Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Definitely, yes. I really enjoy chatting with my best friend because uh, chatting help it helps us to communicate and connected our ourselves and uh, I think chatting also helps us to communicate.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat about my about school life and personal experience with our with my best friend because I think it helps and it helps us more connective and umm. For example, we often share interesting story from our daily life.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I really like to chat with a group people and or one people that I met in our class because I think it also umm strengthen our friendship, but.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer face to face conversation better because I think when we meet each other we know our our umm posture and we know our body language and we know each other emotions. So I think.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. You know what, when we have a group task, me and my friend are also talking about how to do the test better. And we also argued with that task how to deal with that and at the at at that time we think.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my best friend because it helps us stay connected and understand each other better.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构,避免重复,并提供更具体的细节。
Ví dụ: I usually talk about school life and personal experiences with my best friend. For example, we often share interesting stories from our daily lives to stay connected.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清,建议直接回答问题,避免含糊其辞,并补充具体原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it helps me build stronger friendships and enjoy diverse opinions.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达较为自然,但句子未完整,建议完整表达观点,并使用连贯的句子结构。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand body language and emotions better, which makes conversations more meaningful.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清,建议简洁明了地说明情况,并使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes my friends and I argue when working on group tasks because we have different ideas on how to complete them effectively.
× I really enjoy chatting with my best friend because uh, chatting help it helps us to communicate and connected our ourselves and uh, I think chatting also helps us to communicate.
✓ I really enjoy chatting with my best friend because chatting helps us to communicate and connect ourselves, and I think chatting also helps us to communicate.
动词后面需要用-ing形式表示动作,且动词与主语保持一致。这里'chatting help'应改为'chatting helps','connected'应改为'connect',因为前面是动词不定式结构。
× I usually chat about my about school life and personal experience with our with my best friend because I think it helps and it helps us more connective and umm.
✓ I usually chat about my school life and personal experiences with my best friend because I think it helps us become more connected.
'connective'是形容词,表达连接的意思,但这里需要用过去分词'connected'表示状态,且'personal experience'应为复数形式。
× For example, we often share interesting story from our daily life.
✓ For example, we often share interesting stories from our daily life.
'story'应为复数形式'stories',因为前面有形容词'interesting'修饰,且表示多次分享多条故事。
× I really like to chat with a group people and or one people that I met in our class because I think it also umm strengthen our friendship, but.
✓ I really like to chat with a group of people or one person that I met in our class because I think it also strengthens our friendship.
'group people'应为'group of people','one people'应为'one person',且动词'strengthen'应加-s与主语一致。
× I think it also umm strengthen our friendship, but.
✓ I think it also strengthens our friendship.
主语是第三人称单数,动词应加-s,'strengthen'改为'strengthens'。
× I prefer face to face conversation better because I think when we meet each other we know our our umm posture and we know our body language and we know each other emotions.
✓ I prefer face-to-face conversation because I think when we meet each other, we know our posture, body language, and each other's emotions.
'face to face'应连字符连接为'face-to-face','each other emotions'应为'each other's emotions',表示所有格。
× You know what, when we have a group task, me and my friend are also talking about how to do the test better.
✓ You know what, when we had a group task, my friend and I also talked about how to do the test better.
描述过去的事情,动词应使用过去时,'have'改为'had','are talking'改为'talked','me and my friend'应改为'my friend and I'。
× And we also argued with that task how to deal with that and at the at at that time we think.
✓ And we also argued about how to deal with that task, and at that time we thought.
'argued with'应改为'argued about','think'应使用过去时'thought',因为描述过去的事件。