Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with friends. I always chat with our friends about things of jobs or boyfriends or something happened in our daily life. We always do it in at dinner or.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I always chat about what happened in our daily life with friends. Everything can be talk about with my friends and to expand the time so I will say everything happened from daylight.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with only one friend because I like the atmosphere. With only one friend we can talk everything to each other without.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
MMM actually for me these two ways have no much difference. If I choose, I maybe choose uh, communicate face face because I can do umm, body language, not only buyer.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes I MMM sometimes argue with friends evil if if on some seems I talk something umm against hers, I will umm argue on it with her and we always.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,并且注意时态和介词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. We often talk about our jobs, relationships, and daily life events, usually during dinner.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰,语法错误较多,建议使用简单明了的句子,直接回答问题,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about daily events with my friends. For example, I share what happened during the day and listen to their stories as well.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不流畅,建议补充完整句子,说明原因,并使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because the atmosphere is more relaxed, and we can talk about anything openly without interruptions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中有很多犹豫词和语法错误,表达不清晰,建议减少填充词,使用完整句子,并清楚表达观点。
Ví dụ: I think both ways are similar, but I prefer face-to-face communication because I can use body language, which helps me understand better.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱且不完整,建议用简洁的句子表达观点,避免重复和无意义的填充词。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends if we have different opinions, but we usually resolve our disagreements quickly.
× I always chat with our friends about things of jobs or boyfriends or something happened in our daily life.
✓ I always chat with our friends about things like jobs or boyfriends or things that happened in our daily life.
这里的 'things of jobs or boyfriends' 用法不正确,应该用 'things like jobs or boyfriends' 来表示类似的事情。'something happened' 应该改为 'things that happened',因为指的是多件事情。
× We always do it in at dinner or.
✓ We always do it at dinner.
介词使用错误,'in at dinner' 是错误的,正确用法是 'at dinner' 表示在晚餐时。句尾的 'or' 多余,应删除。
× I always chat about what happened in our daily life with friends.
✓ I always chat with friends about what happened in our daily life.
动词 'chat' 通常与介词 'with' 搭配,表示和某人聊天,'chat about' 是谈论某事,句中应调整顺序使表达更自然。
× Everything can be talk about with my friends and to expand the time so I will say everything happened from daylight.
✓ Everything can be talked about with my friends and to extend the time, so I will say everything that happened since daylight.
'talk' 应该用过去分词 'talked' 作为被动语态的一部分。'expand the time' 应改为 'extend the time' 更合适。'everything happened from daylight' 应改为 'everything that happened since daylight',表示从白天开始发生的事情。
× I prefer to chat with only one friend because I like the atmosphere.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I like the atmosphere.
此句无语法错误,符合语法规则。
× With only one friend we can talk everything to each other without.
✓ With only one friend, we can talk about everything to each other without any barriers.
句子结构不完整,缺少宾语和完整表达,'talk everything to each other without' 不完整,需补充完整表达。
× If I choose, I maybe choose uh, communicate face face because I can do umm, body language, not only buyer.
✓ If I choose, I may choose to communicate face-to-face because I can use body language, not only voice.
'maybe' 应为情态动词 'may','communicate face face' 应为 'communicate face-to-face','do body language' 应改为 'use body language','not only buyer' 应为 'not only voice'。
× Yes I MMM sometimes argue with friends evil if if on some seems I talk something umm against hers, I will umm argue on it with her and we always.
✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with friends even if on some occasions I say something against them, I will argue about it with them and we always resolve it.
'evil' 应为 'even','if if on some seems' 应为 'on some occasions','talk something against hers' 应为 'say something against them','argue on it' 应为 'argue about it','her' 应改为 'them' 以匹配复数 'friends'。