Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
I don't like chatting with my friends 'cause I like stay alone and do my very thing, such as, uh, playing my iPhone or read some books. That's what I prefer to do.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
They talk about our friends, our boyfriends or the weather and what happened in our life. In our daily life. We talk about everything 'cause we are best friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer, I prefer talk with only one prison 'cause I said it before, I love to stay alone and I enjoy my personal timing. So I did not even talk to much to my friends. So if you let me choose, uh.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer communicate face to face, umm 'cause I don't always talk to people online, 'cause when I stay alone I just want to spend time with myself. So if I want to talk to someone, that means I have some some serious things to talk.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Uh, let me see, actually, I don't argue with my friends 'cause I am a peace. I I enjoy peace and love when we have some, umm, different opinion, we always talk and.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了个人喜好,但语法和用词不够准确,且句子结构较为简单。建议注意动词形式和连贯表达,例如使用正确的时态和连接词,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I don't enjoy chatting with friends very much because I prefer spending time alone doing my own things, such as playing games on my iPhone or reading books.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为丰富,但表达不够连贯,且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,并注意单复数和冠词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: We usually chat about our friends, our boyfriends, the weather, and events that happen in our daily lives because we are best friends.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在发音错误('prison'应为'person'),语法和表达不够准确。建议注意发音,使用正确的词汇和语法结构,避免重复和口语填充词。
Ví dụ: I prefer to talk with only one person because I enjoy being alone and value my personal time, so I don't often talk to many friends.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但有语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意句子结构,避免重复,并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I don't often talk to people online. When I am alone, I like to spend time by myself, so if I want to talk to someone, it usually means I have something serious to discuss.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,存在语法错误。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免口语填充词,使用完整句子。
Ví dụ: Actually, I don't argue with my friends because I am a peaceful person. When we have different opinions, we always discuss them calmly.
× I don't like chatting with my friends 'cause I like stay alone and do my very thing, such as, uh, playing my iPhone or read some books.
✓ I don't like chatting with my friends 'cause I like staying alone and doing my own things, such as, uh, playing on my iPhone or reading some books.
动词后面需要用动名词形式,表示喜欢做某事时,动词应加-ing形式。这里的like后面应接动名词staying和doing,而不是原形动词。
× I don't like chatting with my friends 'cause I like stay alone and do my very thing, such as, uh, playing my iPhone or read some books.
✓ I don't like chatting with my friends 'cause I like staying alone and doing my own things, such as, uh, playing on my iPhone or reading some books.
这里的my very thing用法不正确,应改为my own things,表示“我自己的事情”。
× They talk about our friends, our boyfriends or the weather and what happened in our life.
✓ They talk about our friends, our boyfriends, the weather, and what happened in our lives.
life应使用复数形式lives,因为指的是我们每个人的生活。
× We talk about everything 'cause we are best friend.
✓ We talk about everything 'cause we are best friends.
best friend应为复数形式best friends,因为主语是we,表示多个人。
× I prefer, I prefer talk with only one prison 'cause I said it before, I love to stay alone and I enjoy my personal timing.
✓ I prefer, I prefer talking with only one person 'cause I said it before, I love to stay alone and I enjoy my personal time.
prefer后面应接动名词talking,而不是原形动词talk。
× I prefer, I prefer talk with only one prison 'cause I said it before, I love to stay alone and I enjoy my personal timing.
✓ I prefer, I prefer talking with only one person 'cause I said it before, I love to stay alone and I enjoy my personal time.
prison是“监狱”,应改为person表示“人”;timing用法不当,应改为time表示“时间”。
× I prefer communicate face to face, umm 'cause I don't always talk to people online, 'cause when I stay alone I just want to spend time with myself.
✓ I prefer communicating face to face, umm 'cause I don't always talk to people online, 'cause when I stay alone I just want to spend time with myself.
prefer后面应接动名词communicating,而不是原形动词communicate。
× I prefer communicate face to face, umm 'cause I don't always talk to people online, 'cause when I stay alone I just want to spend time with myself.
✓ I prefer communicating face to face, umm 'cause I don't always talk to people online, 'cause when I stay alone I just want to spend time by myself.
spend time with myself用法不自然,通常说spend time by myself,表示独自度过时间。
× Uh, let me see, actually, I don't argue with my friends 'cause I am a peace.
✓ Uh, let me see, actually, I don't argue with my friends 'cause I am peaceful.
I am a peace结构错误,peace是不可数名词,形容词peaceful用来描述人的性格。
× I I enjoy peace and love when we have some, umm, different opinion, we always talk and.
✓ I enjoy peace and love. When we have some, umm, different opinions, we always talk it out.
句子结构不完整,需分成两句;opinion应为复数opinions;补充完整表达“我们总是沟通解决”。