Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢与朋友聊天的原因，但句子结构有些重复且不够连贯。建议使用更多连接词，使表达更自然流畅，同时注意语法，如"always ready"应为"always ready"。

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I am an outgoing person who is always ready to talk. Moreover, through these conversations, I can learn many new things and feel relaxed, which helps me gain energy.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较为零散，表达不够清晰，且有语法错误。建议组织答案时先给出主题句，再用具体例子支持，使用连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually talk about my feelings with my friends. For instance, if I have a happy day, I share the good news with them. On the other hand, if I face difficulties, I tell them about it, and they comfort me, which helps me feel better. Besides, I also discuss my future plans with them.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但语法和用词有误，如"has"应为"have"，"most closed"应为"closest"。建议注意语法准确性，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because many people have their own secrets and do not want to share them with others. Usually, they only share their feelings and secrets with the person they trust the most. Therefore, I feel more comfortable talking to one close friend.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和句子不完整，如"Where I prefer"应为"I prefer"，句尾不完整。建议注意句子完整性和语法准确，使用连接词增强逻辑。

Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because on social media, you cannot see people's facial expressions or gestures. This sometimes leads to misunderstandings. However, when talking in person, you can better understand their true feelings.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但"get Better Together"表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意句子结构的连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, of course. Sometimes I argue with my friends when our opinions differ. I think this is normal because everyone has different views. Even when we argue, we try to find a way to improve our relationship and understand each other better.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friend because I'm an outgoing person who always ready to chat with others.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friend because I'm an outgoing person who is always ready to chat with others.

这里缺少了动词“is”，导致谓语不完整。作为定语从句，'who'后面需要有动词，表示状态。应加上“is”使句子完整。

× Through this process, I can learn a lot of things from them and get relaxed.

✓ Through this process, I can learn a lot of things from them and get relaxed.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× I can just get a lot of energy through chatting with people.

✓ I can just get a lot of energy through chatting with people.

此句无明显单复数错误，保持原句。

× I usually chat about my feelings with my friend.

✓ I usually chat about my feelings with my friends.

前文提到多位朋友，且通常与朋友们聊天，故“friend”应改为复数“friends”。

× For example today I'm so happy and I will share my happy things with my friend.

✓ For example, today I'm so happy and I will share my happy things with my friend.

此句时态正确，无需修改。

× Or today I just meet a terrible things and I also share it with my friends.

✓ Or today I just met a terrible thing and I also shared it with my friends.

“meet”应使用过去式“met”，因为描述的是过去发生的事情；“things”应为单数“thing”，因为前面用了“a”。

× My friends will comfort me which will relax me a lot.

✓ My friends will comfort me, which will relax me a lot.

此句无单复数错误，但缺少逗号，增加逗号使句子更通顺。

× Other things that I will show change.

✓ Other things that I will show change.

此句结构不完整，缺少谓语动词，建议重写为“Other things that I will show are changes.”或“Other things that I will show have changed.”。

× Share my plan in the future with my.

✓ I will share my plan for the future with my friends.

此句缺少主语和宾语，且“my”后缺少名词，需补充完整。

× Well, I prefer to chat with only one friend because you know that a lot of people has their own secrets, don't want to share with others.

✓ Well, I prefer to chat with only one friend because you know that a lot of people have their own secrets and don't want to share with others.

“people”是复数，谓语动词应为“have”而非“has”；且两个并列句之间应加连词“and”。

× They only talk about their feelings and secrets to someone most closed to them and they trust.

✓ They only talk about their feelings and secrets to someone closest to them and whom they trust.

“most closed”应为“closest”，且“they trust”前应加关系代词“whom”以连接从句。

× That's why I prefer to chat with only one friend.

✓ That's why I prefer to chat with only one friend.

此句无单复数错误，保持原句。

× Where I prefer to communicate face to face, because if you only on social media, you can't see their face, their true feelings, their gestures.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because if you are only on social media, you can't see their face, their true feelings, or their gestures.

句首“Where”用法错误，应去掉；“if you only on social media”缺少动词，应为“if you are only on social media”；并且列举时应加“or”。

× It's sometimes will make some misunderstandings, but if you talk face to face, you can catch the true feelings and.

✓ Sometimes it will cause misunderstandings, but if you talk face to face, you can catch the true feelings.

“It's sometimes will”结构错误，应改为“Sometimes it will”；句尾“and”后无内容，应删除。

× Yes, of course. Sometimes I will argue with my friends when our opinions are different.

✓ Yes, of course. Sometimes I will argue with my friends when our opinions are different.

此句无单复数错误，保持原句。

× I think it's quite normal because different people have different opinions.

✓ I think it's quite normal because different people have different opinions.

此句结构正确，无需修改。

× Even though we argue with each other, we just try to find the way that we can get Better Together.

✓ Even though we argue with each other, we just try to find a way to get better together.

“the way that we can get Better Together”表达不自然，应改为“a way to get better together”，且“Better”不应大写。