Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, umm, I frequently chatting with my friends, uh, uh, daily and uh, this make us well connected around all, umm, circle of different groups and uh, we keep communicating and we use for this group, uh, communications.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Uh, we uh, often chat with the friends regarding the different topics, uh, as per, uh, daily schedule or routine, uh, we are facing, uh, for example, so we can talk about, uh, some uh, programs are relating, uh, daily schedule where we need to do and.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
As per my perspective, I would like to go in the group to make the communications more enjoyable and funny and informative as well. But somehow it's also the pain When you come to private sections, you can only chat with those single person, so it can be with the.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I consider more the way of communication face to face, uh, while, uh, social media, but sometime it's also depends when we, you are living in the higher distance, uh, destination. So you can contact, uh, or, or through social media and get the uh.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes Sir, I myself have the habits of arguments with my friends and most of the time when there's a wrong point we rise around friends and the way they communicate their statements and we find out at the the wrong way. So we argue on the same topic many many times and.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Try to use correct verb forms and avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'umm'. Make your sentences clear and concise, for example, say 'I frequently chat with my friends daily, which helps us stay well connected across different groups.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I frequently chat with my friends daily, which helps us stay well connected across different groups.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Avoid excessive hesitation and incomplete sentences. Provide specific examples and use linking words to make your answer coherent. For example, 'We often chat about our daily routines and plans, such as upcoming events or tasks we need to complete.'
Ví dụ: We often chat about our daily routines and plans, such as upcoming events or tasks we need to complete.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to compare your preferences. For example, 'I prefer chatting in groups because it is more enjoyable and informative, but sometimes private chats with one friend are better for personal conversations.'
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting in groups because it is more enjoyable and informative, but sometimes private chats with one friend are better for personal conversations.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use clear structure and linking words. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more personal, but when friends live far away, I use social media to stay in touch.'
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more personal, but when friends live far away, I use social media to stay in touch.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Try to organize your answer clearly and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain reasons. For example, 'Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we disagree on a point, and we often discuss the same topic several times to understand each other better.'
Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when we disagree on a point, and we often discuss the same topic several times to understand each other better.
× I frequently chatting with my friends, uh, uh, daily and uh, this make us well connected around all, umm, circle of different groups and uh, we keep communicating and we use for this group, uh, communications.
✓ I frequently chat with my friends daily, and this makes us well connected around all circles of different groups. We keep communicating and use this group for communications.
The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used after 'frequently'; it should be the base form 'chat' because 'frequently' is an adverb modifying the verb. Also, 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'this'. The phrase 'we use for this group, communications' is awkward and corrected to 'we use this group for communications' for clarity and correct preposition use.
× this make us well connected around all, umm, circle of different groups
✓ this makes us well connected around all circles of different groups
The subject 'this' is singular, so the verb should be 'makes' instead of 'make' to agree in number. Also, 'circle' should be plural 'circles' to match 'all'.
× we use for this group, uh, communications
✓ we use this group for communications
The preposition 'for' is incorrectly placed before 'this group'. The correct structure is 'use this group for communications' where 'for' introduces the purpose.
× we uh, often chat with the friends regarding the different topics
✓ we often chat with friends about different topics
The preposition 'regarding' is formal and less common in spoken English; 'about' is more natural here. Also, 'the friends' is incorrect; 'friends' without 'the' is appropriate when speaking generally.
× we uh, often chat with the friends regarding the different topics
✓ we often chat with friends about different topics
The definite article 'the' before 'friends' and 'different topics' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Removing 'the' makes the sentence more natural.
× as per, uh, daily schedule or routine, uh, we are facing, uh, for example, so we can talk about, uh, some uh, programs are relating, uh, daily schedule where we need to do and.
✓ According to our daily schedule or routine, we face different things. For example, we can talk about some programs related to the daily schedule that we need to do.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear structure. Reorganizing the sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× programs are relating, uh, daily schedule
✓ programs related to the daily schedule
The phrase 'are relating' is incorrect; the correct form is 'related to' to show connection with the daily schedule.
× As per my perspective, I would like to go in the group to make the communications more enjoyable and funny and informative as well.
✓ From my perspective, I would like to join the group to make communications more enjoyable, funny, and informative as well.
The phrase 'As per my perspective' is awkward; 'From my perspective' is more natural. Also, 'go in the group' should be 'join the group'. 'The communications' should be 'communications' without 'the'.
× make the communications more enjoyable and funny and informative as well
✓ make communications more enjoyable, funny, and informative as well
The definite article 'the' before 'communications' is unnecessary when speaking generally.
× But somehow it's also the pain When you come to private sections, you can only chat with those single person, so it can be with the.
✓ But sometimes it's also painful. When you come to private sections, you can only chat with a single person.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Rewriting it improves clarity and grammatical correctness.
× I consider more the way of communication face to face, uh, while, uh, social media
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication more than social media
The phrase 'consider more the way of communication face to face' is awkward. 'Prefer face-to-face communication' is clearer. Also, 'while social media' is incomplete; 'more than social media' is better.
× when we, you are living in the higher distance, uh, destination
✓ when you are living at a far distance or destination
The phrase 'in the higher distance' is incorrect; 'at a far distance' is the correct prepositional phrase.
× So you can contact, uh, or, or through social media and get the uh.
✓ So you can contact others through social media and get in touch.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Completing the sentence improves clarity.
× Yes Sir, I myself have the habits of arguments with my friends and most of the time when there's a wrong point we rise around friends and the way they communicate their statements and we find out at the the wrong way.
✓ Yes Sir, I myself have the habit of arguing with my friends, and most of the time when there is a wrong point, we argue among friends about the way they communicate their statements, and we find out the wrong way.
The phrase 'habits of arguments' should be 'habit of arguing'. 'Rise around friends' is incorrect; 'argue among friends' is correct. Also, 'find out at the the wrong way' is corrected to 'find out the wrong way'.
× So we argue on the same topic many many times and.
✓ So we argue about the same topic many times.
The sentence is incomplete and redundant. Removing the extra 'and' and 'many' improves clarity.