Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
As I'm introverted, I don't like chatting with my friends and I don't have much friend too. If the people are very close to me or I the friend is very close to me, I like to chat. If there is any important talks or things in that reason only I want to chat but.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat about assignments or something in meaningful or important job or if I have to tell them something important or if there is anything important to tell or I have to complete my assignment then only I usually chat with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because if we chat in a group of people, everyone has their own opinion. So in a group of people many opinions will come and many questions will be arise. So I prefer to chat with only one friend.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because when when we communicate through social media, they can there can be misunderstanding, can be raised up or misunderstanding can be occurred between two persons. But if we talk face to face, every opinions would be decided, everything would be clear, there will.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I don't usually argue with friends, but if they come up with the argument things or misunderstanding or whatever the things to argue then only. But mostly I don't argue with my friends.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra sanga sambandhit shabda haru prayog garnu parcha. Tapai le introverted bhayeko kura bhannu bhayo tara sentence haru thap spashta ra sanga sambandhit huna parcha. Sentence haru lai thap sangathit ra prabhavit banau, jastai linking words ko prayog garnu.
Ví dụ: I am an introverted person, so I usually don't like chatting with many friends. However, if the person is very close to me, I enjoy chatting with them, especially when we have important things to discuss.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra sangathit bibaran haru sametnu parcha. Tapai le kehi kura haru barne bhayo tara sentence haru thap sangathit ra prabhavit banau. Linking words jastai 'usually', 'especially', 'because' ko prayog garnu.
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about assignments or important tasks. Especially, when I have something important to share or need help to complete my work, I communicate with them.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma thap sangathit ra prabhavit linking words ko prayog garnu parcha. Sentence haru lai thap natural ra prabhavit banau. Tapai le kehi kura haru barne bhayo tara sentence haru thap spashta ra sangathit huna parcha.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because in a group, many opinions arise, which can lead to confusion. Therefore, one-on-one conversations are clearer and more comfortable for me.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma sentence haru lai thap sangathit ra prabhavit banau. Repetition bata bachnu ra linking words jastai 'because', 'however' ko prayog garnu. Sentence haru lai pura ra spashta banau.
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can cause misunderstandings. However, when we talk in person, opinions are clearer and issues can be resolved more effectively.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra sangathit sentence haru prayog garnu. Repetition bata bachnu ra sentence haru lai natural ra prabhavit banau. Linking words jastai 'usually', 'however' ko prayog garnu.
Ví dụ: I usually don't argue with my friends. However, if there is a misunderstanding or a serious issue, sometimes arguments may happen, but they are rare.
× I don't have much friend too.
✓ I don't have many friends either.
The word 'friend' should be plural 'friends' because it refers to more than one person. Also, 'much' is used with uncountable nouns, while 'many' is used with countable nouns like 'friends'. 'Too' is better replaced with 'either' in negative sentences.
× If the people are very close to me or I the friend is very close to me, I like to chat.
✓ If the people are very close to me or if the friend is very close to me, I like to chat.
The phrase 'I the friend' is incorrect and should be 'if the friend'. Also, 'people' is plural and 'friend' is singular, so the sentence correctly contrasts plural and singular forms.
× If there is any important talks or things in that reason only I want to chat but.
✓ If there are any important talks or things, only then do I want to chat.
The sentence has incorrect conjunction use and sentence structure. 'Talks' is plural, so 'is' should be 'are'. The phrase 'in that reason' is unclear and removed for clarity. The sentence ends abruptly with 'but', which is unnecessary.
× I usually chat about assignments or something in meaningful or important job or if I have to tell them something important or if there is anything important to tell or I have to complete my assignment then only I usually chat with my friends.
✓ I usually chat about assignments or something meaningful or important related to my job, or if I have to tell them something important, or if there is anything important to tell, or if I have to complete my assignment; then only I usually chat with my friends.
The sentence is long and complex but the main issue is the use of 'in meaningful or important job' which should be 'meaningful or important related to my job'. Also, 'assignment' is singular but 'assignments' is plural earlier; both are acceptable depending on context.
× So in a group of people many opinions will come and many questions will be arise.
✓ So in a group of people, many opinions will come and many questions will arise.
The verb 'will be arise' is incorrect; 'arise' is an intransitive verb and does not use 'be' in future tense. Also, a comma is needed after 'people' for clarity.
× I prefer to communicate face to face because when when we communicate through social media, they can there can be misunderstanding, can be raised up or misunderstanding can be occurred between two persons.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when we communicate through social media, misunderstandings can arise or occur between two people.
The phrase 'can be misunderstanding' is incorrect; 'misunderstandings' is plural and should be the subject. 'Can be raised up' is unnatural; 'arise' or 'occur' is better. 'Misunderstanding can be occurred' is incorrect; 'occur' is intransitive and does not use 'be'. 'Two persons' is better as 'two people'.
× But if we talk face to face, every opinions would be decided, everything would be clear, there will.
✓ But if we talk face to face, every opinion would be decided, everything would be clear.
'Every opinions' is incorrect; 'every' is followed by singular noun 'opinion'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'there will', which is incomplete and should be removed.
× No, I don't usually argue with friends, but if they come up with the argument things or misunderstanding or whatever the things to argue then only.
✓ No, I don't usually argue with friends, but if they bring up arguments or misunderstandings, then only I argue.
The phrase 'come up with the argument things or misunderstanding or whatever the things to argue then only' is ungrammatical and unclear. It is corrected to a clearer and grammatically correct form. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed restructuring.