Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语言稍显重复且不够简洁，建议避免使用口语填充词如“yeah”，并尝试用更自然流畅的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and relieve stress from school and work. It's a great way to unwind and connect with others.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为混乱且重复，缺乏清晰的结构和具体细节。建议回答时条理清晰，避免犹豫和重复，并提供具体话题。

Ví dụ: I usually talk with my friends about our daily routines, school experiences, and sometimes about our family members like siblings.

Gợi ý: 回答中有较多犹豫和重复，建议使用更简洁流畅的句子，并明确表达观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable and can share my thoughts openly, unlike in a group where I might feel nervous.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并准确表达观点。

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps build stronger relationships. Social media is convenient but less personal.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的句子结构，并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends because we share similar views. When facing difficulties, we support each other and help calm our emotions.

× I love chatting with my friends because I think it is a good way to rest ourselves and release our pressure from the school, work and homework.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because I think it is a good way to rest ourselves and release our pressures from school, work, and homework.

“pressure”在这里指多种压力，应使用复数形式“pressures”。另外，“the school”前的定冠词不必要，改为“school”更自然。

× From my perspective, I usually chat with my friends about maybe our daily lives and also our, uh, staying and, and also things we currently do and also our school life and also about our maybe our sisters or brothers.

✓ From my perspective, I usually chat with my friends about maybe our daily lives and also our, uh, stay and, and also things we currently do and also our school life and also about maybe our sisters or brothers.

“staying”用法不当，应改为名词“stay”或其他合适表达。此处“staying”作为动名词不符合语境。

× Maybe I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think a group of people make me, uh, the make me feel nervous and, uh, this cannot speak my heart out and uh, I think with only one friend, this friend may be your, uh, might be your best friend and you can, uh, O, open up your mind to say anything.

✓ Maybe I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think a group of people makes me, uh, makes me feel nervous and, uh, I cannot speak my heart out and, uh, I think with only one friend, this friend might be your best friend and you can, uh, open up your mind to say anything.

“a group of people”作为单数主语，谓语动词应使用单数形式“makes”。“this cannot speak”主语不明确，应改为“I cannot speak”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face. From my point of view, I think face to face communication can make our bond more, can make our bond closer and can strengthen our can strengthen our relationships also.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face. From my point of view, I think face-to-face communication can make our bond closer and can strengthen our relationships also.

“face to face”作为形容词时应连字符连接为“face-to-face”。“make our bond more”结构不完整，应直接用“make our bond closer”。

× But I think social media may be more code, Yeah.

✓ But I think social media may be more cold, yeah.

“code”应为“cold”，是拼写错误。

× I seldom argue with my friends because I think we have many same things say and many same expressions.

✓ I seldom argue with my friends because I think we have many same things to say and many same expressions.

“things say”缺少不定式“to”，应为“things to say”。

× Also when we when we face difficulties, we may be we may be tell our friends and they may be support us and smooth us emotions.

✓ Also, when we face difficulties, we may tell our friends and they may support us and soothe our emotions.

“may be tell”应为“may tell”，去掉多余的“be”。“support us and smooth us emotions”中“smooth”用错，应为“soothe”，且“us emotions”应为“our emotions”。