Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do like chatting with my best friends. We always talk about many issues such as sports like football teams, basketball teams or sports starts and sometimes we also focus on issues on politics.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I frequently chat with my friends on different issues and the first topic we'd like to talk about is sports. We often talk about which player is the best one and which team is going to win the final game. And we also like to talk about politics, like the relationships between countries.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends. Sometimes I prefer to chat with one people because it's more comfortable for me to get my ideas across. Well, under certain circumstances, I'd like to chat with a group of people because there are more thoughts, more perspectives to share.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends on the specific people I communicate with. For those people I familiar with and have a close relationship, I prefer to communicate with them face to face. When I have to communicate with some new friends, I prefer social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. Definitely. I argue with my friends. I think that most friends would argue with each other and real friends argue with each other. I frequently argue with my friends on different issues. We often argue about who is the best player in the league.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复表达,如“sports like football teams, basketball teams or sports starts”中“sports”重复出现。建议用更自然简洁的表达,并且注意拼写错误,如“starts”应为“stars”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my best friends. We often discuss various topics such as football and basketball teams, famous athletes, and sometimes political issues.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答结构较好,但连接词使用不够自然,如“And”开头的句子。建议使用更丰富的连接词使表达更连贯,同时增加具体细节。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about various topics. For instance, we often discuss sports, debating who the best player is and predicting which team will win the final game. Additionally, we sometimes talk about political relationships between countries.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“one people”应为“one person”。建议避免重复使用“well”,并用更自然的表达连接句子。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer chatting with one person because it's easier to express my ideas clearly. However, in other cases, I enjoy group conversations since they offer diverse opinions and perspectives.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 77.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“I familiar with”应为“I am familiar with”。建议使用更准确的语法结构,并避免重复“prefer”。
Ví dụ: It depends on who I'm communicating with. For close friends I am familiar with, I prefer face-to-face communication. However, when interacting with new acquaintances, I usually choose social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和冗余,如多次重复“argue with my friends”。建议简化表达,避免重复,并用更丰富的词汇和句式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do argue with my friends occasionally. I believe that disagreements are normal among friends, and we often debate topics like who the best player in the league is.
× We always talk about many issues such as sports like football teams, basketball teams or sports starts and sometimes we also focus on issues on politics.
✓ We always talk about many issues such as sports like football teams, basketball teams or sports stars and sometimes we also focus on issues on politics.
sports starts中的'starts'是拼写错误,正确应为'stars',表示运动明星。
× We always talk about many issues such as sports like football teams, basketball teams or sports starts and sometimes we also focus on issues on politics.
✓ We always talk about many issues such as sports like football teams, basketball teams or sports stars and sometimes we also focus on issues in politics.
在英语中,谈论某个领域的“问题”时,通常用介词'in'而不是'on',所以应为'issues in politics'。
× I frequently chat with my friends on different issues and the first topic we'd like to talk about is sports.
✓ I frequently chat with my friends about different issues and the first topic we'd like to talk about is sports.
动词'chat'后面通常搭配介词'about'表示谈论某事,'chat on'不合适。
× Sometimes I prefer to chat with one people because it's more comfortable for me to get my ideas across.
✓ Sometimes I prefer to chat with one person because it's more comfortable for me to get my ideas across.
'people'是复数,表示多人,'one'后应接单数名词,故应为'one person'。
× For those people I familiar with and have a close relationship, I prefer to communicate with them face to face.
✓ For those people I am familiar with and have a close relationship with, I prefer to communicate with them face to face.
缺少动词'am'导致句子结构不完整,且'close relationship'后应加介词'with'表示关系对象。