Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and avoiding repeated words. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like chatting with my friends. Usually, I prefer messaging them rather than using other social media platforms. However, when I need a deeper conversation, I prefer calling them because it feels more personal.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to avoid repeating phrases and use linking words to organize your ideas. Also, be more specific about the topics you discuss with your friends.

Ví dụ: To be honest, we mostly chat about our careers and personal problems. We often seek advice from each other. Besides that, we discuss current events and social issues happening in our community.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some unclear phrases and grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer chatting with one friend at a time because it is easier to communicate clearly. Also, since I don't have many friends, group chats are less common for me.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains filler words. Try to speak more fluently and organize your ideas logically. Use linking words to contrast your preferences and give specific reasons.

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, I am an introvert, so I usually prefer communicating via social media. However, in emergencies or important situations, I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more effective.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use varied vocabulary and correct grammar to express your ideas more clearly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often argue with my friends because I am quite stubborn. We have different opinions on many topics, so we discuss and debate to defend our views.

× We're talking about myself.

✓ I'm talking about myself.

The use of 'We're' (we are) is incorrect because the speaker refers to themselves only, so the singular form 'I'm' (I am) should be used instead.

× I usually prefer to message them instead of chatting on any other kind of social media.

✓ I usually prefer to message them instead of chatting on other kinds of social media.

The phrase 'any other kind of social media' is awkward; 'other kinds of social media' is more natural and grammatically correct when referring to multiple types.

× Moreover, I prefer mostly to call them whenever I am in need to talk talk to them besides chatting or spending time recklessly in those kind of activities.

✓ Moreover, I mostly prefer to call them whenever I need to talk to them besides chatting or spending time recklessly in those kinds of activities.

The placement of 'mostly' is better before 'prefer' for clarity. Also, 'in need to talk talk to them' is incorrect; it should be 'need to talk to them'. 'Those kind of activities' should be plural 'kinds' to agree with 'activities'.

× Will to be honest, most of the time, most of the time we talk about our careers and our life problems, trying to get suggestions and solutions from friends and besides that we sometime talks with each other, talk with each other to get about the knowledge about different situations going in our area or the society.

✓ To be honest, most of the time we talk about our careers and our life problems, trying to get suggestions and solutions from friends. Besides that, we sometimes talk with each other to gain knowledge about different situations happening in our area or society.

'Will to be honest' is incorrect; it should be 'To be honest'. 'Sometime talks' is wrong; 'sometimes talk' is correct. 'Get about the knowledge' is awkward; 'gain knowledge' is better. 'Going in our area or the society' should be 'happening in our area or society'.

× Whereas I'm also a Sai person and I don't have a lot of friends so it is very weird to talk with a group of friends.

✓ Also, I'm a shy person and I don't have many friends, so it is very weird to talk with a group of friends.

'Sai' is likely a typo for 'shy'. 'A lot of friends' is acceptable but 'many friends' fits better here. The sentence is rephrased for clarity.

× I am a introvert and a kind of person so I don't prefer to meet person in umm pros person but umm.

✓ I am an introvert and that kind of person, so I don't prefer to meet people in person.

'A introvert' should be 'an introvert' because 'introvert' starts with a vowel sound. 'Meet person in umm pros person' is unclear and corrected to 'meet people in person'.

× However, when it is an emergency case or the work is very important at that time only I try to talk with the person face to face rather than I like to communicate with any kind of person in social media only.

✓ However, when it is an emergency or the work is very important, only then do I try to talk with the person face to face rather than communicate through social media.

'At that time only' is awkward; 'only then' is better. 'Talk with the person face to face' is correct but 'rather than I like to communicate with any kind of person in social media only' is awkward and corrected to 'rather than communicate through social media'.

× Yes, obviously I argue with my friends a lot because I'm a stubborn kind of person and a lot of topics are in opposite sense and we have a opposite mindset and opinion about a lot of things.

✓ Yes, obviously I argue with my friends a lot because I'm a stubborn kind of person and many topics are opposite in nature, and we have opposite mindsets and opinions about many things.

'A lot of topics are in opposite sense' is awkward; 'many topics are opposite in nature' is better. 'A opposite mindset' should be 'an opposite mindset' and pluralized to 'mindsets' to match 'we'. 'A lot of things' is better as 'many things' here.