Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always invite my friend, eat dinner and we always talk about what happens today. I like chatting with them because I feel relaxed and release my work stress.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We usually chat about the foods we like because we think the foods can make us feel happy, especially the and sweaty food. We all like cakes and bags.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to chat with a group of people because I like to listen different opinions and sharing ideas with many friends. I think they are all important for me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate phase two phase which can observe the emotions and. Learn more about their thinking.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I think I should admit the different thinking which can make me understand better and do something effective.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议注意主谓一致和时态使用,避免重复表达。可以简洁明了地表达观点,并适当丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often have dinner together and talk about our day. It helps me relax and relieve stress from work.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“sweaty food”和“bags”用词不当。建议使用准确的词汇,并提供具体细节。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about our favorite foods because eating delicious food makes us happy. For example, we all enjoy cakes and spicy dishes.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清晰,但存在语法错误,如动词形式不一致。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people because I enjoy listening to different opinions and sharing ideas. It helps me learn from others.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在严重语法和表达不完整的问题,且“phase two phase”应为“face to face”。建议注意拼写和完整表达观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can observe emotions and better understand what others are thinking.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够自然,存在语法错误和用词不当。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并具体说明理由。
Ví dụ: No, I usually accept different opinions because it helps me understand others better and find effective solutions.
× Yes, I always invite my friend, eat dinner and we always talk about what happens today.
✓ Yes, I always invite my friends, eat dinner and we always talk about what happens today.
这里的friend应该用复数形式friends,因为通常是和多个朋友一起吃饭和聊天。
× Yes, I always invite my friend, eat dinner and we always talk about what happens today.
✓ Yes, I always invite my friends, eat dinner and we always talk about what happened today.
这里的时间是过去发生的事情,应该用过去时态happened,而不是现在时态happens。
× We usually chat about the foods we like because we think the foods can make us feel happy, especially the and sweaty food.
✓ We usually chat about the food we like because we think the food can make us feel happy, especially the sweet and salty food.
food是不可数名词,不用复数形式foods。
× We usually chat about the foods we like because we think the foods can make us feel happy, especially the and sweaty food.
✓ We usually chat about the food we like because we think the food can make us feel happy, especially the sweet and salty food.
原句中'sweaty'是错误的形容词,应该是'sweet'(甜的)和'salty'(咸的)。
× We all like cakes and bags.
✓ We all like cakes and bags.
bags可能是拼写错误,应该是'biscuits'或其他食物名称,如果是bags则语义不通,建议确认单词。
× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I like to listen different opinions and sharing ideas with many friends.
✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I like to listen to different opinions and share ideas with many friends.
listen后面需要介词to;sharing应改为动词原形share,与like搭配。
× I prefer to chat with a group of people because I like to listen different opinions and sharing ideas with many friends.
✓ I prefer to chat with a group of people because I like to listen to different opinions and share ideas with many friends.
like后面接动词时,动词要用不定式或动名词,但这里两个动作应保持一致,使用不定式更合适。
× I think they are all important for me.
✓ I think they are all important to me.
important后面搭配介词to,而不是for。
× I prefer to communicate phase two phase which can observe the emotions and.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face which allows me to observe the emotions and
phase two phase是错误表达,正确是face to face;can observe改为allows me to observe更自然。
× I prefer to communicate phase two phase which can observe the emotions and.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can observe the emotions and learn more about their thinking.
原句不完整,缺少后半部分,需补充完整句子使表达清晰。
× No, I think I should admit the different thinking which can make me understand better and do something effective.
✓ No, I think I should accept different opinions which can help me understand better and do something effective.
admit用法不当,应使用accept;different thinking改为different opinions更符合语境。