Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like chatting with my friends. I think this is a good way to unwind. We also like talking about some gossips about stars and our classmates.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We often talk about the latest news about celebrities. In addition, we also enjoy talking about gossip about our common friends.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
It depends on the situations. For example, if I want to talk about the celebrities, news or gossip, I prefer to chat with a group of people because everyone has their own perspectives. In addition, if I want to share my private matters, I enjoy discussing with one person.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I enjoy communicating with other people via social media because it's convenient. I don't need to waste time to find them.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
When I was a Senior High School student, I usually argued with my friends about study or some small things in life. But nowadays I don't argue with my friends because I'm mature.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“gossips”应为“gossip”,且内容较为简单,建议丰富细节并注意语法准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a busy day. We often discuss the latest news about celebrities and share interesting stories about our classmates.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复,缺乏多样性和具体细节,建议增加更多话题和具体例子,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: We usually chat about the latest celebrity news and sometimes share funny stories about our mutual friends. Besides that, we also discuss school events and upcoming plans.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,表达较好,但部分用词不够地道,如“discussing with one person”应为“discussing with one friend”,建议注意用词准确性。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For instance, when discussing celebrities or news, I prefer chatting with a group because everyone can share different viewpoints. However, for personal matters, I like to talk with just one close friend.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较简单,表达不够自然,存在语法错误,如“waste time to find them”应为“waste time looking for them”,建议丰富内容并注意语法。
Ví dụ: I prefer communicating via social media because it's very convenient. I can easily reach my friends anytime without spending time looking for them in person.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但表达略显简单,建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: When I was in senior high school, I often argued with my friends about studies or minor issues. However, now I rarely argue because I have become more mature and understanding.
× We also like talking about some gossips about stars and our classmates.
✓ We also like talking about some gossip about stars and our classmates.
“Gossip”是不可数名词,不能用复数形式“gossips”。应使用单数形式。
× We often talk about the latest news about celebrities.
✓ We often talk about the latest news of celebrities.
“News”是不可数名词,前面加“the latest”表示最新的消息,后面应用介词“of”表示关于某人的消息,而不是“about”。
× In addition, we also enjoy talking about gossip about our common friends.
✓ In addition, we also enjoy talking about gossip concerning our common friends.
避免重复使用“about”,可以用“concerning”替代,使表达更准确。
× It depends on the situations.
✓ It depends on the situation.
“Situation”在此处应为不可数名词,表示一般情况,使用单数形式。
× if I want to talk about the celebrities, news or gossip, I prefer to chat with a group of people because everyone has their own perspectives.
✓ if I want to talk about celebrities, news or gossip, I prefer to chat with a group of people because everyone has their own perspectives.
“Celebrities”前不需要定冠词“the”,因为这里指的是一般的名人,不是特指某些名人。
× I enjoy communicating with other people via social media because it's convenient.
✓ I enjoy communicating with other people through social media because it's convenient.
“Communicate”搭配介词“through”更合适,表示通过某种媒介进行交流。
× When I was a Senior High School student, I usually argued with my friends about study or some small things in life.
✓ When I was a Senior High School student, I usually argued with my friends about studying or some small things in life.
“Argued about study”中“study”应使用动名词形式“studying”,表示讨论学习相关的事情。