Chatting— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có sự lặp lại từ ngữ và thiếu sự rõ ràng trong cấu trúc câu. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel cared for. We talk every day and often share stories about our work experiences.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ, tránh lỗi sai như 'a unusual' nên là 'an unusual'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hơn, sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Ví dụ: We usually talk about silly stories or unusual situations. Additionally, we sometimes discuss controversial problems in our local area.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng, số nhiều/số ít chính xác và hoàn thành câu để ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn.

Ví dụ: I am an introverted person, so I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because a single friend can understand me better and have a deeper conversation.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để ý tưởng được truyền đạt rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to express real emotions and others can understand my intentions through my tone and body language.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính thức như 'Umm' và cải thiện ngữ pháp như 'something disagree' nên là 'some disagreements'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often argue with my friends, even my best ones. I believe that when we have disagreements, we should discuss them positively to learn new things and understand different perspectives.

× Yes of course I do like chatting with friends because it gives me the the sense of being being cared and also I chat with my friends every day and we also share story when we work together or no?

✓ Yes, of course I do like chatting with friends because it gives me the sense of being cared for and also I chat with my friends every day and we also share stories when we work together, don't we?

The phrase 'being being cared' is incorrect; it should be 'being cared for' to express the passive meaning properly. Also, 'share story' should be plural 'share stories' because 'stories' is countable and plural here. The tag question 'or no?' is informal and should be 'don't we?' for correctness and clarity.

× We usually talk about some silly story or a unusual situation together, but also we shared about controversial problem in where we live or.

✓ We usually talk about some silly stories or unusual situations together, but we also share about controversial problems where we live.

The verb tense should be consistent; 'shared' is past tense but the context is habitual, so 'share' (present tense) is correct. Also, 'a unusual' should be 'an unusual' due to vowel sound. 'Story' and 'situation' should be plural to match 'some'. 'Controversial problem' should be plural 'controversial problems' to match the context.

× I'm the kind of person who don't very outgoing but introvert, so I prefer chat with one friends to chat with a group of people because one people can understand me, they can chat with me, they can.

✓ I'm the kind of person who isn't very outgoing but introverted, so I prefer to chat with one friend rather than with a group of people because one person can understand me, they can chat with me.

The verb 'don't' should be 'isn't' to agree with singular subject 'who'. 'Prefer chat' should be 'prefer to chat' to use correct verb form. 'One friends' should be 'one friend' (singular). 'One people' should be 'one person' (singular). 'Introvert' should be 'introverted' as an adjective.

× Face to face, obviously, because face to face can express the real emotions and they can know my intention through the intonation or the way I I choose the way that.

✓ Face to face, obviously, because face to face can express real emotions and they can understand my intention through intonation or the way I choose to express it.

'Know my intention through the intonation' is better expressed as 'understand my intention through intonation'. The phrase 'the way I I choose the way that' is incomplete and redundant; it should be 'the way I choose to express it' for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, a lot. Umm, even with my best friends. Because I believe that if we have something disagree, we must share it and we argue, but in a positive way for learning more new things or to understand other perspective.

✓ Yes, a lot. Umm, even with my best friends. Because I believe that if we have some disagreements, we must share them and argue, but in a positive way to learn new things or to understand other perspectives.

'Something disagree' is incorrect; it should be 'some disagreements' (noun). 'We argue' should be 'argue' to match the modal 'must'. 'For learning more new things' should be 'to learn new things' for correct infinitive use. 'Other perspective' should be plural 'other perspectives'.