Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I very like chatting with my friends because it fills me, uh, relaxed. Uh, usually on weekends I go out, go for a walk with my friend and chat, chat with and chat and chat with.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
It depends on situation. For classmates, I will discuss the interesting school, work and homework tasks. For.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer select only one friend because chatting with a group of people they maybe pay attention to others events. I would like to share my secrets with my close friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communication in social media because I'm an introverted people. I would like stay at home lonely reading book or watching MO movie. Umm it's comfortable. It's it's I usually shame.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Not surely, I only have a patience with my friends. They are familiar relationship, they are under they they under. They understand secrets each other.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和重复表达,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,同时使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax. Usually, on weekends, I go for a walk with a friend and we have a nice conversation.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,建议完整回答问题,使用连贯的句子,并具体说明聊天内容。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. With my classmates, I usually talk about school, work, and homework assignments.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达有语法错误,建议使用正确的句子结构,并且用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, people might pay attention to other things. I like to share my secrets with a close friend.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 语法和词汇使用不准确,表达不连贯,建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇和语法,并清晰表达观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because I am an introvert. I like staying at home alone, reading books or watching movies. It feels comfortable for me.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法混乱,建议用简单明了的句子表达观点,并提供具体细节。
Ví dụ: I don't usually argue with my friends because we have a close relationship and understand each other well.
× Yes, I very like chatting with my friends because it fills me, uh, relaxed.
✓ Yes, I really like chatting with my friends because it makes me feel relaxed.
这里动词时态使用正确,但副词使用错误,'very like' 应改为 'really like',并且 'fills me relaxed' 结构不正确,应改为 'makes me feel relaxed'。
× Usually on weekends I go out, go for a walk with my friend and chat, chat with and chat and chat with.
✓ Usually on weekends I go out, go for a walk with my friends and chat.
'my friend' 应为复数形式 'my friends',因为通常是和多个朋友一起散步和聊天。
× It depends on situation.
✓ It depends on the situation.
缺少冠词 'the',正确表达应为 'depends on the situation'。
× For classmates, I will discuss the interesting school, work and homework tasks.
✓ For classmates, I will discuss interesting schoolwork and homework tasks.
'school' 应与 'work' 结合成复合名词 'schoolwork',且 'interesting' 应修饰 'schoolwork' 和 'homework tasks'。
× For.
✓ (此句不完整,建议删除或补充完整)
该句不完整,缺少谓语和宾语,无法表达完整意思。
× I prefer select only one friend because chatting with a group of people they maybe pay attention to others events.
✓ I prefer to select only one friend because when chatting with a group of people, they may pay attention to others' events.
缺少不定式 'to','maybe' 应为情态动词 'may','others events' 应为所有格 'others' events'。
× I prefer select only one friend because chatting with a group of people they maybe pay attention to others events.
✓ I prefer to select only one friend because when chatting with a group of people, they may pay attention to others' events.
句中 'they' 指代不明确,应加上连接词 'when' 使句子通顺。
× I would like to share my secrets with my close friend.
✓ I would like to share my secrets with my close friend.
此句无语法错误。
× I prefer to communication in social media because I'm an introverted people.
✓ I prefer to communicate on social media because I'm an introverted person.
'communication' 是名词,应改为动词 'communicate','in social media' 应改为 'on social media','people' 是复数,应改为单数 'person'。
× I would like stay at home lonely reading book or watching MO movie.
✓ I would like to stay at home alone reading books or watching movies.
缺少不定式 'to','lonely' 应为形容词 'alone','book' 应为复数 'books','MO movie' 可能是笔误,应为 'movies'。
× Umm it's comfortable. It's it's I usually shame.
✓ Umm, it's comfortable. I usually feel shy.
'shame' 是名词,表达害羞应使用形容词 'shy' 或动词短语 'feel shy'。
× Not surely, I only have a patience with my friends.
✓ Not really, I only have patience with my friends.
'Not surely' 用法错误,应为 'Not really','a patience' 中 'patience' 是不可数名词,不加冠词。
× They are familiar relationship, they are under they they under.
✓ They have a familiar relationship; they understand each other well.
原句结构混乱,缺少谓语,重复词语,应重组句子使其通顺。
× They understand secrets each other.
✓ They understand each other's secrets.
'each other' 应用所有格形式 'each other's' 来修饰 'secrets'。