Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like chatting with friends?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really enjoyed that it was my friends because it gave me a chance to share like stories and experience. Uh, we often talk about our children and extreme advice on parenting which help me feel supported and connected.
Giám khảo
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Thí sinh
Normally, I usually chat with my friends about family matters or personal experiences I have had. For example, I we often share stories about our daily life or challenges we face. Talking about this thing help me feel relaxed and build my energy.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Thí sinh
I prefer to track with only one friend because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations. When I talk to just one person, I come for care better and express myself more openly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Thí sinh
I prefer to communicate face to face instead of via structural media because when uh, we make umm face to face, uh, we can extract my emotion optimally.
Giám khảo
Do you argue with friends?
Thí sinh
Argue with friends maybe? Sometimes I agree with my friends because we had different uh opinions, but after discussing company we usually understand it or the better. I think it's no more to have disagreements but it's important to listen and respect each other view.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp lại và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, tránh dùng từ không cần thiết như 'like' và 'uh'. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it allows me to share stories and experiences. We often discuss our children and exchange parenting advice, which helps me feel supported and connected.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ như 'normally' và 'usually' cùng lúc. Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, mạch lạc và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý. Ngoài ra, hãy sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'help' thành 'helps'.
Ví dụ: I usually chat with my friends about family matters and personal experiences. For example, we often share stories about our daily lives and challenges, which helps me feel relaxed and energized.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý phát âm và chính tả, ví dụ 'track' nên là 'talk'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'come for care better'. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và có liên từ để nối ý.
Ví dụ: I prefer to talk with only one friend because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations. This way, I can communicate better and express myself more openly.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều từ thừa và lỗi từ vựng như 'structural media' thay vì 'social media'. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ ngữ không chính xác và nói lắp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ đúng và câu ngắn gọn.
Ví dụ: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because it allows me to express my emotions more clearly.
Do you argue with friends?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'agree' thay vì 'disagree', 'discussing company' không rõ nghĩa. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, dùng từ đúng và câu mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Sometimes I argue with my friends because we have different opinions. However, after discussing, we usually understand each other better. I believe disagreements are normal, but it's important to listen and respect each other's views.
× Yes, I really enjoyed that it was my friends because it gave me a chance to share like stories and experience.
✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it gives me a chance to share stories and experiences.
The original sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'enjoyed' and 'gave' when the context is about a habitual action or preference, which requires present tense. Also, 'like stories and experience' is awkward; 'stories and experiences' is more appropriate.
× Uh, we often talk about our children and extreme advice on parenting which help me feel supported and connected.
✓ Uh, we often talk about our children and exchange advice on parenting which helps me feel supported and connected.
The phrase 'extreme advice' is incorrect; likely intended 'exchange advice'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'advice'.
× Normally, I usually chat with my friends about family matters or personal experiences I have had.
✓ Normally, I chat with my friends about family matters or personal experiences I have had.
The use of both 'normally' and 'usually' is redundant; one adverb is sufficient.
× For example, I we often share stories about our daily life or challenges we face.
✓ For example, we often share stories about our daily lives or challenges we face.
The original sentence has an extra pronoun 'I' and uses singular 'daily life' which should be plural 'daily lives' to match plural subject 'we'.
× Talking about this thing help me feel relaxed and build my energy.
✓ Talking about these things helps me feel relaxed and build my energy.
'This thing' should be plural 'these things' to match the context, and the verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'Talking'.
× I prefer to track with only one friend because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations.
✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable in one-on-one conversations.
The verb 'track' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'talk'.
× When I talk to just one person, I come for care better and express myself more openly.
✓ When I talk to just one person, I can care better and express myself more openly.
The phrase 'come for care better' is incorrect; likely intended 'can communicate better' or 'can express myself better'. Here, 'can care better' is used as a correction but ideally should be 'can communicate better'.
× I prefer to communicate face to face instead of via structural media because when uh, we make umm face to face, uh, we can extract my emotion optimally.
✓ I prefer to communicate face to face instead of via social media because when we meet face to face, we can express my emotions optimally.
'Structural media' is incorrect; the correct term is 'social media'. Also, 'make face to face' is incorrect; 'meet face to face' is appropriate. 'Extract my emotion' should be 'express my emotions'.
× Argue with friends maybe? Sometimes I agree with my friends because we had different uh opinions, but after discussing company we usually understand it or the better.
✓ Argue with friends? Maybe sometimes. I sometimes disagree with my friends because we have different opinions, but after discussing, we usually understand each other better.
The original sentence has multiple errors: 'agree' should be 'disagree' to fit context; 'had' should be 'have' for present tense; 'discussing company' is incorrect, likely 'discussing calmly'; 'understand it or the better' is unclear, corrected to 'understand each other better'.
× I think it's no more to have disagreements but it's important to listen and respect each other view.
✓ I think it's normal to have disagreements but it's important to listen and respect each other's views.
'No more to have disagreements' is incorrect; 'normal to have disagreements' is correct. Also, 'each other view' should be 'each other's views' to show possession and plural form.