Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with friends and it is because I love socializing and I enjoy spend time with my friend and talk about our daily life or our work. I think is available valuable time that I can feel relaxed.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I found that I love chatting with my friends about maybe what I got in my trip, you know, The Avengers and what we have, the troublesome work in our job and also related to our relationship, love our family.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Uh, well, I prefer to chat with just one friend rather than a group because one to one conversations feel more sincere and comfortable for me. When I talk to only one person, I don't feel embarrassed and I can express myself more freely, you know? However, I still enjoy spending my time with my friends sometimes.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer face to face communication because it feels more genuine and allows me to understand my friend's emotion through their facial expressions and body language. For example, when we talk in uh uh, person, we can have deeper and more meaningful conversation, which is something I found difficult to achieve through the social media.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Umm, yes of course. I believe that have arguments is normal and can actually strengthen the relationship. When friends argue, they have a chance to understand each other better and resolve the misunderstandings which help to build a deeper and more trusting relationship.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,如“enjoy spend time”应为“enjoy spending time”,且句子结构较为混乱。建议简化句子结构,注意动词形式,避免冗余,表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because I love socializing. We often talk about our daily lives and work, which helps me relax and feel happy.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够清晰,表达混乱,缺乏逻辑连接词,且部分内容不明确。建议回答时条理清晰,使用连接词,并具体说明聊天内容。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about my recent trips, movies like The Avengers, work challenges, and our relationships with family and loved ones.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且结构完整,但口语填充词较多,如“uh”,“you know”,建议减少使用,使表达更正式。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because one-on-one conversations feel more sincere and comfortable. I can express myself freely without feeling embarrassed, although I also enjoy group chats sometimes.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有例子,但存在口语填充词“uh uh”,影响流畅度。建议减少口语填充词,注意冠词使用,如“in person”而非“in uh uh, person”。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more genuine. I can understand my friend's emotions through their facial expressions and body language, which helps us have deeper and more meaningful conversations compared to social media.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误,如“have arguments”应为“having arguments”,且开头口语填充词“Umm”应避免。建议注意语法准确性,减少口语填充词,使表达更正式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe having arguments is normal and can strengthen friendships. Arguments give friends a chance to understand each other better and resolve misunderstandings, building deeper trust.
× I like chatting with friends and it is because I love socializing and I enjoy spend time with my friend and talk about our daily life or our work.
✓ I like chatting with friends because I love socializing and I enjoy spending time with my friends and talking about our daily life or our work.
动词 enjoy 后面应该接动名词形式(-ing),所以 spend 应改为 spending,talk 应改为 talking。
× I enjoy spend time with my friend and talk about our daily life or our work.
✓ I enjoy spending time with my friends and talking about our daily life or our work.
friend 应该用复数形式 friends,因为通常指多个朋友。
× I think is available valuable time that I can feel relaxed.
✓ I think it is valuable free time when I can feel relaxed.
句子缺少主语 it,且表达不够自然,需调整句子结构。
× I found that I love chatting with my friends about maybe what I got in my trip, you know, The Avengers and what we have, the troublesome work in our job and also related to our relationship, love our family.
✓ I found that I love chatting with my friends about things like what I got on my trip, you know, The Avengers, what we have, the troublesome work in our job, and also topics related to our relationships, love, and family.
句子结构混乱,缺少连词和适当的表达,需调整使句子更通顺。
× what I got in my trip
✓ what I got on my trip
表示“在旅行中”,应使用介词 on 而不是 in。
× love our family
✓ love our families
family 应用复数形式 families,表示各自的家庭。
× When I talk to only one person, I don't feel embarrassed and I can express myself more freely, you know?
✓ When I talk to only one person, I don't feel embarrassed and I can express myself more freely, you know?
该句无明显代词错误。
× I prefer face to face communication because it feels more genuine and allows me to understand my friend's emotion through their facial expressions and body language.
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more genuine and allows me to understand my friends' emotions through their facial expressions and body language.
face-to-face 应用连字符连接;friend's 应改为 friends' 表示复数所有格;emotion 应用复数 emotions。
× my friend's emotion
✓ my friends' emotions
表示多个朋友的情感,friend 应用复数所有格 friends',emotion 应用复数 emotions。
× when we talk in uh uh, person, we can have deeper and more meaningful conversation
✓ when we talk in person, we can have deeper and more meaningful conversations
短语应为 in person,且 conversation 应用复数 conversations。
× more meaningful conversation
✓ more meaningful conversations
此处指多次对话,应使用复数形式 conversations。
× I believe that have arguments is normal and can actually strengthen the relationship.
✓ I believe that having arguments is normal and can actually strengthen the relationship.
动词 believe 后的从句中,have 应改为动名词形式 having。
× have arguments is normal
✓ having arguments is normal
arguments 是复数,前面应使用动名词 having 作为主语。
× When friends argue, they have a chance to understand each other better and resolve the misunderstandings which help to build a deeper and more trusting relationship.
✓ When friends argue, they have a chance to understand each other better and resolve misunderstandings which help to build a deeper and more trusting relationship.
misunderstandings 前的定冠词 the 可去掉,使表达更自然。