Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. Chatting with friends is always very relaxing for me because it helped me unveiled after a busy day and made me refresh. We usually talk about our daily life and and our plans for the future which makes our conversation interesting and also meaningful.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, we usually chat about our daily lives, such as what happened at school or work. For example. We often discuss our clothes and assignments, as well as our future plans like cancer goals or travel ideas. In addition, we talk about current events and anything interesting happening around us.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different opinion and voice on the same question, which makes the conversation more interesting. And on the other hand, when I chat with only one friends, I sometimes feel a little bit embarrassed or unsure about what to say next.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to express my thought more clearly through the gesture and the facial expressions. This nonverbal cues make conversation more engaging and help avoid misunderstandings. For example, when talking in person, I can easily show my emotion which.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I never argue with my friends cause most of the time we hold the same opinion so there's no necessary for necessity for us to have a conflict and on the other hand on the other hand some some of us may give in to avoid conf arguments.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“helped me unveiled”应为“helps me unwind”,且句子结构略显重复。建议简化句子,注意时态和词汇的准确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Chatting with friends helps me unwind after a busy day and refresh my mind. We usually talk about our daily lives and future plans, which makes our conversations both interesting and meaningful.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中出现了明显的错误,如“cancer goals”应为“career goals”,且句子断裂影响流畅性。建议注意发音和拼写,避免语义错误,同时使用连词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually chat about our daily lives, like what happened at school or work. For example, we discuss our clothes, assignments, career goals, and travel ideas. In addition, we talk about current events and interesting things happening around us.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但存在语法错误,如“different opinion”应为“different opinions”,“one friends”应为“one friend”。建议注意单复数和冠词的正确使用,提升表达准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different opinions on the same topic, making the conversation more interesting. On the other hand, when I chat with only one friend, I sometimes feel a bit embarrassed or unsure about what to say next.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“thought”应为“thoughts”,“gesture”应为“gestures”,“nonverbal cues”应为复数,且句子未完整。建议注意语法一致性和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to express my thoughts more clearly through gestures and facial expressions. These nonverbal cues make conversations more engaging and help avoid misunderstandings. For example, when talking in person, I can easily show my emotions.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,如“no necessary for necessity”及“on the other hand”重复,且“conf arguments”表达不清。建议简化句子,避免重复,使用准确表达。
Ví dụ: No, I rarely argue with my friends because we usually share the same opinions. Also, sometimes we prefer to avoid conflicts by compromising.
× Chatting with friends is always very relaxing for me because it helped me unveiled after a busy day and made me refresh.
✓ Chatting with friends is always very relaxing for me because it helps me unwind after a busy day and makes me feel refreshed.
这里时态应与现在时态保持一致,使用一般现在时表示习惯性动作。'helped'应改为'helps','unveiled'应为'unwind','made me refresh'应为'makes me feel refreshed'。
× We usually talk about our daily life and and our plans for the future which makes our conversation interesting and also meaningful.
✓ We usually talk about our daily lives and our plans for the future, which make our conversation interesting and also meaningful.
daily life应为复数形式daily lives,主语为复数,谓语动词makes应改为make。
× I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different opinion and voice on the same question, which makes the conversation more interesting.
✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because it allows me to hear different opinions and voices on the same question, which makes the conversation more interesting.
opinion和voice应使用复数形式opinions和voices,因为表示多个不同的观点和声音。
× And on the other hand, when I chat with only one friends, I sometimes feel a little bit embarrassed or unsure about what to say next.
✓ And on the other hand, when I chat with only one friend, I sometimes feel a little bit embarrassed or unsure about what to say next.
one后面应接单数名词,friends应改为friend。
× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to express my thought more clearly through the gesture and the facial expressions.
✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows me to express my thoughts more clearly through gestures and facial expressions.
face-to-face应用连字符连接,thought应为复数形式thoughts,gesture和facial expressions前不需要定冠词the。
× This nonverbal cues make conversation more engaging and help avoid misunderstandings.
✓ These nonverbal cues make the conversation more engaging and help avoid misunderstandings.
nonverbal cues为复数,需用these,conversation前加定冠词the。
× For example, when talking in person, I can easily show my emotion which.
✓ For example, when talking in person, I can easily show my emotions.
句子不完整,去掉which,emotion应为复数emotions。
× No, I never argue with my friends cause most of the time we hold the same opinion so there's no necessary for necessity for us to have a conflict and on the other hand on the other hand some some of us may give in to avoid conf arguments.
✓ No, I never argue with my friends because most of the time we hold the same opinion, so there's no need for us to have a conflict. On the other hand, some of us may give in to avoid conflicts.
cause应改为because,necessary for necessity for重复且用法错误,应改为no need for。句子过长且重复,需拆分并去除重复的'on the other hand'和'some some',conf应为conflict或conflicts。