and the preposition 'in' before 'via social media' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Talk via social media' is correct.
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