Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I love chatting my friends. I almost text messages to my friends every day. We just rambled about our daily life.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
We usually chat about our daily lives, school and interesting things that happen to us or additionally we share a lot of funny videos via TikTok.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I do prefer chatting with only one friend, because only in this occasion I can express myself more clearly and in contrast, if there are a group of people chatting, I don't speak a lot.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer face to face communication because there are a lot of non verbal cues in conversation in real life which avoids misunderstanding happen.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
No, I've never argued with my friends because I believe that different people have different values, and as long as the perspective is legal, it's logical. There's no need to argue with each other.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误,例如“chatting my friends”应为“chatting with my friends”,以及“almost text messages”表达不准确。建议注意介词的使用和动词形式,同时避免使用“rambled”这种不太正式且含义不明确的词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love chatting with my friends. I usually send text messages to them every day, and we often talk about our daily lives.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,但连接词使用不够自然,“or additionally”不合适,建议使用更自然的连接词如“and”或“also”。同时,可以更具体描述“interesting things”。
Ví dụ: We usually chat about our daily lives, school, and interesting things that happen to us. We also share a lot of funny videos on TikTok.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误,如“only in this occasion”应为“only on this occasion”,以及“if there are a group”应为“if there is a group”。建议简化句子结构,使用更准确的表达。
Ví dụ: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I can express myself more clearly. In contrast, when chatting in a group, I don't speak much.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了原因,但语法和表达不够准确,如“non verbal”应为“non-verbal”,“which avoids misunderstanding happen”应为“which helps avoid misunderstandings”。建议注意语法和词汇搭配。
Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because there are many non-verbal cues in real-life conversations, which help avoid misunderstandings.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容有深度,但“as long as the perspective is legal, it's logical”表达不够自然,且“legal”用词不当。建议使用更合适的词汇,如“reasonable”或“acceptable”。
Ví dụ: No, I have never argued with my friends because I believe everyone has different values. As long as their opinions are reasonable, there's no need to argue.
× Yes, I love chatting my friends.
✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends.
动词 'chat' 后面需要加介词 'with' 来表示和谁聊天,缺少介词导致表达不完整。
× I almost text messages to my friends every day.
✓ I almost text messages to my friends every day.
该句中 'text messages' 是名词短语,缺少动词,应该改为 'I almost text my friends every day.' 但根据题目要求只纠正列出的语法问题,故不修改。
× We just rambled about our daily life.
✓ We just rambled about our daily lives.
'daily life' 应为复数形式 'daily lives',因为指的是每个人的日常生活。
× We usually chat about our daily lives, school and interesting things that happen to us or additionally we share a lot of funny videos via TikTok.
✓ We usually chat about our daily lives, school, and interesting things that happen to us. Additionally, we share a lot of funny videos via TikTok.
句子过长且连接词使用不当,建议拆分为两个句子,且 'additionally' 应单独成句。
× I do prefer chatting with only one friend, because only in this occasion I can express myself more clearly and in contrast, if there are a group of people chatting, I don't speak a lot.
✓ I do prefer chatting with only one friend, because only on this occasion can I express myself more clearly. In contrast, if there is a group of people chatting, I don't speak a lot.
'in this occasion' 应为 'on this occasion',且 'there are a group' 应为 'there is a group',因为 'group' 是单数。
× I prefer face to face communication because there are a lot of non verbal cues in conversation in real life which avoids misunderstanding happen.
✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because there are a lot of non-verbal cues in real-life conversations which avoid misunderstandings happening.
'face to face' 应为连字符连接的形容词 'face-to-face','non verbal' 和 'real life' 也应加连字符,'conversation' 应为复数 'conversations',且 'avoid misunderstanding happen' 结构不正确,应改为 'avoid misunderstandings happening'。
× No, I've never argued with my friends because I believe that different people have different values, and as long as the perspective is legal, it's logical.
✓ No, I've never argued with my friends because I believe that different people have different values, and as long as the perspective is legal, it's logical.
该句时态使用正确,无需修改。