Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question, using correct grammar, and limiting your answer to about 3-4 sentences. Also, avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps strengthen our bond. Whenever I feel bored or stressed, talking with them cheers me up and is one of my favorite ways to relax.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some good points but is a bit confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details, use linking words, and be specific. Also, avoid mixing pronouns and unclear expressions.

Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about school subjects, especially when I need help with homework. Besides that, we also talk about daily life to relax, which helps me feel comfortable and focus better on my studies.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use clearer sentence structures and linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid unnecessary details that do not directly answer the question.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood. If I need to share important information, I prefer chatting with a group. However, most of the time, I like talking one-on-one with my close friend Gurleen because she inspires me and supports me.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear due to grammatical mistakes and awkward expressions. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, correct grammar, and linking words to make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps me build confidence and social skills. However, when I am busy, I use social media since it saves time and is convenient.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many grammatical errors and awkward phrases. Try to express your ideas more clearly and directly, use correct grammar, and avoid redundancy. Also, provide specific examples in a coherent way using linking words.

Ví dụ: I usually avoid arguing with friends because it can harm our relationship. For example, two years ago, I disagreed with a friend who wanted me to skip an important class. I prefer to focus on my studies instead of getting involved in conflicts.

× Definitely, I really liked you chatting with my friends because it really helped me to make our bond become more strong and it is one of the part of my recreation activity which I enjoy the most.

✓ Definitely, I really liked chatting with my friends because it really helped me to make our bond stronger and it is one of the parts of my recreational activities which I enjoy the most.

The phrase 'liked you chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'liked chatting' to correctly use the verb + -ing form. Also, 'more strong' should be 'stronger' (comparative adjective). 'One of the part' should be 'one of the parts' to match plural form. 'Recreation activity' should be 'recreational activities' to use the correct adjective and plural noun.

× Well, whenever I felt frustrated or bored, I really I always prefer to do chart did chatting with my friends and did a lot of fun with him.

✓ Well, whenever I feel frustrated or bored, I always prefer chatting with my friends and have a lot of fun with them.

The phrase 'prefer to do chart did chatting' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'prefer chatting' to use the verb + -ing form correctly. Also, 'did a lot of fun' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have a lot of fun'. 'With him' should be 'with them' to match plural 'friends'. The tense should be present to match habitual action.

× Well, whenever I felt frustrated or bored, I really I always prefer to do chart did chatting with my friends and did a lot of fun with him.

✓ Well, whenever I feel frustrated or bored, I always prefer chatting with my friends and have a lot of fun with them.

The pronoun 'him' is incorrect when referring to 'friends' (plural). It should be 'them' to agree in number.

× Umm, well, most of the times I prefer to talk with her about my subjects like in case if I have any problems uh, with my homework.

✓ Umm, well, most of the time I prefer to talk with them about my subjects, like in case I have any problems with my homework.

'Her' is incorrect when referring to friends in general; 'them' is appropriate for plural or unspecified gender. Also, 'most of the times' should be 'most of the time'.

× Moreover, whenever I felt bored or uncomfortable, at that time I prefer to do chit chat with him that make me feel cozy or graduating due to which I can concentrate on my study without any type of difficulty.

✓ Moreover, whenever I feel bored or uncomfortable, I prefer to chit-chat with him, which makes me feel cozy or relaxed, allowing me to concentrate on my studies without any difficulty.

'Prefer to do chit chat' is incorrect; 'prefer to chit-chat' or 'prefer chit-chatting' is correct. 'That make' should be 'which makes' to agree with singular subject. 'Graduating' is incorrect in this context; 'relaxed' or 'comfortable' fits better. 'Study' should be plural 'studies'.

× Whenever I had to given a message something important to lot of people at the time, I prefer to chat with the group of people or but most of the times I really like to talk with one of my closest friend.

✓ Whenever I have to give an important message to a lot of people, I prefer to chat with a group of people, but most of the time I really like to talk with one of my closest friends.

