Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容丰富，但存在语法错误和表达不够简洁的问题。建议避免冗长句子，注意语法准确性，如“buying domestics”应为“buying domestic products”或更具体的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and forget my stress. We often talk about interesting topics like cooking tips or shopping experiences, which makes our conversations enjoyable.

Gợi ý: 回答开头不自然且有语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议直接回答问题，避免使用不恰当的短语，句子结构应更简洁明了。

Ví dụ: We usually talk about our sociology lessons and help each other with writing papers. Besides, we enjoy discussing TV shows and celebrities that interest us both.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且结构较好，但“social phenomenons”应为“social phenomena”，注意词汇准确性。建议适当简化句子，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group because I can hear different opinions on social issues, which broadens my understanding. Also, as an introvert, I feel more comfortable joining group conversations where I can listen and participate.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，如“Before chatting”应为“I prefer chatting”。建议使用更准确的表达，并补充更多细节使回答更完整。

Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because I can use emojis and stickers to express my feelings clearly. For example, sending a smiley face shows I'm happy. However, face-to-face communication can be difficult sometimes because I struggle to express myself.

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体，但“put ourselves in others shoes”应为“put ourselves in others' shoes”，注意所有格的使用。建议注意细节表达的准确性。

Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because we respect each other's views. We try to put ourselves in others' shoes and share our thoughts fairly, which helps us understand different opinions and avoid conflicts.

× I think chatting with friends is a very enjoyable and relaxing way to unwind myself because we can talk about many interesting topics such as buying domestics or sharing cooking tips.

✓ I think chatting with friends is a very enjoyable and relaxing way to unwind because we can talk about many interesting topics such as buying domestic products or sharing cooking tips.

“unwind myself”中的“myself”是不必要的反身代词，动词“unwind”在这里不需要反身形式，去掉“myself”更自然。

× such as buying domestics or sharing cooking tips.

✓ such as buying domestic products or sharing cooking tips.

“domestics”用作名词时不常见且不准确，应使用“domestic products”表示“国产产品”或“家用产品”。

× And a real deal of a reality of topics to share with each other, ranging from academic researchers to some TV programs.

✓ There are a real deal of topics to share with each other, ranging from academic research to some TV programs.

原句缺少主语和谓语，结构不完整。应补充“there are”使句子完整。

× ranging from academic researchers to some TV programs.

✓ ranging from academic research to some TV programs.

“academic researchers”指“学术研究者”，但这里应指“学术研究”主题，故用“academic research”。

× Since are both sociology students, we often discuss our lessons and help each other with writing papers.

✓ Since we are both sociology students, we often discuss our lessons and help each other with writing papers.

句子缺少主语“we”，导致语法错误，应补充完整。

× which makes our conversation more invariable.

✓ which makes our conversation more enjoyable.

“invariable”意为“不变的”，语境中应表达“更有趣”或“更丰富”，故改为“enjoyable”。

× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can hear different opinions on various social phenomenons, which helps me broaden my understanding of the world.

✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I can hear different opinions on various social phenomena, which helps me broaden my understanding of the world.

“phenomenons”是错误的复数形式，正确复数为“phenomena”。

× Talking in a group helps me avoid feeling embarrassed if I don't know how to answer a question as I can listen to others and join.

✓ Talking in a group helps me avoid feeling embarrassed if I don't know how to answer a question, as I can listen to others and join in.

动词“join”后应加介词“in”表示“加入”，缺少“in”导致表达不完整。

× Before chatting with others via social media because it allows me to send some emojis and stickers which help me in practice my emotions more clearly.

✓ I prefer chatting with others via social media because it allows me to send some emojis and stickers which help me express my emotions more clearly.

原句缺少主语和谓语，且“in practice my emotions”表达错误，应改为“express my emotions”。

× However, face to face communication can sometimes be challenging because I might not always know how to express.

✓ However, face-to-face communication can sometimes be challenging because I might not always know how to express myself.

“face to face”应连写为“face-to-face”，且“express”后缺少宾语“myself”，表示“表达自己”。

× I rarely argue with my friends because they always respect each other's perspectives.

✓ I rarely argue with my friends because we always respect each other's perspectives.

前文主语是“I”，此处应用“we”表示双方共同尊重，而非“they”指代他人。

× we try to put ourselves in others shoes and share our thoughts fairly, which helps us understand different opinions and avoid conflicts.

✓ we try to put ourselves in others' shoes and share our thoughts fairly, which helps us understand different opinions and avoid conflicts.

“others shoes”缺少所有格，应为“others' shoes”，表示“别人的立场”。