Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik, tetapi perlu lebih alami dan efektif. Hindari pengulangan dan kata-kata yang tidak perlu seperti 'Uh' dan 'Usually'. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih terstruktur dan jelas dengan menggabungkan ide secara logis.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share various topics, such as games or personal experiences, which makes our conversations interesting and enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang terstruktur dan agak membingungkan. Gunakan kalimat yang lebih jelas dan singkat, serta hindari informasi yang berlebihan seperti durasi pembicaraan yang tidak relevan. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih koheren.

Ví dụ: I usually chat about games because we both enjoy them. Sometimes, we spend hours discussing different strategies, which makes the conversation very fun and engaging.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan jelas, tetapi ada pengulangan dan kalimat yang kurang lengkap. Perbaiki struktur kalimat dan gunakan kata penghubung untuk membuat jawaban lebih lancar dan efektif.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one or two close friends because I am introverted. In large groups, I often feel overwhelmed and find it hard to focus, so I enjoy smaller, more intimate conversations.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda kurang lengkap dan ada kesalahan tata bahasa. Perbaiki kalimat agar lebih jelas dan lengkap, serta hindari kalimat yang menggantung. Gunakan kata penghubung untuk menjelaskan alasan Anda.

Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because it allows me to express many things at once and gives me time to think before responding, which makes the conversation more comfortable.

Gợi ý: Jawaban Anda sudah cukup baik dan jelas, tetapi ada beberapa kalimat yang kurang tepat dan tidak lengkap. Perbaiki tata bahasa dan gunakan kalimat yang lebih alami serta lengkap untuk menjelaskan contoh.

Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends. When disagreements happen, they are usually due to misunderstandings, which we quickly resolve by clarifying our points and moving on without making a big deal.

× Yes, I do like chatting with my buddy, it's a way to have a nice conversation with them especially I will talk about many things with him.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with my buddy; it's a way to have a nice conversation with him, especially since I talk about many things with him.

The pronoun 'them' is incorrect because 'buddy' is singular and masculine, so 'him' should be used consistently. Also, the sentence structure is improved by adding a semicolon and 'since' to clarify the reason.

× Usually. Uh, it can be a topic like a game or something like a personal information.

✓ Usually, it can be a topic like a game or something like personal information.

The article 'a' before 'personal information' is incorrect because 'information' is an uncountable noun and should not have 'a' before it.

× I usually talk about something like a game, you know when, what At one time we talk about game for a long, many time.

✓ I usually talk about things like games. You know, at one time we talked about a game for a long time, many times.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs to be split into clearer sentences with correct tense and plural forms. 'Game' should be plural 'games' when talking generally, and 'talk' should be past tense 'talked' for past events.

× It took probably like a 10 hour.

✓ It probably took about 10 hours.

The phrase 'a 10 hour' is incorrect; 'hour' should be plural 'hours' when referring to more than one. Also, 'probably like' is awkward; 'probably took about' is more natural.

× I prefer chatting with just one or two close friends because I am quite an introverted person.

✓ I prefer chatting with just one or two close friends because I am quite an introverted person.

This sentence is correct; no correction needed.

× When I talk to a large group, I often feel overwhelmed and find it difficult to talk with large group of people and kinda hard to focus on the conversation.

✓ When I talk to a large group, I often feel overwhelmed and find it difficult to talk with a large group of people and it's kind of hard to focus on the conversation.

The phrase 'large group of people' needs the article 'a' before it. Also, 'kinda' is informal; 'kind of' is more appropriate in formal speech. Adding 'it's' before 'kind of hard' improves sentence structure.

× That's why I enjoy.

✓ That's why I enjoy it.

The verb 'enjoy' requires an object; 'it' should be added to complete the sentence.

× I prefer to do a communication based on via social media because I can express many things at once and I can think for time to answer the question or responding and.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I can express many things at once and I have time to think before answering questions or responding.

The phrase 'do a communication based on via social media' is incorrect; 'communicate via social media' is correct. Also, 'think for time' is incorrect; 'have time to think' is correct. The sentence ending is incomplete and needs correction.

× Usually when we do have a disagreement on something, it's just because of a simple misunderstanding, so we quickly resolve it without making a big deal out of it.

✓ Usually, when we have a disagreement about something, it's just because of a simple misunderstanding, so we quickly resolve it without making a big deal out of it.

The preposition 'on' should be 'about' when referring to disagreements. Also, 'do have' is unnecessary; 'have' suffices.

× For example, if someone may interpret what I say, you just clarify and move on.

✓ For example, if someone misinterprets what I say, I just clarify and move on.

The pronoun 'you' is incorrect here; it should be 'I' to match the speaker's perspective. Also, 'may interpret' is better as 'misinterprets' to convey the intended meaning.

× Just not take it on high.

✓ I just don't take it too seriously.

The phrase 'take it on high' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'take it too seriously' to convey not getting upset over something.