'Had to given' is incorrect past tense; it should be 'have to give' for present habitual action. 'A message something important' is incorrect word order; it should be 'an important message'. 'Lot of people' needs 'a' before 'lot'. 'Most of the times' should be 'most of the time'. 'One of my closest friend' should be 'one of my closest friends' to match plural.

× Whenever I had to given a message something important to lot of people at the time, I prefer to chat with the group of people or but most of the times I really like to talk with one of my closest friend.

✓ Whenever I have to give an important message to a lot of people, I prefer to chat with a group of people, but most of the time I really like to talk with one of my closest friends.

'The group of people' should be 'a group of people' to indicate any group, not a specific one. Also, 'one of my closest friend' should be 'one of my closest friends' to agree in number.

× She always inspire me to do something and I always prefer to talk with her.

✓ She always inspires me to do something and I always prefer to talk with her.

'Inspire' should be 'inspires' to agree with third person singular subject 'She'.

× Well, I really liked you, uh, conversate with other, uh, while phase two phase because it helped me to develop a confidence to face another one apart from it And uh, it will also helpful in the future because it make me a social butterfly.

✓ Well, I really like to converse with others face to face because it helps me develop confidence to face others. Apart from that, it will also be helpful in the future because it makes me a social butterfly.

'Liked you conversate' is incorrect; it should be 'like to converse'. 'Conversate' is nonstandard; 'converse' is correct. 'While phase two phase' should be 'face to face'. 'Helped me to develop a confidence' should be 'helps me develop confidence'. 'It will also helpful' should be 'it will also be helpful'. 'It make me' should be 'it makes me'.

× But however, sometime I was a bit busy at a time. I prefer to talk on a social media.

✓ However, sometimes I am a bit busy, so I prefer to talk on social media.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'I was a bit busy at a time' is awkward; 'I am a bit busy' fits better for habitual action. 'Talk on a social media' should be 'talk on social media' (no article needed).

× I prefer to talk on a social media.

✓ I prefer to talk on social media.

'Social media' is an uncountable noun and does not require an article 'a'.

× Suddenly not it is not my cup of tea.

✓ Suddenly, no, it is not my cup of tea.

'Suddenly not' is incorrect; 'no' is the correct negation here. 'Suddenly' is misplaced and should be separated by commas.

× It really destroy our friendship boards and I'm not able to take a risk of it.

✓ It really destroys our friendship bonds and I'm not willing to take that risk.

'Destroy' should be 'destroys' to agree with singular subject. 'Boards' is incorrect; 'bonds' is the correct word. 'Take a risk of it' is awkward; 'take that risk' is better.

× I vividly remember that roughly 2 years ago I had a disagreement with one of my friend because she insisted me to to leave my important class.

✓ I vividly remember that roughly 2 years ago I had a disagreement with one of my friends because she insisted that I leave my important class.

'One of my friend' should be 'one of my friends'. 'Insisted me to to leave' is incorrect; it should be 'insisted that I leave' or 'insisted on me leaving'.

× I vividly remember that roughly 2 years ago I had a disagreement with one of my friend because she insisted me to to leave my important class.

✓ I vividly remember that roughly 2 years ago I had a disagreement with one of my friends because she insisted that I leave my important class.

'Insisted me to to leave' is incorrect; the verb 'insist' is followed by 'that' + subject + base verb or 'insist on' + gerund. Also, 'one of my friend' should be 'one of my friends'.

× That it is not my cup, it's not my habit of creatures.

✓ That is not my cup of tea; it's not my habit or nature.

'Habit of creatures' is incorrect and unclear; 'habit or nature' is appropriate. Also, 'That it is not my cup' should be 'That is not my cup of tea'.

× I always prefer to consider it on my studies rather than any buelling activities.

✓ I always prefer to focus on my studies rather than any bullying activities.

'Consider it on my studies' is incorrect; 'focus on my studies' is correct. 'Buelling' is a misspelling of 'bullying'.