Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific reasons or examples. For instance, instead of repeating 'I enjoy chatting' and 'it is convenient and enjoyable', you can combine these ideas and add a specific example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like chatting with my friends because it helps me share opinions and get new ideas. For example, I often discuss our daily plans or interesting topics using my cell phone, which is very convenient.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some repetition and unclear phrases. Try to structure your response clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about the topics you discuss.

Ví dụ: I usually chat with my colleagues about work and education whenever I am free. For instance, I ask them about ongoing projects or share updates to stay informed and support each other.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with specific examples. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation, but I usually prefer group chats on WhatsApp when planning outings like watching movies. This way, everyone can share ideas and coordinate easily.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and unclear phrasing. Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to explain your preferences clearly.

Ví dụ: I like both face-to-face and social media communication. For example, when I am outside and cannot take calls, I prefer chatting via messages. However, if there is an urgent matter, I call my friends immediately.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to give a direct response with a topic sentence and explain with specific examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences.

Ví dụ: I sometimes argue with my friends when we have different opinions, especially on important topics. However, I always try to understand their point of view to resolve the disagreement peacefully.

× I think I prefer to chat with them once or twice in a day.

✓ I think I prefer to chat with them once or twice a day.

The phrase 'in a day' is incorrect when referring to frequency. The correct expression is 'a day' to indicate how often something happens daily.

× I usually chat with my colleagues related to my work and education whenever I whenever I am free and at that time I prefer to chat with them to to ask some what is happening or all is good or right.

✓ I usually chat with my colleagues about my work and education whenever I am free, and at that time I prefer to chat with them to ask what is happening or if all is good or right.

The preposition 'related to' is better replaced with 'about' when referring to topics of conversation. Also, the sentence had repeated words and awkward phrasing that needed correction for clarity.

× I think it is a good for me for both of us to chat.

✓ I think it is good for both of us to chat.

The article 'a' before 'good' is unnecessary here, and 'for me for both of us' is redundant. The correct phrase is 'good for both of us'.

× Whenever my friends decide decide to go out outside for watching some movies and some other places, that time we prefer to.

✓ Whenever my friends decide to go out to watch some movies and visit other places, at that time we prefer to.

The phrase 'for watching' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to watch'. Also, 'some other places' is better expressed as 'visit other places' for clarity.

× I prefer to chat with my friends with the in the group on my WhatsApp application, which is a convenient and enjoyable application and it is a usable application for the app.

✓ I prefer to chat with my friends in the group on my WhatsApp application, which is a convenient and enjoyable app.

The phrase 'with the in the group' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'in the group'. Also, 'application' is repeated unnecessarily; 'app' suffices.

× Whenever I go outside and I am unable to take, uh, to, uh, take any call, that time I prefer to, uh, chat with my colleagues and friends.

✓ Whenever I go outside and am unable to take any calls, I prefer to chat with my colleagues and friends.

The phrase 'take, uh, to, uh, take any call' is redundant and incorrect. The correct expression is 'unable to take any calls'.

× If I don't have, if I had need urgent work that time, I prefer to call immediately to my friends.

✓ If I have urgent work, I prefer to call my friends immediately.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. 'If I had need' is incorrect; it should be 'If I have urgent work'. Also, 'call immediately to my friends' should be 'call my friends immediately'.

× Whenever my friend disagree with my opinion and I always try to understand about my work and he is agreed and he is disagree with me, that time I argue with my friends on on a specially top specific topic which is.

✓ Whenever my friend disagrees with my opinion, and I always try to understand my work, and he agrees or disagrees with me, at that time I argue with my friends on a specific topic.

The verb 'disagree' needs third person singular form 'disagrees' to agree with 'my friend'. Also, 'he is agreed' and 'he is disagree' are incorrect; correct forms are 'he agrees' and 'he disagrees'. The sentence had redundancy and awkward phrasing that needed correction.