Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I like to chatting with my friends because it is the convenience way to talk with the our parents as well as near our dear ones. Secondly, it also the easiest way that we can connect to each other from one country to another.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, it is noted but on the situation and the circumstances, but we usually do chats on the basic things like our daily inquiries, daily conversations related to eating, learning, whatever we like.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Will I prefer to give uh, I prefer to do chat with only one people because it is the easiest way to keep in touch and keep concentrate while chatting on any particular space, any particular topic. And it is the also we feel under the privacy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well, I give priority to state, uh, communicate, uh, communicate with my, uh, peers through social media because it is the not only the easiest way, but also the quick way to, uh, ask from anything from an uh, by anytime. And secondly, uh, it is the.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Well definitely I don't like to argue with my friends because it put negative effects on our bond. So that's why I always try to avoid the arguments and try to solve if I see any kind of dispute in ourselves.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy by combining similar ideas. For example, you can say: "Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it's a convenient way to stay connected with them and even with family members, no matter where they are."
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it's a convenient way to stay connected with them and even with family members, no matter where they are.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and lacks coherence. Try to directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence and support it with specific examples. Use linking words to improve flow. For example: "I usually chat with my friends about everyday topics such as our meals, studies, and hobbies, depending on the situation."
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about everyday topics such as our meals, studies, and hobbies, depending on the situation.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer conveys your preference but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct sentence structures and clearer vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect ideas. For example: "I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to focus on the conversation and maintain privacy."
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to focus on the conversation and maintain privacy.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and contains many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to give a complete, clear response with correct grammar and vocabulary. For example: "I prefer to communicate via social media because it is quick and convenient, allowing me to contact my friends anytime and anywhere."
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate via social media because it is quick and convenient, allowing me to contact my friends anytime and anywhere.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but has some grammatical errors. Try to use correct verb forms and smoother expressions. For example: "I definitely don't like to argue with my friends because it negatively affects our relationship. Therefore, I try to avoid arguments and resolve any disputes calmly."
Ví dụ: I definitely don't like to argue with my friends because it negatively affects our relationship. Therefore, I try to avoid arguments and resolve any disputes calmly.
× Definitely, I like to chatting with my friends because it is the convenience way to talk with the our parents as well as near our dear ones.
✓ Definitely, I like chatting with my friends because it is the convenient way to talk with our parents as well as our dear ones nearby.
The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' rather than the infinitive 'to chatting'. Also, 'convenience' is a noun, but here an adjective 'convenient' is needed to describe 'way'. The article 'the' before 'our parents' is incorrect and should be removed. 'Near our dear ones' is awkward; 'our dear ones nearby' is clearer.
× Definitely, I like to chatting with my friends because it is the convenience way to talk with the our parents as well as near our dear ones.
✓ Definitely, I like chatting with my friends because it is the convenient way to talk with our parents as well as our dear ones nearby.
The definite article 'the' before 'our parents' is unnecessary because 'our' already specifies the noun. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.
× Definitely, I like to chatting with my friends because it is the convenience way to talk with the our parents as well as near our dear ones.
✓ Definitely, I like chatting with my friends because it is the convenient way to talk with our parents as well as our dear ones nearby.
'Convenience' is a noun, but an adjective 'convenient' is required to modify 'way'. Using the correct adjective improves sentence clarity.
× Definitely, I like to chatting with my friends because it is the convenience way to talk with the our parents as well as near our dear ones.
✓ Definitely, I like chatting with my friends because it is the convenient way to talk with our parents as well as our dear ones nearby.
'Near' is incorrectly used here; 'nearby' as an adverb or 'who are near us' would be more appropriate. Changing to 'our dear ones nearby' clarifies the meaning.
× Secondly, it also the easiest way that we can connect to each other from one country to another.
✓ Secondly, it is also the easiest way that we can connect with each other from one country to another.
The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'it'. Also, the correct preposition with 'connect' is 'with' not 'to'.
× Secondly, it also the easiest way that we can connect to each other from one country to another.
✓ Secondly, it is also the easiest way that we can connect with each other from one country to another.
The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to complete the 'there be' structure. Adding 'is' corrects the sentence.
× Secondly, it also the easiest way that we can connect to each other from one country to another.
✓ Secondly, it is also the easiest way that we can connect with each other from one country to another.
The verb 'connect' is typically followed by the preposition 'with' when referring to people, not 'to'.
