Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I particularly enjoy chatting with friends because in this process I feel very happy and relaxed, especially after a busy day. For example, on the weekend I usually share my interesting experience with my friends online, which really make me feel unwind and connected is also strength of friendship.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I usually share about my daily life with them which really make me feel happy and I want. Moreover, we also talk about some common and interesting topics such as sports and how to become beautiful. We also talk about some celebrities gossip which really.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think I can focus on our conversation better in this process. Moreover, the atmosphere is quiet and pleasant, which I really very enjoy and I think too much people will be so noisy and I don't worry like this.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see the other people's facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand their feelings better. For example, when we talk in person, is it there to express emotions naturally and avoid misunderstandings? Although social media is convenient, I think face to face communication is more effective.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, sometimes I have a argue with my friends because we have different opinions and thoughts on one problems. For example, we just how to deal with this problems, we will give the different ways so we will have argues.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议注意时态一致,避免冗长句子,使用更准确的词汇表达情感。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, on weekends, I often share interesting experiences with them online, which makes me feel connected and happy.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不完整且语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子,避免语法错误,并丰富细节使内容更具体。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about my daily life, which makes me happy. We also discuss common interests like sports, beauty tips, and celebrity gossip.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 表达有些重复且语法不准确。建议简化句子结构,注意语法正确性,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to focus better. The quiet and pleasant atmosphere helps me enjoy the conversation more, unlike noisy groups.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但存在语法和表达不够自然的问题。建议注意句子结构,避免疑问句中断陈述,提升表达流畅度。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand feelings better. This way, emotions are expressed naturally, reducing misunderstandings. Although social media is convenient, face-to-face is more effective.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误严重,表达不清晰。建议学习正确的句型结构,使用复数和单数形式,丰富细节并使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions on how to solve problems. For example, when we disagree on the best way to handle a situation, it can lead to arguments.
× For example, on the weekend I usually share my interesting experience with my friends online, which really make me feel unwind and connected is also strength of friendship.
✓ For example, on the weekend I usually share my interesting experiences with my friends online, which really makes me feel unwound and connected; this is also a strength of friendship.
experience 应该用复数 experiences,因为这里指的是多次经历。make 应该用第三人称单数 makes,因为主语是 which 指代单数。unwind 应该用过去分词 unwound 表示感到放松。strength 前面需要加不定冠词 a。句子结构需要调整以表达清晰。
× To be honest, I usually share about my daily life with them which really make me feel happy and I want.
✓ To be honest, I usually share about my daily life with them which really makes me feel happy and satisfied.
make 应该用第三人称单数 makes,因为主语是 which 指代单数。句尾的 I want 不完整,改为 satisfied 更符合语境。
× Moreover, we also talk about some celebrities gossip which really.
✓ Moreover, we also talk about some celebrity gossip which is really interesting.
celebrities 应改为 celebrity,gossip 是不可数名词,前面不加复数形式。句子不完整,补充完整表达。
× For example, we just how to deal with this problems, we will give the different ways so we will have argues.
✓ For example, we just discuss how to deal with these problems, we will give different ways so we will have arguments.
problems 应用复数形式 these problems。argues 应改为 arguments,argue 是动词,arguments 是名词。句子中缺少动词 discuss。
× which really make me feel unwind and connected is also strength of friendship.
✓ which really makes me feel unwound and connected; this is also a strength of friendship.
make 应用第三人称单数 makes,因为主语是 which 指代单数。
× which really make me feel unwind and connected is also strength of friendship.
✓ which really makes me feel unwound and connected; this is also a strength of friendship.
unwind 是动词,应该用形容词或过去分词形式 unwound 来表达“放松”的状态。
× To be honest, I usually share about my daily life with them which really make me feel happy and I want.
✓ To be honest, I usually share my daily life with them which really makes me feel happy and satisfied.
动词 share 后面不需要介词 about,直接加宾语。
× For example, when we talk in person, is it there to express emotions naturally and avoid misunderstandings?
✓ For example, when we talk in person, it is easier to express emotions naturally and avoid misunderstandings.
原句中代词使用错误,it is easier 更符合表达习惯,there 用法不当。
× sometimes I have a argue with my friends because we have different opinions and thoughts on one problems.
✓ sometimes I have an argument with my friends because we have different opinions and thoughts on one problem.
a argue 应为 an argument,argue 是动词,argument 是名词。problems 应为单数 problem,因为前面有 one 修饰。
× sometimes I have a argue with my friends because we have different opinions and thoughts on one problems.
✓ sometimes I have an argument with my friends because we have different opinions and thoughts on one problem.
a argue 中的冠词 a 应改为 an,因为 argument 以元音音素开头。