Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually chatting with my friends during the meal or on the phone. I think exchange our perspectives can improve my mind and extend my mind.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We usually chat about the things we have been through today on the phone. Uh, we usually chat about the things we've been through the day worse or good.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with my one friend because I think my friend know me and he can give me some advice on my daily life. Moreover, we can exchange our minds and support each other emotionally. I think a group of.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate on social media because my friends and me often in different places, so we merely talk face to face.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. I think it's normal to have different opinions and a good argument can improve our our knowledge.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“usually chatting”应为“usually chat”。表达不够自然,且“improve my mind and extend my mind”重复且不准确。建议使用更地道的表达,并注意语法时态。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually chat with my friends during meals or on the phone. I think exchanging our perspectives helps broaden my understanding and improve my thinking.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复且表达不清晰,如“things we've been through the day worse or good”语法和表达不准确。建议简洁明了地表达内容,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about what happened during the day, whether good or bad, when we chat on the phone.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“my friend know me”应为“my friend knows me”,且最后一句不完整。建议完整表达观点,注意主谓一致,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because he knows me well and can give me advice on daily life. Moreover, we can share our thoughts and support each other emotionally.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“my friends and me often in different places”应为“my friends and I are often in different places”,且“merely talk face to face”表达不准确。建议使用正确的主格和更自然的表达。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate via social media because my friends and I are often in different places, so we rarely talk face to face.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但有重复词“our our”,且可以增加连接词使表达更流畅。建议注意细节,避免重复,并适当扩展内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. I think it's normal to have different opinions, and a good argument can help us learn from each other.
× Yes, I usually chatting with my friends during the meal or on the phone.
✓ Yes, I usually chat with my friends during the meal or on the phone.
动词后面不能直接接动名词形式,通常情态副词后面接动词原形。这里的usually后面应该接动词原形chat,而不是chatting。
× I think exchange our perspectives can improve my mind and extend my mind.
✓ I think exchanging our perspectives can improve and broaden my mind.
动词exchange需要用动名词形式exchanging作主语。且表达更自然应使用broaden替换extend,且避免重复my mind。
× Uh, we usually chat about the things we've been through the day worse or good.
✓ Uh, we usually chat about the things we've been through during the day, whether bad or good.
表达不完整且语序混乱,需加介词during the day,且用whether引导对比,bad和good形容词顺序调整。
× I prefer to chat with my one friend because I think my friend know me and he can give me some advice on my daily life.
✓ I prefer to chat with my one friend because I think my friend knows me and he can give me some advice on my daily life.
主语my friend是单数,谓语动词know应加-s变为knows,符合主谓一致。
× I think a group of.
✓ I think a group is better.
句子不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,需补充完整表达。
× I prefer to communicate on social media because my friends and me often in different places, so we merely talk face to face.
✓ I prefer to communicate on social media because my friends and I are often in different places, so we rarely talk face to face.
主格代词应为I而非me;缺少be动词are;merely用法不当,应为rarely表示频率。
× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. I think it's normal to have different opinions and a good argument can improve our our knowledge.
✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends. I think it's normal to have different opinions, and a good argument can improve our knowledge.
重复了our,且两个分句之间应加逗号连接,句子更通顺。