Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like chatting with my friends. Uh, I especially like meeting my friends because I like to talk to them and hanging out with my friends. Also, we always go to cafes and restaurants to talk.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
I usually chat about funny videos. Uh, do you know Instagram, umm, Instagram. So really really fun. So I want to share my feeling.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with a group because I was really happy when I shared the funny videos my friends always enjoy. Therefore I prefer to chat with the group.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because I like people and I like meet other. Therefore I always go to cafe with my friends to talk.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Uh yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, umm but we always talk and I have a nut problem.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 반복되는 표현("I like")을 줄이고 문장을 더 간결하게 만드는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 연결어를 사용하여 문장 간의 흐름을 부드럽게 해야 합니다.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when we meet up to hang out. We often visit cafes or restaurants where we can have good conversations.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적으로 부자연스러운 부분이 있습니다. 구체적인 내용을 추가하고, 문장을 완성형으로 만들어야 합니다. 또한, 감정을 표현할 때 더 자연스러운 표현을 사용하는 것이 좋습니다.
Ví dụ: We usually talk about funny videos we find on Instagram because they make us laugh, and I enjoy sharing how they make me feel.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법 오류가 있습니다. 이유를 설명할 때 더 명확하고 자연스러운 연결어를 사용하고, 문장을 간결하게 만드는 것이 필요합니다.
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group because sharing funny videos with friends makes me happy, and everyone enjoys them together.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 문법 오류와 부자연스러운 표현이 있습니다. 'like meet other' 대신 'like meeting others'와 같은 올바른 표현을 사용하고, 문장 구조를 개선해야 합니다.
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because I enjoy meeting people in person. That's why I often go to cafes with my friends to chat.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 답변이 불명확하고 마지막 문장이 이해하기 어렵습니다. 'I have a nut problem'은 문맥에 맞지 않으므로 명확한 이유나 상황을 설명하는 문장으로 바꾸어야 합니다.
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but we always resolve our disagreements by talking calmly.
× I especially like meeting my friends because I like to talk to them and hanging out with my friends.
✓ I especially like meeting my friends because I like to talk to them and hang out with my friends.
After 'like to', the verb should be in base form 'hang' instead of gerund 'hanging'. The structure 'like to do something' requires the base verb form after 'to'.
× So I want to share my feeling.
✓ So I want to share my feelings.
The noun 'feeling' should be plural 'feelings' when referring to emotions in general. Using singular 'feeling' is less natural in this context.
× I prefer to chat with a group because I was really happy when I shared the funny videos my friends always enjoy.
✓ I prefer to chat with a group because I am really happy when I share the funny videos my friends always enjoy.
The sentence talks about a habitual action and current preference, so present tense 'am' and 'share' should be used instead of past tense 'was' and 'shared'.
× I prefer to communicate face to face because I like people and I like meet other.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I like people and I like to meet others.
The verb 'like' should be followed by 'to meet' (infinitive form), and 'other' should be plural 'others' to refer to other people.
× Therefore I always go to cafe with my friends to talk.
✓ Therefore I always go to a cafe with my friends to talk.
The noun 'cafe' requires an article 'a' before it. Also, 'to cafe' is incorrect without an article.