Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢和朋友聊天的观点，但语言不够自然，存在语法错误和表达不清的问题。建议使用更地道的表达方式，避免重复和语法错误，例如将“bring me some unwind atmosphere”改为“help me relax”，并且注意句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay informed about current events in society.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，使用正确的时态和表达方式，并且避免重复，如“we browsing on my on my phone”应改为“we browse on my phone”。

Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about social events, interesting videos we find on our phones, and sometimes major problems that I need help solving.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确。建议使用完整句子，注意主谓一致，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。例如，将“it can bring me a lot of perspective from them own opinion”改为“because it allows me to hear different perspectives from their opinions”。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different perspectives, which gives us more options to solve common problems.

Gợi ý: 回答中有较多口语填充词“uh”，影响流畅度。建议减少填充词，使用更自然的表达，并注意语法，如“there are someone who loved you face to face”应改为“some people prefer face-to-face communication”。

Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because I can use emojis to express my feelings. However, some people prefer face-to-face communication because they value eye contact.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰，影响理解。建议简化句子结构，避免重复和口语填充词，明确表达观点。例如，将“argue for the right or the most convenient effect if uh, solution”改为“argue to find the best solution”。

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes we have different opinions on a topic, so we argue to find the best solution without affecting our friendship.

× I love chatting with my friend because it can bring me some unwind atmosphere and it can know some information about today's society.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because it can bring me some unwinding atmosphere and it can help me know some information about today's society.

这里的friend应该用复数friends，因为通常我们和多个朋友聊天。

× I love chatting with my friend because it can bring me some unwind atmosphere and it can know some information about today's society.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because it can bring me some unwinding atmosphere and it can help me know some information about today's society.

unwind是动词，作为形容词应使用unwinding，表示放松的氛围。

× I love chatting with my friend because it can bring me some unwind atmosphere and it can know some information about today's society.

✓ I love chatting with my friends because it can bring me some unwinding atmosphere and it can help me know some information about today's society.

it指代不明确，聊天带来的氛围和信息应用it来指代不合适，改为it can help me know更准确。

× There are many things I chat with my friends like social event or some interesting video we browsing on my on my phone and even some major problems that I can't solve the.

✓ There are many things I chat about with my friends like social events or some interesting videos we browse on my phone and even some major problems that I can't solve.

social event和interesting video应使用复数形式social events和interesting videos。

× There are many things I chat with my friends like social event or some interesting video we browsing on my on my phone and even some major problems that I can't solve the.

✓ There are many things I chat about with my friends like social events or some interesting videos we browse on my phone and even some major problems that I can't solve.

动词chat后应接介词about，表示谈论某事。

× There are many things I chat with my friends like social event or some interesting video we browsing on my on my phone and even some major problems that I can't solve the.

✓ There are many things I chat about with my friends like social events or some interesting videos we browse on my phone and even some major problems that I can't solve.

we browsing应改为we browse，主语是we，动词用一般现在时。

× There are many things I chat with my friends like social event or some interesting video we browsing on my on my phone and even some major problems that I can't solve the.

✓ There are many things I chat about with my friends like social events or some interesting videos we browse on my phone and even some major problems that I can't solve.

句子结构混乱，缺少介词和动词形式错误，需调整使句子通顺。

× I prefer chat with a good group of people because it can bring me a lot of perspective from them own opinion that can have more choices for us to solve a typical problem.

✓ I prefer to chat with a good group of people because it can bring me a lot of perspectives from their own opinions that can give us more choices to solve a typical problem.

perspective和opinion应使用复数形式，表示多个观点和意见。

× I prefer chat with a good group of people because it can bring me a lot of perspective from them own opinion that can have more choices for us to solve a typical problem.

✓ I prefer to chat with a good group of people because it can bring me a lot of perspectives from their own opinions that can give us more choices to solve a typical problem.

them应改为their，表示所属关系。

× I prefer chat with a good group of people because it can bring me a lot of perspective from them own opinion that can have more choices for us to solve a typical problem.

✓ I prefer to chat with a good group of people because it can bring me a lot of perspectives from their own opinions that can give us more choices to solve a typical problem.

can have改为can give，更符合表达“提供选择”的意思。

× I prefer communicate, uh, on social media because it can use some, uh, emoji, express your feeling, uh, actually.

✓ I prefer to communicate, uh, on social media because I can use some, uh, emojis to express my feelings, uh, actually.

主语和宾语代词使用错误，should用I和my。

× I prefer communicate, uh, on social media because it can use some, uh, emoji, express your feeling, uh, actually.

✓ I prefer to communicate, uh, on social media because I can use some, uh, emojis to express my feelings, uh, actually.

prefer后面应接不定式to communicate，而不是动词原形。

× I prefer communicate, uh, on social media because it can use some, uh, emoji, express your feeling, uh, actually.

✓ I prefer to communicate, uh, on social media because I can use some, uh, emojis to express my feelings, uh, actually.

emoji和feeling应使用复数形式emojis和feelings。

× But there are someone who loved you face to face because they can have some eye contact.

✓ But there are some people who love face-to-face communication because they can have some eye contact.

someone应改为some people，you应改为face-to-face communication，更符合语境。

× Yes, sometime, uh, we have different uh, opinion about one question that we will argue for the right or the most convenient effect if uh, solution to solve the problem that don't influence our friendship.

✓ Yes, sometimes, uh, we have different, uh, opinions about one question that we argue about the right or the most convenient solution to solve the problem that doesn't influence our friendship.

sometime应为sometimes，opinions复数，argue后应加about，doesn't对应单数主语problem。

× Yes, sometime, uh, we have different uh, opinion about one question that we will argue for the right or the most convenient effect if uh, solution to solve the problem that don't influence our friendship.

✓ Yes, sometimes, uh, we have different, uh, opinions about one question that we argue about the right or the most convenient solution to solve the problem that doesn't influence our friendship.

different后应接复数名词opinions。

× Yes, sometime, uh, we have different uh, opinion about one question that we will argue for the right or the most convenient effect if uh, solution to solve the problem that don't influence our friendship.

✓ Yes, sometimes, uh, we have different, uh, opinions about one question that we argue about the right or the most convenient solution to solve the problem that doesn't influence our friendship.

句中if用法不当，应去掉或改为to。