Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yeah, of course. I very like chatting with my friends because if I'm in in a bad mood or have some unhappy things, I always share something with my friends and he gave me some international suggestions and make me very happy.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Oh yeah, really? I always chat with my friends because I think chatting with my friends is a efficient way to make me very happy and chatting with my friends can increase our relationship than before.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Oh yeah, I prefer to chat with the only friend because I think it's very convenient and allow for a more personal con con conversation and I think when I talking 1 by 1 to one it can open our thoughts to others.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Oh absolutely, I prefer to communicate with my friends is on the social media because I can chat with my friends is anytime, any anywhere so and it's time saving and in addition is very convenient.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Oh yeah, absolutely. Last week we argued about a math problems. I think my math problem's answer is the right, but you don't think so. We have a serious argue in addition. Finally, we solve it.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“I very like”应为“I really like”,且“international suggestions”用词不当,应为“interesting suggestions”。建议注意语法正确性和用词准确性,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because when I'm feeling down, I can share my problems with them, and they often give me helpful advice that cheers me up.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏具体内容,且表达重复且不连贯。建议直接回答问题,提供具体话题内容,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, hobbies, and sometimes school or work. This helps us stay close and understand each other better.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复词汇,如“con con conversation”,且表达不够清晰。建议注意语法准确,避免重复,并清楚表达观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a friend because it's more convenient and allows for a more personal and open conversation.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“is on the social media”,且表达不够简洁。建议简化句子结构,注意语法,使用恰当的连接词。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate via social media because I can chat with my friends anytime and anywhere, which saves time and is very convenient.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如“a math problems”,“a serious argue”,且表达不够连贯。建议注意单复数和词性使用,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, we sometimes argue. For example, last week we disagreed about a math problem. I thought my answer was correct, but my friend disagreed. However, we discussed it seriously and finally solved the problem together.
× I very like chatting with my friends because if I'm in in a bad mood or have some unhappy things, I always share something with my friends and he gave me some international suggestions and make me very happy.
✓ I really like chatting with my friends because if I'm in a bad mood or have some unhappy things, I always share something with my friends and they give me some interesting suggestions and make me very happy.
这里 'very like' 是错误的搭配,应该用 'really like'。另外,'he gave me some international suggestions' 中 'he' 指代不明且时态不一致,改为 'they give me some interesting suggestions' 更合适。'international' 应为 'interesting' 更符合语境。
× I always chat with my friends because I think chatting with my friends is a efficient way to make me very happy and chatting with my friends can increase our relationship than before.
✓ I always chat with my friends because I think chatting with my friends is an efficient way to make me very happy and chatting with my friends can improve our relationship compared to before.
'a efficient' 中 'efficient' 以元音音素开头,前面应使用不定冠词 'an'。'increase our relationship than before' 结构不正确,应该用 'improve our relationship compared to before'。
× I always share something with my friends and he gave me some international suggestions and make me very happy.
✓ I always share something with my friends and they give me some interesting suggestions and make me very happy.
前文提到的是复数 'friends',后文却用单数代词 'he',代词不一致,应改为复数 'they'。
× I prefer to chat with the only friend because I think it's very convenient and allow for a more personal con con conversation and I think when I talking 1 by 1 to one it can open our thoughts to others.
✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I think it's very convenient and allows for a more personal conversation, and I think when I talk one-on-one with someone, it can open our thoughts to others.
'the only friend' 应改为 'only one friend'。'allow' 主语是单数,需改为 'allows'。'con con conversation' 是重复错误,应为 'conversation'。'when I talking' 应为 'when I talk'。'1 by 1 to one' 应改为 'one-on-one with someone'。
× I prefer to communicate with my friends is on the social media because I can chat with my friends is anytime, any anywhere so and it's time saving and in addition is very convenient.
✓ I prefer to communicate with my friends on social media because I can chat with my friends anytime, anywhere, and it's time-saving and very convenient.
句中多余的 'is' 应删除。'on the social media' 应为 'on social media'。'any anytime, any anywhere' 应为 'anytime, anywhere'。'time saving' 应为复合形容词 'time-saving'。
× Last week we argued about a math problems. I think my math problem's answer is the right, but you don't think so. We have a serious argue in addition. Finally, we solve it.
✓ Last week we argued about a math problem. I thought my math problem's answer was right, but you didn't think so. We had a serious argument. Finally, we solved it.
'a math problems' 数量不符,应为 'a math problem'。时态应保持一致,描述过去事件时应使用过去时,如 'thought', 'was', 'didn't think', 'had', 'solved'。'argue' 名词形式应为 'argument'。