Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng cụm từ không chính xác như "from his experience" và nên sử dụng thì đúng, ví dụ "it helps me" thay vì "it helped me". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp lại ý và sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and learn from their experiences.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "what struggles we need other to help us to overcome". Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về chủ đề trò chuyện.

Ví dụ: We usually talk about our daily lives, such as the challenges we face and how we can support each other to overcome them.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group because discussing problems with many people helps me gain more experience and knowledge.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ như "that's way more convenient" nên là "it's more convenient". Bạn cũng nên sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ.

Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because it's more convenient. For instance, I can chat with my friends or family even when I'm on the bus.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng, số nhiều/số ít chính xác và câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu mạch lạc và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but we always discuss our problems calmly to find practical solutions.

× I do like chatting with friends from his experience.

✓ I do like chatting with friends because of their experience.

The pronoun 'his' is incorrectly used here as it does not refer to any previously mentioned male person. The correct pronoun should be 'their' to refer to friends in general, which is plural and gender-neutral.

× Whenever I chat with my friend, I gain a lot of experience from the story and also it helped me to feel relaxed.

✓ Whenever I chat with my friend, I gain a lot of experience from the stories and it also helps me to feel relaxed.

The sentence mixes singular and plural forms incorrectly ('story' should be plural 'stories' because it refers to multiple experiences). Also, 'helped' is past tense but the context requires present tense 'helps' to match 'gain' and the habitual action.

× We often talk about our daily lives like what we face during the day and what struggles we need other to help us to overcome.

✓ We often talk about our daily lives, like what we face during the day and what struggles we need others to help us overcome.

The pronoun 'other' is incorrect; it should be 'others' to refer to other people. Also, 'help us to overcome' is better as 'help us overcome' for natural English usage.

× I like to chat with a lot of people because from my observations I have seen that a lot of people who discuss in the same problems can have a slightly more experience and knowledge in dealing with it.

✓ I like to chat with a lot of people because from my observations I have seen that a lot of people who discuss the same problems can have slightly more experience and knowledge in dealing with them.

The phrase 'discuss in the same problems' is incorrect; it should be 'discuss the same problems'. Also, 'a slightly more experience' is incorrect because 'experience' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'problems'.

× I like to communicate through social media because that's way more convenient.

✓ I like to communicate through social media because that's a way more convenient.

The phrase 'that's way more convenient' is informal and missing an article. It should be 'that's a way more convenient' or better 'that's much more convenient' for grammatical correctness.

× For example, if I have to go on a bus, I can still talk with my friends or my parents about the dinners or about my daily lives.

✓ For example, if I have to go on a bus, I can still talk with my friends or my parents about dinner or about my daily life.

'Dinners' is usually uncountable when referring to meals in general, so 'dinner' is correct. 'Daily lives' should be singular 'daily life' when referring to one's own life.

× I do argue with friend actually like we argues with each other a lot of problems and whenever I have to have some argument with hims then we would like discuss with each other to come up with the practice ideas to solve it.

✓ I do argue with friends actually, like we argue with each other about a lot of problems and whenever I have some argument with them, we discuss with each other to come up with practical ideas to solve them.

'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context. 'Argues' should be 'argue' to agree with plural subject 'we'. 'Hims' is incorrect; the correct pronoun is 'them' for plural. 'Would like discuss' should be 'discuss'. 'Practice ideas' should be 'practical ideas'. 'It' should be 'them' to refer to plural 'problems'.