Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、"in a lot of fields such as foods, music and cultures"の表現が少し不自然です。より具体的で自然な表現に改善しましょう。また、"makes me fresh"は英語として不自然なので、別の表現を使うと良いです。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about various topics like food, music, and culture. It helps me relax and feel refreshed.

Gợi ý: 文法ミスや不自然な表現が多いです。"let me take an one example"は誤りで、"let me give you an example"などが適切です。また、文が断片的でつながりが弱いので、接続詞を使って論理的に話しましょう。

Ví dụ: Let me give you an example. I usually chat about daily life in Japan because my friend lives in France. Recently, we often talk about what happened at work.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り（"I'm get nervous"）や文の未完成（"prefer chatting with."）があります。より正確な文法を使い、理由を明確に述べると良いです。

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I get nervous when talking to a large group. Also, I feel uncomfortable sharing personal stories in front of many people.

Gợi ý: "I'll prefer"は不自然で、"I prefer"が適切です。また、"Saying facial expressions are really important to talk with"は意味が伝わりにくいので、より明確な表現にしましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see my friend's facial expressions. These expressions are important as they help me understand their feelings better.

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わりますが、"conflicts are sometimes stressing us a lot"は不自然です。"stressful"を使い、文を分けてより明確にしましょう。

Ví dụ: No, I don't argue with my friends because conflicts can be very stressful. I prefer to avoid arguments so that we can enjoy our time together.

× I usually talk with my friends in a lot of fields such as foods, music and cultures.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about many topics such as food, music, and culture.

'A lot of fields' is not a natural collocation here; 'many topics' is more appropriate. Also, 'foods' and 'cultures' are usually uncountable or used in singular form when talking generally, so 'food' and 'culture' are better.

× I usually chat about the daily lives in Japan because my friend lives in France.

✓ I usually chat about daily life in Japan because my friend lives in France.

'The daily lives' is incorrect here; 'daily life' is an uncountable noun and should be used without 'the' and in singular form.

× I talk a lot of things, for example, what happened in the company.

✓ I talk about a lot of things, for example, what happened in the company.

The verb 'talk' requires the preposition 'about' when referring to topics. Also, 'a lot of things' is correct but needs 'about' after 'talk'.

× I don't prefer to chat with a group of people.

✓ I don't prefer chatting with a group of people.

The verb 'prefer' is usually followed by a gerund ('chatting') or 'to' plus verb. 'Don't prefer to chat' is less natural than 'don't prefer chatting'.

× It is because I'm get nervous when I talk with a lot of people.

✓ It is because I get nervous when I talk with a lot of people.

The auxiliary verb 'am' should not be used with the base verb 'get' here; 'I get nervous' is correct.

× That's why I prefer chatting with.

✓ That's why I prefer chatting with one person.

The sentence is incomplete; it needs an object after 'with' to be grammatically correct.

× I'll prefer to communicate face to face because I can see my friend's expressions when we are talking.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I can see my friend's expressions when we are talking.

'I'll prefer' is incorrect; 'I prefer' is the correct present tense form. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb or adjective.

× Saying facial expressions are really important to talk with because I can suggest their feelings.

✓ I think facial expressions are really important when talking because I can understand their feelings.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Saying' is incorrect here; 'I think' or 'I believe' is better. 'Suggest their feelings' is incorrect; 'understand their feelings' is appropriate.

× No, I don't argue with my friends because conflicts are sometimes stressing us a lot and I want to avoid that.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends because conflicts sometimes stress us a lot and I want to avoid that.

'Stressing' is incorrect here; the verb should be 'stress' in present tense. Also, 'sometimes' should be placed before the verb for natural word order.

× Also I want to spend time with with my friends enjoyably that's why I avoid conflict with my friends.

✓ Also, I want to spend time with my friends enjoyably; that's why I avoid conflict with them.

The sentence has repeated 'with' and lacks proper punctuation. Adding a comma after 'Also' and a semicolon before 'that's why' improves clarity. Replacing 'my friends' with 'them' avoids repetition.