Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, actually I have really enjoyed chatting with my friends because I'm really chatter person and I like to share ideas together and get bond with each others while we had a coffee or something like that or breakfast even.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Mostly I'm really into chess and video games and I love to talk with them about these kind of topics and also related some series like sitcoms, office or something like that. Friends while also enjoy the talk with them too.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I would rather one friend without mine and I'm not into very crowded person, I don't like to crowd it. Also I like I'm mostly enjoy the along with my friends having a coffee and chatting and some about some topics.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I would prefer face to face because when social media it's it's kinda boring to me because umm you, you get the chance to when you face to face meeting with your friends, having a real conversation and having a cup of coffee or drink a beer, something like that.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Actually, I don't argue that with my friends. A lot of sometimes I can argue but an income and I I don't argue with my friends. I just wanna make real good wallet points and keep the tents not too tight and I try to have fun.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve tekrarlar var. Cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yapmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, 'chatter person' yerine 'chatty person' demek daha doğru olur. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi daha akıcı hale getirebilirsiniz.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I am a chatty person. We often share ideas and strengthen our bond while having coffee or breakfast together.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve anlam açısından bazı karışıklıklar var. Cümlelerinizi daha açık ve düzenli kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, 'these kind of topics' yerine 'these kinds of topics' veya 'topics like' kullanabilirsiniz. Bağlaçlarla cümleleri birbirine bağlayın.
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about topics like chess, video games, and TV series such as sitcoms like 'The Office'. They also enjoy these conversations.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Cümleniz anlaşılması zor ve dilbilgisi hataları içeriyor. Daha açık ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Tercihinizi net ifade edin ve nedenini açıklayın. Örneğin, 'I prefer chatting with one friend because I don't like crowded places' gibi.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I enjoy more personal and relaxed conversations, like having coffee together and discussing various topics.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dolaylı ifadeler var. Daha net ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Ayrıca, neden yüz yüze iletişimi tercih ettiğinizi açıkça belirtin ve bağlaçlar kullanın.
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because social media can be boring. Meeting friends in person allows for real conversations while enjoying a coffee or a drink.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda anlam belirsizliği ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha açık ve doğru cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Örneğin, tartışmadığınızı ve arkadaşlarınızla iyi ilişkiler kurmaya çalıştığınızı net ifade edin.
Ví dụ: Actually, I rarely argue with my friends. I prefer to keep our relationship friendly and enjoyable by avoiding conflicts.
× Yeah, actually I have really enjoyed chatting with my friends because I'm really chatter person and I like to share ideas together and get bond with each others while we had a coffee or something like that or breakfast even.
✓ Yeah, actually I have really enjoyed chatting with my friends because I'm really a chatty person and I like to share ideas together and get bonded with each other while we have a coffee or something like that or even breakfast.
The word 'chatter' is a noun but the correct adjective form to describe a person who talks a lot is 'chatty'. 'Get bond' should be 'get bonded' to use the past participle form correctly after 'get'. 'Each others' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'each other' without 's'. Also, 'while we had a coffee' should be 'while we have a coffee' to maintain present tense consistency.
× Mostly I'm really into chess and video games and I love to talk with them about these kind of topics and also related some series like sitcoms, office or something like that. Friends while also enjoy the talk with them too.
✓ Mostly I'm really into chess and video games and I love to talk with them about these kinds of topics and also related series like sitcoms, The Office or something like that. I also enjoy talking with my friends too.
The phrase 'these kind of topics' should be 'these kinds of topics' to agree in number. 'Related some series' is unclear; it should be 'related series'. 'Friends while also enjoy the talk with them too' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I also enjoy talking with my friends too' to correctly express the idea and use the gerund form after 'enjoy'.
× Mostly I'm really into chess and video games and I love to talk with them about these kind of topics and also related some series like sitcoms, office or something like that. Friends while also enjoy the talk with them too.
✓ Mostly I'm really into chess and video games and I love to talk with them about these kinds of topics and also related series like sitcoms, The Office or something like that. I also enjoy talking with my friends too.
'These kind of topics' is incorrect because 'these' is plural and should be followed by the plural noun 'kinds'. Also, 'series' is plural and should be used correctly. 'Office' should be capitalized as 'The Office' since it is a proper noun (a TV show).
× I would rather one friend without mine and I'm not into very crowded person, I don't like to crowd it. Also I like I'm mostly enjoy the along with my friends having a coffee and chatting and some about some topics.
✓ I would rather have one friend with me and I'm not a very crowded person; I don't like crowds. Also, I mostly enjoy being along with my friends, having a coffee and chatting about some topics.
The phrase 'I would rather one friend without mine' is incorrect; it should be 'I would rather have one friend with me'. 'I'm not into very crowded person' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm not a very crowded person' or better 'I don't like crowds'. 'I like I'm mostly enjoy the along with my friends' is ungrammatical; it should be 'I mostly enjoy being along with my friends'. The sentence structure and pronoun use were incorrect.
× I would prefer face to face because when social media it's it's kinda boring to me because umm you, you get the chance to when you face to face meeting with your friends, having a real conversation and having a cup of coffee or drink a beer, something like that.
✓ I would prefer face-to-face because social media is kinda boring to me since when you meet face-to-face with your friends, you get the chance to have a real conversation and have a cup of coffee or drink a beer, something like that.
The phrase 'when social media it's it's kinda boring to me because umm you, you get the chance to when you face to face meeting' is ungrammatical and has incorrect preposition use. 'Face to face meeting' should be 'meet face-to-face'. Also, 'because when social media' is incorrect; it should be 'because social media is'. The prepositions and sentence structure needed correction for clarity.
× Actually, I don't argue that with my friends. A lot of sometimes I can argue but an income and I I don't argue with my friends. I just wanna make real good wallet points and keep the tents not too tight and I try to have fun.
✓ Actually, I don't argue with my friends. Sometimes I can argue, but I don't. I just want to make really good points and keep the tension not too tight, and I try to have fun.
The phrase 'A lot of sometimes I can argue but an income and I I don't argue' is ungrammatical and confusing. 'An income' is incorrect here. 'Wanna' is informal and should be 'want to'. 'Wallet points' is likely a mishearing or mistake for 'valid points' or 'good points'. 'Keep the tents not too tight' should be 'keep the tension not too tight'. The past tense and sentence structure needed correction for clarity and grammar.