Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friend very much. The main reason why I like it is because I feel very comfortable when chatting with my friends. Also, I think it it gives me a sense of supporting when my friend talk to me with their opinions.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat with my friend about daily life, for example things that happen during school time or during weekends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because I hate noise and you know when chat with a group of people it will make a lot of noise and that will make me uncomfortable.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because I think communicate via social media is inefficient and the main reason of this is because when communicate via social media there will be latency such as typing.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do argue with my friend because I believe there must be right or wrong in things, so when I hear something that's incorrect, I will argue with them.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有點重複,且語法上有些小錯誤。建議你可以更自然地表達,並避免重複使用相同的詞彙,例如將"friend"改為複數形式"friends",並修正語法錯誤。此外,可以用連接詞讓句子更流暢。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel comfortable and supported. When they share their opinions, I feel encouraged and understood.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 你的回答簡潔明瞭,但可以增加一些細節來豐富內容,例如具體描述你們聊的話題,並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about daily life, such as interesting events at school or fun activities we did over the weekend.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有點冗長且語法不夠正確。建議你使用更自然的表達方式,並避免口語化的片語如"you know",同時使用連接詞讓句子更有條理。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I dislike noisy environments, which often happen when talking in a group, making me feel uncomfortable.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表達了觀點,但語法和用詞需要改進。建議你使用正確的動詞形式和連接詞,並用更自然的方式說明原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can be inefficient due to delays like typing, which interrupt the flow of conversation.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答有點重複且語法不夠流暢。建議你用更自然的句型來表達你的想法,並用連接詞使句子更連貫。
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because I believe there are right and wrong answers, so I speak up when I hear something incorrect.
× Yes, I like chatting with my friend very much.
✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends very much.
The sentence uses 'my friend' (singular) but later refers to 'friends' (plural). To maintain consistency and match the context, 'friends' (plural) should be used here.
× Also, I think it it gives me a sense of supporting when my friend talk to me with their opinions.
✓ Also, I think it gives me a sense of support when my friends talk to me with their opinions.
'Supporting' is a verb form here but the noun 'support' is needed. Also, 'my friend' (singular) should be 'my friends' (plural) to agree with 'their opinions'. 'Talk' should be 'talks' if singular, but since 'friends' is plural, 'talk' is correct.
× I usually chat with my friend about daily life, for example things that happen during school time or during weekends.
✓ I usually chat with my friends about daily life, for example things that happen during school time or during weekends.
'My friend' (singular) should be 'my friends' (plural) to match the general context of chatting with multiple friends.
× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I hate noise and you know when chat with a group of people it will make a lot of noise and that will make me uncomfortable.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I hate noise and you know when chatting with a group of people it makes a lot of noise and that makes me uncomfortable.
The phrase 'when chat' is missing the gerund form 'chatting' to function as a noun phrase. Also, 'it will make' should be 'it makes' to maintain present tense consistency.
× I prefer to communicate face to face because I think communicate via social media is inefficient and the main reason of this is because when communicate via social media there will be latency such as typing.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I think communicating via social media is inefficient and the main reason for this is that when communicating via social media there is latency such as typing.
'Communicate' should be in gerund form 'communicating' to act as a noun. 'The main reason of this' should be 'the main reason for this'. Also, 'when communicate' should be 'when communicating'. 'There will be latency' is better as 'there is latency' for general statements.
× Yes, I do argue with my friend because I believe there must be right or wrong in things, so when I hear something that's incorrect, I will argue with them.
✓ Yes, I do argue with my friends because I believe there must be right or wrong in things, so when I hear something that's incorrect, I will argue with them.
'My friend' (singular) should be 'my friends' (plural) to agree with 'them' later in the sentence.