Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do enjoy the chatting with my friends and especially for some friends with common interesting we share our experience and hobbies together. It's change our experience and planning for future activities which could maintain our friendship and.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Well, I normally chat with my friends with our common hobbies and life experience because that could make our life more interesting and exchange our experience could improve our friendship and.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
Well, I'd like to talk with a group of people with similar interesting and hobby, because more people can give more different perspectives and sharing more experience and skills to each other, which could make our conversation more interesting.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
Well, it's depends. If we want to talk more image and privacy topics, we should face to face, that's more privacy. And if we want to save time, we use social media because it could. The.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Uh, I shall rarely argue with my friends. Uh, if we have some arguments and, uh, some I different ideas, we could exchange our ideas and keep calm and, uh, and uh, conversation, umm, patiently, which could avoid and.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并且注意时态和单复数的正确使用。可以尝试用更清晰的句子表达你的观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially those who share common interests. We often exchange experiences and plan future activities together, which helps maintain our friendship.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不完整,表达不流畅,建议使用完整句子并且避免重复。可以增加具体细节,使回答更丰富。
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about our common hobbies and life experiences. Sharing these stories makes our conversations more interesting and strengthens our friendship.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但语法和用词有误,建议注意单复数和词汇搭配,使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with a group of people who share similar interests because it allows us to exchange different perspectives and skills, making the conversation more engaging.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,建议使用完整句子,明确表达观点,并避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For private or sensitive topics, I prefer face-to-face communication because it is more secure. However, for quick conversations, I use social media to save time.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中充满犹豫和语气词,句子不完整,建议练习流利表达,减少停顿,使用完整句子清晰表达观点。
Ví dụ: I rarely argue with my friends. If we have different opinions, we calmly discuss and listen to each other patiently to avoid conflicts.
× Yes, I do enjoy the chatting with my friends and especially for some friends with common interesting we share our experience and hobbies together.
✓ Yes, I do enjoy chatting with my friends, especially with some friends who share common interests; we share our experiences and hobbies together.
这里“the chatting”中的“the”是不必要的,应该直接用动名词“chatting”。另外,“common interesting”应改为“common interests”,因为“interesting”是形容词,名词形式应为“interests”。
× It's change our experience and planning for future activities which could maintain our friendship and.
✓ It changes our experiences and plans for future activities, which could maintain our friendship.
“It's change”应为“It changes”,动词需要第三人称单数形式;“planning”应改为名词复数“plans”;句子末尾不应以“and”结尾,需完整表达。
× Well, I normally chat with my friends with our common hobbies and life experience because that could make our life more interesting and exchange our experience could improve our friendship and.
✓ Well, I normally chat with my friends about our common hobbies and life experiences because that can make our lives more interesting, and exchanging our experiences can improve our friendship.
“chat with my friends with our common hobbies”中第二个“with”应改为“about”;“life experience”应为复数“life experiences”;“exchange our experience”应改为动名词形式“exchanging our experiences”;句尾不应以“and”结尾。
× Well, I'd like to talk with a group of people with similar interesting and hobby, because more people can give more different perspectives and sharing more experience and skills to each other, which could make our conversation more interesting.
✓ Well, I'd like to talk with a group of people with similar interests and hobbies, because more people can give different perspectives and share more experiences and skills with each other, which could make our conversation more interesting.
“similar interesting and hobby”应为“similar interests and hobbies”;“sharing”应改为动词原形“share”以保持句子结构一致;“more different”表达重复,应简化为“different”;“to each other”应为“with each other”。
× Well, it's depends. If we want to talk more image and privacy topics, we should face to face, that's more privacy. And if we want to save time, we use social media because it could. The.
✓ Well, it depends. If we want to talk about more personal and private topics, we should meet face to face; that's more private. And if we want to save time, we use social media because it is convenient.
“it's depends”应为“it depends”;“talk more image and privacy topics”应为“talk about more personal and private topics”;“face to face”前应加动词“meet”或“talk”;“that's more privacy”应为“that's more private”;句子末尾不完整,应补充完整表达。
× Uh, I shall rarely argue with my friends. Uh, if we have some arguments and, uh, some I different ideas, we could exchange our ideas and keep calm and, uh, and uh, conversation, umm, patiently, which could avoid and.
✓ Uh, I rarely argue with my friends. If we have some disagreements or different ideas, we can exchange our ideas calmly and have patient conversations, which can help avoid conflicts.
“I shall rarely argue”中“shall”用法不当,应去掉;“some I different ideas”应为“some different ideas”;“keep calm and conversation patiently”表达不完整,应改为“exchange our ideas calmly and have patient conversations”;句尾不应以“and”结尾。