Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınız doğal ve samimi ancak bazı cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları mevcut. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde gereksiz tekrarlar ve belirsizlikler var. Daha akıcı ve net ifadeler kullanmaya çalışın, ayrıca cümlelerinizi 5 cümleyi geçmeyecek şekilde tutun.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially over the phone or FaceTime. We often talk when we are apart due to work or school. I find these conversations very enjoyable and they help us stay connected despite the distance.

Gợi ý: Cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hataları var ve bazı ifadeler anlaşılması zor. Konuşmanızı daha açık ve mantıklı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın. Ayrıca, daha spesifik ve net detaylar verin.

Ví dụ: We usually chat about various topics, whether we talk face-to-face or on FaceTime. For example, my friends often discuss makeup, fashion, and the latest social media trends. These topics are enjoyable and keep our conversations interesting.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam bozuklukları var. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde belirsizlikler mevcut. Daha açık ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak, düşüncelerinizi net ifade etmeye çalışın. Bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayın.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. Sometimes I prefer chatting with just one friend, especially if I feel tired after a long day. Other times, I enjoy group conversations because they are more lively and fun.

Gợi ý: Cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi ve anlam sorunları var, ayrıca cümleleriniz tamamlanmamış ve karışık. Daha net ve tamamlanmış cümleler kurmaya özen gösterin. Konuşmanızı daha akıcı ve mantıklı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanın ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltın.

Ví dụ: When I was younger, I preferred talking on the phone. However, now I prefer communicating via social media because I am busy and don't have time for long conversations. Social media allows me to stay in touch quickly and conveniently.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi ve ifade hataları var. Ayrıca, cümlelerinizde tekrarlar mevcut. Daha açık ve doğru cümle yapıları kullanarak, düşüncelerinizi net ifade edin. Bağlaçlarla cümlelerinizi birbirine bağlayarak akıcılığı artırın.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually argue with my friends because we try to understand each other. Since we are women, sometimes emotions can fluctuate during the day, but we always support and help each other.

× Sometimes there is a situation that we have to do far away from each other, such as job, school or anything else that we need to do.

✓ Sometimes there are situations when we have to be far away from each other, such as for a job, school, or anything else that we need to do.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'there is' with the plural noun 'situations'. The correct form is 'there are' for plural. Also, 'have to do far away' is incorrect; it should be 'have to be far away'. Additionally, prepositions like 'for' are needed before 'job' and 'school' to clarify meaning.

× Umm, we prefer talking on the phone, umm with on FaceTime it's so.

✓ Umm, we prefer talking on the phone, umm with FaceTime, it's so convenient.

The phrase 'with on FaceTime' is incorrect; only one preposition is needed. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; adding 'it's so convenient' clarifies the meaning.

× When we were apart we would have many topics to talk about.

✓ When we are apart, we have many topics to talk about.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense. Using 'were' and 'would have' implies past or conditional, which is inconsistent with the context.

× The girls often talks about the makeup, fashion or the latest trends on the social media.

✓ The girls often talk about makeup, fashion, or the latest trends on social media.

'Talks' should be 'talk' to agree with plural subject 'girls'. Also, 'the makeup' is incorrect; 'makeup' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'On the social media' should be 'on social media' as 'social media' is uncountable and used without 'the'.

× The girls often talks about the makeup, fashion or the latest trends on the social media.

✓ The girls often talk about makeup, fashion, or the latest trends on social media.

The verb 'talks' does not agree with the plural subject 'girls'. It should be 'talk'.

× The way doesn't matter how to we talk each others by FaceTime or the face to face.

✓ It doesn't matter how we talk to each other, whether by FaceTime or face to face.

The phrase 'how to we talk each others' is incorrect. The correct form is 'how we talk to each other'. Also, 'the face to face' should be 'face to face' without 'the'.

× Probably it's gonna be my girlfriend's I.

✓ Probably it's going to be my girlfriend.

'My girlfriend's I' is incorrect and unclear. The correct pronoun usage is simply 'my girlfriend'.

× If you had asked me this question when I was around 18 or 19, I prefer talking on the phone.

✓ If you had asked me this question when I was around 18 or 19, I would have preferred talking on the phone.

The conditional sentence requires the past perfect in the 'if' clause and 'would have' in the main clause to express past hypothetical. 'I prefer' is present tense and incorrect here.

× and no one have I think, umm, having a conversation on the social media it's getting.

✓ and no one, I think, has time. Umm, having a conversation on social media is becoming more common.

The phrase 'no one have I think' is incorrect; it should be 'no one, I think, has'. Also, 'it's getting' is incomplete; clarifying the meaning improves the sentence.

× We share somethings which is are important for us because of the being woman leads to have some emotional differences suddenly during the day.

✓ We share things that are important to us because being women leads to some emotional differences suddenly during the day.

'Somethings' is incorrect; the correct word is 'things'. Also, 'which is are' is incorrect; it should be 'that are'. 'Because of the being woman' is awkward; 'because being women' is better. 'Leads to have' should be 'leads to'.