Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子较长且不够连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. For example, we often share interesting experiences and talk about the latest celebrity news, which gives us common topics to discuss.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，且内容重复。建议使用更准确的词汇，简洁表达，并注意句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about celebrity gossip and current news. For instance, in the morning, I share interesting experiences and discuss the latest celebrity news, which helps strengthen our friendship.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清晰，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because it's quieter and I can focus better on the conversation. Group chats are often noisy, which I don't enjoy.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议简化句子，注意冠词和介词的使用，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it's more convenient and I can see my friend's facial expressions, which helps us connect better during the conversation.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, these arguments help us understand each other better and strengthen our friendship.

× For example, I usually share my interesting experience and some updated gossip of celebrities with my friends and we have a common topic and literally make me feel.

✓ For example, I usually share my interesting experiences and some updated gossip of celebrities with my friends, and we have common topics that literally make me feel happy.

句中“literally make me feel”缺少宾语，导致表达不完整。应补充宾语如“happy”使句子完整且意义明确。

× To be honest, I usually check about some gossip of celebrities and and update news with my friends.

✓ To be honest, I usually check some gossip about celebrities and updated news with my friends.

动词“check”后不应加介词“about”，应直接接宾语“some gossip about celebrities”。“and and”重复，应删除一个“and”。

× For example, in the morning I often share interesting experience and talk about the latest celebrity gossip, which gives us common topics or to discuss and strength our friendship this kind of course.

✓ For example, in the morning I often share interesting experiences and talk about the latest celebrity gossip, which gives us common topics to discuss and strengthens our friendship in this way.

“or to discuss”应改为“to discuss”，表示目的。“strength”应为动词第三人称单数“strengthens”，与主语“which”一致。短语“this kind of course”表达不当，改为“in this way”更自然。

× Moreover, I feel that a group of people will be too noisy and I don't worry like this atmosphere, I like the quiet.

✓ Moreover, I feel that a group of people will be too noisy and I don't like this atmosphere; I prefer quietness.

“I don't worry like this atmosphere”表达错误，应为“I don't like this atmosphere”。“I like the quiet”表达不自然，改为“I prefer quietness”更合适。

× To be honest, I prefer communicate face to face because I think it's more convenient and I can show my affection better because I can see the my friends face and emotion so that we can focus on our conversation better in this process.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to communicate face to face because I think it's more convenient and I can show my affection better since I can see my friend's face and emotions, so that we can focus on our conversation better during this process.

“prefer communicate”应为“prefer to communicate”，动词不定式用法。去掉多余的定冠词“the”在“my friends face”前，应为“my friend's face”。“emotion”应为复数“emotions”。

× Yes, actually sometimes I will argue with my friends because we have different opinions and thoughts on one problem or on one question, so we will argue with each other.

✓ Yes, actually sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions and thoughts on one problem or question, so we argue with each other.

此处描述习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时而非将来时“will argue”。

× In this process we know about the other thoughts and it really makes me feel connected and it really strengths our friendship I.

✓ In this process, we learn about each other's thoughts and it really makes me feel connected and really strengthens our friendship.

“know about the other thoughts”表达不准确，应为“learn about each other's thoughts”。“strengths”应为动词第三人称单数“strengthens”。句尾“I”多余，应删除。