Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
It really depends, when I am energetic and I feel like I want to talk with my friend, I think I do like it. But when I was when I'm in low power, low energy, I like to be myself alone.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Basically they're meaningless things like what's my plan today and what interesting Tiktok I I saw and also my feelings about something. Most of them are meaningless, but some some sometime it's.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I think bows are OK. Bows are fine to me. Chatting with a group of people, you can have different perspective, different views. Sometimes it's engaging and fun, but with only one people it's more like face to face.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Actually we communicate with each other in mostly in social media nowadays, but if I have time in my friend, we both have time. We'd like to talk face to face because it feels just more real and it's just have a completely different feeling.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Most of the time I don't. I think there are basically nothing to argue about when we actually become friends, But sometimes they really did something I don't I don't like we have different values about something we probably argue.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然,有重复和语法错误。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I like chatting with friends when I feel energetic because it helps me relax. However, when I'm tired, I prefer to be alone and rest.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不完整且表达不清晰,有语法错误和重复。建议明确表达聊天内容,避免使用“meaningless”一词,增加具体细节。
Ví dụ: We usually talk about our daily plans, interesting videos we saw on TikTok, and sometimes share our feelings about different topics.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有发音错误(bows应为both),句子结构不够清晰。建议纠正发音错误,使用连贯的句子表达对两种聊天方式的看法。
Ví dụ: I enjoy both chatting with a group and with one friend. Group chats offer diverse perspectives and are fun, while one-on-one conversations feel more personal.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅。建议简化句子,注意时态和主谓一致,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Nowadays, we mostly communicate through social media. However, when both my friend and I have time, we prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more genuine and meaningful.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句子结构,清楚表达观点。
Ví dụ: I usually don't argue with my friends because we understand each other well. However, if we have different values, disagreements can happen occasionally.
× when I am energetic and I feel like I want to talk with my friend
✓ when I am energetic and I feel like I want to talk with my friends
这里的“friend”应该用复数形式“friends”,因为通常我们和多个朋友聊天,而不是只有一个朋友。
× But when I was when I'm in low power, low energy, I like to be myself alone.
✓ But when I am in low power, low energy, I like to be by myself alone.
句子中时态不一致,应该统一用现在时态“am”,并且“be myself alone”表达不自然,改为“be by myself alone”更符合习惯用法。
× Basically they're meaningless things like what's my plan today and what interesting Tiktok I I saw and also my feelings about something.
✓ Basically they're meaningless things like what's my plan today, what interesting TikToks I saw, and also my feelings about something.
“Tiktok”应为复数形式“TikToks”,因为指多个视频。
× Most of them are meaningless, but some some sometime it's.
✓ Most of them are meaningless, but sometimes some are meaningful.
原句结构混乱,且“some sometime it's”不合语法,改为“sometimes some are meaningful”更通顺。
× I think bows are OK. Bows are fine to me.
✓ I think both are OK. Both are fine to me.
“bows”应为“both”,表示“两者都”,原词拼写错误。
× but with only one people it's more like face to face.
✓ but with only one person it's more like face to face.
“people”是复数,表示“人们”,单数应使用“person”。
× Actually we communicate with each other in mostly in social media nowadays,
✓ Actually we communicate with each other mostly on social media nowadays,
介词“in”用错,应该用“on social media”,表示在社交媒体上。
× but if I have time in my friend, we both have time.
✓ but if my friend and I both have time,
“have time in my friend”表达错误,应该改为“if my friend and I both have time”,更符合英语表达习惯。
× it feels just more real and it's just have a completely different feeling.
✓ it just feels more real and it just has a completely different feeling.
动词“feels”和“has”需要与主语一致,且“just”位置调整使句子更自然。
× Most of the time I don't.
✓ Most of the time I don't argue.
句子缺少谓语动词“argue”,使句子完整。
× I think there are basically nothing to argue about when we actually become friends,
✓ I think there is basically nothing to argue about when we actually become friends,
“nothing”是不可数,谓语动词应使用单数形式“is”。
× But sometimes they really did something I don't I don't like we have different values about something we probably argue.
✓ But sometimes they really do something I don't like, we have different values about something, so we probably argue.
时态混乱,应该用现在时“do”和“don't like”,并且句子需要适当断句和连接词“so”使句意清晰。