Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. 'Wendy things' jasto shabda haru spashta chaina ra artha bujhna garo huncha. Tapai le sentence haru lai thap sangathit ra prabhavit banau, jasma linking words pani samet hunu parcha.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and refresh from my busy schedule. Moreover, sharing various experiences and thoughts with them relieves my stress and makes me feel happier.

Gợi ý: Tapai le uttar ma thap vivid ra specific details sametnu parcha. Linking words jastai 'for example', 'besides' prayog garera uttar lai ramro sangathit banaunu hola.

Ví dụ: I usually talk about my daily life and events that happened during the day. For example, I share my problems with friends to get their advice, which helps me feel relieved and supported.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma kehi bhul haru chan jastai 'having trapped' jasle arth bujhna garo parcha. Tapai le sentence haru lai spashta ra sahaj banau, ra linking words prayog garnu parcha.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one close friend because we have known each other since childhood. I can share everything about my daily life and problems with her without hesitation.

Gợi ý: Tapai le uttar ma thap spashta ra prabhavit shabda prayog garnu parcha. 'A person like to talk' jasto vakya thik chaina. Tapai le sentence haru lai ramro sangathit ra logical banau, linking words samet garnu hola.

Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to express myself clearly and observe the other person's facial expressions. This makes the conversation more lively and meaningful.

Gợi ý: Tapai ko uttar ma kehi bhul haru chan ra sentence haru thap spashta ra sahaj banau parcha. Tapai le linking words jastai 'instead', 'therefore' prayog garera uttar lai ramro sangathit banaunu hola.

Ví dụ: I don't usually argue with my friends. Instead, I believe that we can solve problems by having calm and good conversations, so arguing is unnecessary.

× Yes I do like talking with my friends as they help me in having fun and having refreshment from my busy schedule.

✓ Yes, I do like talking with my friends as they help me have fun and refresh from my busy schedule.

The phrase 'help me in having fun and having refreshment' is incorrect because 'help' is followed by the base verb without 'in' or '-ing' form. The correct form is 'help me have fun and refresh'.

× Also sharing a lot of things and chit chatting helps me relieve or Wendy things that I couldn't.

✓ Also, sharing a lot of things and chit chatting helps me relieve or vent things that I couldn't.

The word 'Wendy' is incorrect and seems to be a typo for 'vent'. Also, the sentence needs a comma after 'Also' for clarity.

× I normally like to share about my day-to-day life, what happened in my normal days.

✓ I normally like to share my day-to-day life, what happened in my normal days.

The verb 'share' does not require the preposition 'about'. It should be 'share my day-to-day life'. Also, 'normal days' is acceptable but could be improved to 'usual days' for naturalness.

× Also their opinions on what they think about it, they help me feel relieved.

✓ Also, their opinions on what they think about it help me feel relieved.

The sentence has a comma splice and unnecessary pronoun 'they'. Removing 'they' and the comma before 'help' corrects the sentence structure.

× I'm not used to having large group of friends as I only have a single friend.

✓ I'm not used to having a large group of friends as I only have a single friend.

The phrase 'large group' requires the article 'a' before it because 'group' is singular countable noun.

× I love having trapped with her as I can share everything with her about my daily life.

✓ I love having chats with her as I can share everything with her about my daily life.

The word 'trapped' is incorrect here; likely intended word is 'chat' or 'talk'. 'Having chats' is the correct phrase.

× Also my problems without hesitation because we are with each other since our childhood and we spend.

✓ Also, I share my problems without hesitation because we have been with each other since our childhood and we spend time together.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb in the second clause. Adding 'I share' and completing the sentence improves clarity and correctness.

× A person like to talk face to face because I can express myself and know how they are looking and expressing about what am I saying.

✓ I like to talk face to face because I can express myself and know how they are looking and expressing about what I am saying.

The sentence incorrectly switches from 'a person' to 'I' and 'they'. Consistency in pronouns is necessary. Also, 'what am I saying' should be 'what I am saying' in indirect speech.

× It feels much more vibrant and looks good.

✓ It feels much more vibrant and looks better.

The adjective 'good' should be replaced with the comparative form 'better' to match the comparative context implied by 'much more vibrant'.

× Also I can feel the sensation that they are giving.

✓ Also, I can feel the sensation they are giving.

The relative pronoun 'that' is unnecessary here and can be omitted for smoother sentence flow.

× I don't really argue with my friends because I think that arguing is an option and where we can solve by talking normally and having a very good conversation, there is no need of arguing on the point.

✓ I don't really argue with my friends because I think that arguing is not necessary and we can solve issues by talking normally and having a good conversation; there is no need to argue about the point.

The original sentence misuses 'arguing is an option' which is unclear. 'Arguing is not necessary' is clearer. Also, 'there is no need of arguing' should be 'there is no need to argue'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.