× Well, it is noted but on the situation and the circumstances, but we usually do chats on the basic things like our daily inquiries, daily conversations related to eating, learning, whatever we like.
✓ Well, it depends on the situation and the circumstances, but we usually chat about basic things like our daily inquiries, daily conversations related to eating, learning, or whatever we like.
The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect verb usage. 'It is noted but on the situation' is unclear; 'it depends on the situation' is correct. 'Do chats on' should be 'chat about'. The conjunction 'but' is repeated unnecessarily.
× Well, it is noted but on the situation and the circumstances, but we usually do chats on the basic things like our daily inquiries, daily conversations related to eating, learning, whatever we like.
✓ Well, it depends on the situation and the circumstances, but we usually chat about basic things like our daily inquiries, daily conversations related to eating, learning, or whatever we like.
The verb 'chat' is used without 'do' in this context. 'Do chats' is incorrect; 'chat' is the correct verb form here.
× Well, it is noted but on the situation and the circumstances, but we usually do chats on the basic things like our daily inquiries, daily conversations related to eating, learning, whatever we like.
✓ Well, it depends on the situation and the circumstances, but we usually chat about basic things like our daily inquiries, daily conversations related to eating, learning, or whatever we like.
The preposition 'on' after 'chats' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'about' when referring to topics of conversation.
× Will I prefer to give uh, I prefer to do chat with only one people because it is the easiest way to keep in touch and keep concentrate while chatting on any particular space, any particular topic.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because it is the easiest way to keep in touch and concentrate while chatting on any particular topic.
'Will I prefer to give uh' is incorrect and unnecessary. 'Prefer to do chat' should be 'prefer to chat'. 'People' is plural; 'person' is singular to match 'only one'. 'Keep concentrate' should be 'keep concentrate' or better 'concentrate'.
× Will I prefer to give uh, I prefer to do chat with only one people because it is the easiest way to keep in touch and keep concentrate while chatting on any particular space, any particular topic.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because it is the easiest way to keep in touch and concentrate while chatting on any particular topic.
'People' is plural and does not match 'only one'; the singular 'person' is correct here.
× Will I prefer to give uh, I prefer to do chat with only one people because it is the easiest way to keep in touch and keep concentrate while chatting on any particular space, any particular topic.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because it is the easiest way to keep in touch and concentrate while chatting on any particular topic.
'Chatting on any particular space' is awkward; 'chatting on any particular topic' is more appropriate. 'Space' is not the correct noun here.
× And it is the also we feel under the privacy.
✓ And it also makes us feel private.
The phrase 'we feel under the privacy' is incorrect. 'Makes us feel private' or 'gives us privacy' is clearer and grammatically correct.
× Well, I give priority to state, uh, communicate, uh, communicate with my, uh, peers through social media because it is the not only the easiest way, but also the quick way to, uh, ask from anything from an uh, by anytime.
✓ Well, I give priority to communicating with my peers through social media because it is not only the easiest way but also the quickest way to ask for anything at any time.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains filler words. 'Give priority to communicating' is correct. 'Ask from anything from an uh, by anytime' is incorrect; it should be 'ask for anything at any time'. 'Quick' should be 'quickest' to match the superlative structure.
× Well, I give priority to state, uh, communicate, uh, communicate with my, uh, peers through social media because it is the not only the easiest way, but also the quick way to, uh, ask from anything from an uh, by anytime.
✓ Well, I give priority to communicating with my peers through social media because it is not only the easiest way but also the quickest way to ask for anything at any time.
The preposition 'ask from' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'ask for'. Also, 'by anytime' should be 'at any time'.
× Well definitely I don't like to argue with my friends because it put negative effects on our bond.
✓ Well definitely I don't like to argue with my friends because it puts negative effects on our bond.
The verb 'put' should be in the third person singular present tense 'puts' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.
× Well definitely I don't like to argue with my friends because it put negative effects on our bond.
✓ Well definitely I don't like to argue with my friends because it puts negative effects on our bond.
Subject-verb agreement requires the verb to be 'puts' when the subject is 'it' in present tense.
× So that's why I always try to avoid the arguments and try to solve if I see any kind of dispute in ourselves.
✓ So that's why I always try to avoid arguments and try to resolve any kind of dispute among ourselves.
The phrase 'dispute in ourselves' is incorrect; 'dispute among ourselves' is the correct expression. Also, 'try to solve if I see' is awkward; 'try to resolve any kind of dispute' is clearer.